The Random Vampire Story [2]

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Brent

He wasn't fine. Nor was Caiden, I noted as I looked at the tears streaming down her face.

"You're in my cousin's house," I said. "We thought getting you away from anything reminding you of her would help you calm donw when you thought she was dead."

"Who is she?"
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Colt--

"What do you mean who is she?" Brent demanded, "She is your fiancee' and the mother of your kid!"

"What! Your kidding right!" He looked at the girl. "Don't get me wrong, your really pretty, and seem to be sweet. But I don't know you."

"W-what?" She screeched, Colt's heart flew out when he saw the tears.

"I think I better go." He said walking towards the door.


James--

James smiled inwardly but outwardly his heart went to Caiden. He walked over to her to comfort her.

"You ok?"
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Caiden looked at him for a moment before chasing after Colt.

"Colt," she said, "youdo know me!"

"I'm sorry but I don't."

Caiden grabbed his hand and put it over her heart. "Feel this? It beats only for you."

"Listen la-"

She moved her hand lower to her stomach, "feel this?"
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Colt--

"No, I"m sorry." He said pulling his hand away. "please don't cry." He said brushing the tears off her face. "I'm going to go now though." He turned and left. He had to find the girl that kept popping in his mind. He had never seen her before that he had known of. He sighed and started his walk.
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Caiden stared after him for a moment, she wanted to chase after him. She had promised that she wouldn't let their love grow cold. Was this how Colt felt when she had lost her memory? She didn't think so. When she had lost hers she remembered trusting him and letting him take care of her.

She was just about to follow him when Jason grabbed her arm and made her stop.

"Let go Jason!"

"It's raining," he pointed out, "it would be really bad if you were to get pnemonia especially in your condition."

"He's right," Brent said, "he'll come back."

Caiden could only hope they were right and rushed past them to the room her and Colt should be sharing.
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Colt--

Colt walked around the corner towards where his house was. He ran smack into another girl and he fell over her on top of him. He's eyes bulged, it was her!!
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Adrieana

"I'm sorry," she said blushing. "I wasn't paying attention to where I'm going."

"It's fine," he said standing up and a little too close to her for comfort.

"Well...I'm going to go now. I'm late." She started walking off, aware that he was following her.


Caiden

She stayed in that room for hours, just lying there and crying. She got hungry after an hour but ignored it. She didn't want to go on without him, she didn't plan on it either. She would just lie there in bed and maybe one day she'd evaporiate.
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Jason--

Jason knocked on Caiden's door. "You need to eat. You'll kill the baby if you don't."


Colt--

"Wait!" Colt called running after her. "Do I know you?"

Please say yes

"That line is old." She replied not stopping.

"I'm serious, I know I know you. Please..."
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Caiden

"I don't care!" she shouted, and she meant it too. She didn't care if she died, she somehow knew Colt wasn't coming back.

Brent

"Did I just hear her say she doesn't care?" Brent asked. Jason nodded. Brent growled. "She's worse than Colt was."

Adrienana

She shook her head, "I'm sorry I don't." She broke out into an almost full run.
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Colt---

I didn't mean to scare you." He sighed, He stopped and watched her run. "Please come back!"


Jason--

Jason poundered, he walked back to the kitchen and made some bacon and eggs. "Maybe she'll eat this." He smiled.
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Adriana

She froze, something about this man scared her, just as much as it facinated her. She was sure he was facinated with her as well. Shaking her head she stopped. Unwilling to go back but unwilling to go foward.

Caiden

The smell of bacon and eggs cooking in the kitchen gnawed at my stomach, but still I didn't move.

"Come on Caiden," Jason begged. "You need to eat something."

Caiden rolled over and forced herself to sleep.
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Jason--

"Come on Caiden, Colt wouldn't want you to do this." Brent argued at the door. "I want to know what happened to him. He can't just forget. He remembers me, so maybe he just forgot about when he knew her."


Colt--

Colt slowly walked towards her, "Are you sure you've never seen me before?" He asked gently.
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Caiden

She didn't get much sleep with Brent and Jason and Slade yelling at her door trying to get her to come out. She needed to get away. Being as silent and graceful as she could, she slipped out the window and went on her own search for Colt.

Adriana

"I may have seen you pass by on the streets if you've lived here before...but other than that no."
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Colt--

Colt frowned and tried to think. "I guess I'm going in sanen or something." He looked at her and he felt his heart leap in hi sthroat. He didn't know what was happening to him. This had never happened before that he could think of. "Would you mind if I walked you home?"
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Adriana

"Well...um...alright."

He grinned and took my arm in an old fashioned way that made me feel uneasy.
I just lost the game.



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