I focused on trying to replace the sadness in my heart with anger. anger for who ever killed Mr. laurnce. if i ever saw their disgustng , ugly ,cowardly face i would- "Zelda." Drake's voice brought me back. i noticed i had punched a hole in the wall. "ugh!" i groaned. some times when i got so annoyed i needed to take it out on something to feel better, but the huge hole in the wall didn't make me feel better. " We need to get out of here." Drake said quickly in a low tone. Cassie stopped crying to look up at him confused. " what-" i began but he cut across. "we don't have much time. the cops are going to come back for us." he began tugging on our arms to the back exit where there was a vast forest. i pulled back my arm , " but we didn't do anything!" i shouted. Drake stopped and turned to face mehe was annoyed i could tell,maybe because i yelled. and he wanted things quiet. "Do you think they're going to beleive us! they're the ones who pleaded for our death sentence when we tried to rob Mr. Laurence." he spat
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)
I reviewed it and wow, my review looks a lot longer than it really is. I get kinda wordy sometimes, sorry! You do need a nickname, Zohali, and I love your post, though I haven't read any of the ones before it. Definitely a very interesting plot going on there. How about Zee3. It rhymes. (I'm not good with nicknames.)
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people. -Abraham Joshua Heschel
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!
And, zohali, love this post too! Very interesting! As for nicknames, I like Zee3 too. Um, how about Biggles (like, big sis but a fun way of saying it), or Menke (which means inquiring because you ask the best questions)?
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
When I say that I mean I screawed up big time and is now working in double time to fix said screaw up.
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An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!
