The Stadium DT [1]

yeah i know i see those mistakes

It's good so far. I like it. Just a spelling error or two, but I think you saw those.

Okay, I'm back. My sister stole my computer AGAIN.

Lol. I guard my laptop more than I guard my life. My brother stole it while I was writing *shudders* a very mushy romance story and I ran up the stairs after him as if I was being chased by the devil himself. Lol. Then I came down, sat, and couldn't remember what happened.

Auggh! Now she's trying to steal my YWS account! If I start acting odd, call the cops.

Aaaaaaaaaand hi.

Lol, CPM. And you're back, MM!

ok so if someones angry and they say, "Ugh!" do you write

"ugh" she said

"ugh" she made a noise
"ugh!" she expressed/exclaimed

we could make a code if one of us acts weird.

Exclaimed. At least, I would.

Well, it depends if she goes UUUUUGGH! then it would be said. If it's more of a groan, it could probably be any of the others. I think. I'm no master of the ugh.

could you give me the name of how something is said when your talking like your scared or angry or....
eg.

he said in a hoarse voice
(stuff like that plz)

Swear words, lol. Don't take that advice. Um, a socially acceptable word in place of a swear?

*pst* CPM, would you mind reviewing the prologue in my spoiler? It's not long and it's really rough. I need feedback.

Not spoiler. I mean signature.

who's CPM