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emilybrodo · 2012-03-05T05:42:15Z

Hey guys! I know that reviewing people makes you a better writer so I thought I'd try this out. I'd prefer to review young teenagers work and under simply because I have not yet reached the complexity of an adults brain. Although if you are extremely keen on a young teens view of your work then I'll review. My reviews may be short and sweet or long depending on how big your piece of work is and so on. I will review: -Poems -Short stories -Novels -scripts-I have some experience in scripts but be weary of my reviews -Art and photography although I am not as clear on these as I am with writing Please be patient if I take my time to review. My reviews: I'll point out any errors you may have. I'll point out any other weird stuff that may or may not be an error. I'll say how you can make your work better and give an example. I'll point out what I didn't like and why. I'll point out what I love. I'll give you tips for your writing in the future. I'll tell you what you need to do in general to make your piece better. I try to be as least harsh as possible, if not, I'll be not harsh at all. And guys, please be patient. If my reviews suck I am having a few severe brain issues but I am working on it. Post away!!!

emilybrodo

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Thu May 24, 2012 8:58 am

emilybrodo says... · Thu May 24, 2012 8:58 am

Hey guys, I finished all of your reviews, except for Hockey. Sorry Hockey, i'm having a bit of trouble getting round to yours. I plan to have it done this week.
If any of you guys want another review, just ask!
Ready for more, bring it on!!!

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

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emilybrodo

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Thu May 31, 2012 11:45 am

emilybrodo says... · Thu May 31, 2012 11:45 am

All your reviews are done guys, hope they helped!
Who's next?

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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NewAtThis

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Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:21 am

NewAtThis says... · Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:21 am

work.php?id=95666

work.php?id=95637

Thank you!

emilybrodo

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Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:49 am

emilybrodo says... · Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:49 am

Thanks for choosing me to review XD

Done, who's next?

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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silverfin713

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Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:46 pm

silverfin713 says... · Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:46 pm

Please.......

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95731

Thanks in advance! You're awesome!

emilybrodo

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Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:02 am

emilybrodo says... · Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:02 am

Finished, who's next?
:wink:

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

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BethJeff

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Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:04 pm

BethJeff says... · Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:04 pm

Would love a review if you could pleaseee!

work.php?id=95816

~Beth

emilybrodo

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Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:36 am

emilybrodo says... · Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:36 am

Done, anyone else?

“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” - Albert Einstein

The game

Free reviews here

silverfin713

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Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:55 am

silverfin713 says... · Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:55 am

Nice reviews! Another please!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95894

Thanks!