Reviews From the Rockster (Open for business)

I pretty much will review anything but:

- Nonfiction
- Photos/Art (I love them but wouldn't know how to help you improve)
- Script

And I have more experience in poetry and short stories, though I will read through novels if you would be so kind as to leave a link for the section you'd like to be reviewed and whatever comes before it so that I'm not that lost.

Request away!

I hope you're not serious. You probably don't even live near the same place, but I would buy you a candy bar or something if I could

Could you review this for me? It's a song, but it's more of a REALLY long poem.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93184
Thanks in advanced.

Done!

Thank you so much I still wish I could give you that candy bar

No problem

Next

If you're not too busy!!!

My new work, may need some tweeks but is seriously in need of some constructive criticism...


Thanx

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93649

Done! Great job on that by the way!

Next!

BOOM! Sorry, it's quite long, I hope you can handle this one.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93883

Done! And it wasn't too long for me. Great job!

Next!

Back open for business! Request away!

work.php?id=95512

Hi I am new here and need reviews on my story. Could you please review it?

Done! And welcome to YWS, Candyman! : )

hey could you review the first chapter of my novel for me? thanks,
work.php?id=95420

Hi there. I just wrote my 1st poem. Think you can review it and give me some help? It's pretty short so it should only take a minute or two to review. Mind you, I know nothing about poetry but I gave it a try anyway.

work.php?id=95523

Done, psudiname!

Working on yours now, ShortBus!