Rogues and Pets vs. Dolls [closed/starting]

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(Hee hee I loved it Blondie!! You made Davie sound totaly awesome, and scary. he might actually thank you for being afraid of him. We sorta had a plan for Dav to take care of her, to help gain your trust though, I was just too slow to respond. If we could stick my post in front of yours Bee, that would be fine. :D )

Davnick

I stare a the little silver-blond piece of fluff that just ran into the clearing and started shouting. She was wearing a ridiculous pink dress, and her hair came almost to her waist. She was barefoot, and currently staring at me like i was a nightmare come to life.

Well aren't you? I thought. I was keeping an eye on the Pet, but my main focus was on the Rogue girl. She was just... staring. Then, her hair started to lift off her head. What the? I could feel a massive static charge building up around the girl. Oh, crap!!

A wave of electricity burst from the girl, traveling along the ground. Before I could do anything, it hit me, and my muscles locked up. Crap, crap, crap!! I was frozen, but I could tell with my sonar that everybody was struggling too. I sent out my own little wave of electric power, reversing the charge so it cancled the girls. She sent another wave, again along the ground. I kept my electric field up, so the wave dissappated when it hit me.

Tiege ran up next to me, Seena close by him. He proceded to shout for the girl to stop, threating her. Stupid bear. Don't you know what happens when an electric Rogue gets scared! The charge gets stronger!! The girl sent out the most massive charge yet. It brought Tige to his knees. I could barely stand it with my barrier, so I strenghtened it. Tige was roaring in shock and anger, which scared the girl even more, so she sent out a friggen BIGGER wave!!

Sheesh, this girl is ridiculous.

I took a step twoards her, but her Pet lunged at me, now bigger than Tige. I dove forward, its razor claws and teeth missing me by inches. Thank goodness for sonar. My jump had actually taken me closer to the girl, who was sending out continous big waves now. She was still frozen in fear, though. I looked around to see everybody else writhing on the ground, unable to control their muscle functions any longer.

Okay, enough is enough. As much as I enjoy seeing all of them in pain, if they realize I could have stopped her and didn't, goodbye trust. Weak as it is. I expanded my field behind me, so her waves dissapated beofore they hit the others. They seemed purely ground based, where as my power travled through the air too. Her Pet attacked me again, so I sent a nice shock its way.

It didn't seem to do anything, unfortunately, so I now had a tons worth of white fur and teeth flying my way. Oh great... I thought, bracing myself for impact. Well, at least I'm going down fighting. That's all I've ever wanted. I just never expected to be taken out while fighting next to a semi-concious Pet, trying to save a bunch of strangers.

Just before the beast ripped out my throat, I closed my eyes and spread my arms, almost embracing death. I extinguished my sonar, waiting for then end. It never came.

The Pet hit me with a soft thud. I looked at my chest to see the fox, now back to doll size, clinging to my chest. At the same moment, the Rogue apparently zapped herself, and stopped sending out shockwaves. She sat down, dazed looking.

I picked up the Pet, while everybody else tried to get their footing. Jared took a few steps and fell foreward, face in the dirt. Prolonged exposure to electric waves like that can kill your motor skills. I thought with grim satisfaction. I looked at the little fox, careful to keep her away from my nose.

It gave a little grin. "Hee hee... best two-out of...three?" It asked sheepishly.

I smiled back. "Sure." I walked over ot her stunned Rogue, and picked her up around the waist. The fox growled in my other hand.

"Don't you... hurt- Sheara!" It barked.

"I'm not going to hurt the girl." I said, taking them over to where Everlee and Skylar were helping eachother up. Tige was already on his feet, helping Tess, and Seena was helping Elise. Jared was still facedown. I dropped the fox in front of out leader, and put the girl down gently.

Everlee was leaning on Skylar, brathing heavily. "Okay, now." She panted. "Who are you!?"

(Sorry!! Blondie and I had a plan, and I guess we just weren't specific enough about it!! :( )
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-Poca

I lunged at the dark Rogue with my final blow.
Prepare-for..death! I thought with rage as I bared my fangs, ready to tear out his throat. But suddenly I felt my body stiffen.

Oh no...no, no! My body compressed itself in mid air. I had used up all my energy and now my body was forced back into it's normal form. I hit the Rogue's chest with a thud.
I felt Sheara shock herself in an attemp to stop the rapid release of waves. She fell to the ground, stunned.

Not...good. The Rogue grinned at me wickedly and picked me up by the scruff of the neck, holding me infront of his face.

"Uh...Hee hee... best two-out of...three?" I asked, trying not to blush for embarassment. He smiled.

"Sure."


-Sheara

Stop! Please! You're hurting people!!! I cried inwardly, straining myself to stop.
Suddenly Poca's power desolved. She had used up all the energy she had left.
A pulse of elecricity jumped from one foot to the other, coneccting with a ZAPP! My mustles went limp and I fell to the ground. At that moment I felt my energy fade as well. I couldn't even send out another wave if I tried. I was now completely and entirly helpless.
A shadow passed over me and I felt myself being picked up by my middle. I closed my eyes tightly, but I couldn't do a thing. The world was still spinning around me when I felt him set me down. I opened my eyes and looked at the brown haired girl who was leaning against the skinny boy doll.

"Okay, now. Who are you!?"

What do we do Poca?! I thought in panic. She tried to reply, but I only got one word.
Calm. I realized she didn't even have enough energy to speak to me. She...couldn't tell me what to do...
I felt my panic rising. I couldn't move, couldn't speak to my pet, and was surrounded by dangerous Rogues. Not to mention I had just zapped them all repeatedly. I was completly at their mercy.
I felt my body try to send out another wave, but instead just left my skin a little staticy.

"I'm...so sorry!" I cried out finally. I tried to contain myself, but fear had gripped me so tightly it was pointless. My body felt like lead from the lack of energy. My vision began to fade. With the last of my strength, I whimpered,

"Please...don't kill us..."
My world of terror went black.

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Everlee

The waves of energy stop and I roll onto my stomache with a moan. I carefully pull myself to my feet and try to stand still.

"Is everyone okay?" I ask quietly. Jared stands up and falls flat on his face. He doesn't move, but groans quietly.

Skylar walks over to me, holding his hand above his left eye where a small stream of blood drips from.

That was me, huh? I ask Darren.

Darren bounces up to his feet and hops over to me, completely fine after the shock. Lucky pet. Probably.

I run over and wrap my arms around Skylar. He pulls me back. "Are you okay?" he asks quickly.

"I'm so sorry!" I say, ignoring his question. "I'm sorry I threw you up in the air! I was trying to stop you from getting hit! I didn't think she'd be able to destroy my ice!"

"Are you okay?" he demands quickly.

I nod. "Alittle dizzy, but I'll live." I bite my lip and carefully brush away the hair surrounding his cut. "Does it hurt?"

He doesn't get a chance to answer before Davnick walks up. I turn around and lean carefully on Skylar. Davnick drops the young girl in front of me.

"Okay now," I say, a little breathless. "Who are you?"

The girl looks like she's about ready to cry. She's scared to death, I think to Darren.

Well duh! Darren says. She just attacked a strong group of rogues working with Davnick!

She couldn't of recognized him, I think.

Did you see her face?

"I'm...so sorry!" The girl cried. I instantly feel bad for the girl. I crouch down to the ground next to her. "Please,.. don't kill us..." The girl says quietly. Her body goes limp as she passes out.

"Great," Tess mutters behind me.

I reach forward and put my arm on the girl's shoulder, rubbing slightly.

"What now?" Jared asks.

"We wait for her to wake up," Elise says.

I nod. "Somebody get her some food so she can eat when she wakes up. Davnick, try not to scare her again."

He grunts and walks away to a tree and starts to polish his sword.
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-Sheara

I was in the living room, next to my favorite little wooden chair that Mom said Daddy wanted me to have. She said he had made it himself. I hoped that one day I would be big enough to climb into it all by myself. The scent of freshly baked cookies filled my nose. I smiled as my mom danced into the room, holding a plate above her head.

"Happy birthday Sheara!" She set down the plate, then laughed in surprise and Poca jumped off with two sticking out of her mouth. She looked so funny! Even one cookie was bigger than her! Poca landed in my lap, making me laugh. She then shoved a cookie into my open mouth. I giggled and munched on the treat. It was delicious, Mommy always made the best cookies. She told me that Daddy had liked them too.

Mommy picked me up and began to spin me around while singing. Poca held on for dear life, clinging to my sleeve and we spun round and round. I was so happy, my life was simply perfect.

But then there were sounds from outside. Angry sounds. Mommy stopped spinning me and looked toward the door. She looked scared. She scooped me up and ran toward the back door.

"What's wrong, Mommy?" I asked, widening my eyes.

She smiled at me nervously.
"Everything is fine dear, but we need to-" Suddenly the back door was smashed to the floor and angry people rushed in, shouting and holding mean-looking objects.

"What's going on, Mommy?!" I cried. She ran around the corner, holding me tightly as she did. There were loud and scary sounds coming from the mean objects the people were holding. Mommy cried out in pain, but kept running. She ran outside and to the Safe Ship. Daddy had made it. Mommy had said that if there was any danger, we could all go to safety by using our wind power! I wasn't very good at it though. I always needed help making tornadoes, but Mommy was very good at it!

Mommy put me into the basket and strapped me in. Then she started to make some wind over the spinney things at the top of the Safe Ship with one hand. She held me with her other hand and pulled me close to her.

"Listen, Pumpkin, I need you to be strong, okay? Be strong for Daddy and I. Don't be scared." Mommy was crying now.

"Mommy, why are you crying? Mommy...I'm scared..."

"I-I'm going away for a little bit, dear. But I want you to know that I love you with all my heart and soul! Me and Daddy both!"

I reached out and tried to dry her face with my hand.

"Where are you going, Mommy?" The spinney things at the top were spinning very fast now, Mommy was holding onto the basket to keep it down. The angry people ran outside and started to yell at Mommy.

"I'm going to visit Daddy, Sweetheart. I'm going to visit Daddy. I'll tell him you said hi, okay?" Mommy chocked and let go of the basket. Me and Poca flew up and away from her. I cried out and tried to reach for her. She tried to reach back, but the mean objects made another scary sound and Mommy fell down!

"Mommy! Are you okay?!" I called out. Mommy tried to get back up, but then lots more scary sounds came from the mean object and Mommy fell again. Trees covered her and all the angry people up. I couldn't see Mommy anymore!

"Mommy, are you okay?! MOMMY!" I cried out as our house got smaller and smaller.

"NO, MOM!" I jolted upright, startling the rogues around me.

"She's awake, Everlee!" Called out the blue eyed boy. The girl named Everlee came over from a short ways away.

"I know, I heard." She said.

I quickly looked around, remembering the fighting and the scary wanted Rogue. I began to tremble. Everlee crouched in front of me.
"Hey there, little one. It's alright, we won't hurt you." She soothed as she stretched her hand out to me. I shrank back.

"No, no, it's okay. We won't hurt you, we won't hurt you." She repeated, taking her hand back quickly.

I swallowed and looked around for Poca. She was laying next to me, looking up at me in relief.
Finally...y..awake. She still could barely speak, but was getting better.

I remembered the scary Rogue and franticly searched for him. He was leaning up against a tree, polishing his blade with a cloth. He glanced my direction and I felt my blood turn to ice.

"Don't worry about Davnick! He's harmless!" Everlee tried to reassure, but then the scary Ro-er...Davnick began to laugh hysterically. Everyone in the camp looked at Everlee in a "You've got to be kidding me" way. That didn't really help me feel any better.

"Harmless? Are you crazy?" Said the tough-looking girl Rogue to Everlee.

"Well, I was trying to calm her down! If you hadn't noticed, she is kinda scared for her life, Tess!"
They began to argue. Everlee turned back to me with sympathy in her eyes.
"Are you hungery?"

I was taken back, but shook my head.

"No, I'm okay." I said quickly.
My tummy gave a low grumble. I heard the scary Ro...Davnick, laugh again.

"Fail."

I blushed and hid my face in my hair. Truth be told I was famished. My tummy growled again. I hugged my knees and hid behind them, ashamed.

Everlee snapped at him.
"Hey, who asked you?" She growled.
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(I hope this is okay! I didn't know what you guys wanted...so I didn't really talk about your characters very much, sorry!)
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Tess:

I went over and began kicking the blob that was Jared. I can't believe he can't even stand a little girl's static! I thought.
You're still shaky too, you know. Nyx thought back. She was right. i was still shaky.
Jared stood up slowly and stumbled over to where Davnick had brought the poor girl and droppedd her. She mumbled something to Everlee, and then passed out!
She's amazing! Doing that much damage, with so little energy. It's phenomenal! Nyx thought, flying back from out of the little girl's range.
Except for she nearly killed us all! And blew our stuff away! i looked up into a tree and sighed. There was our food. And a little ways away was our blankets and pillows, along with what was left of our tents. This might be a problem.
I jogged over to the tree with all of our stuff, trying my best to seem unfazed by the shockwaves. I climbed the tree quickly. I then faced the issue of bringing the stuff down. I couldn't just drop it, there was fruit in there!
I got it. Nyx flew off of a nearby branch and grabbed the bag from my hand, laying it gently on the ground. I jumped down and began searching through the pack.
"What are you doing?" Jared said.
"What does it look like I'm doing? I'm getting a snack. Elictricity makes me hungry." I grab an apple and began eating. i hadn't really eaten anything all day, even if it was only, maybe, noon. Then again, you're always huingry.
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jared:

I fell flat on my face! There goes my reputation. You don't have a reputation. Amy thought to me. She ran up along side me as if nothing had happened.
Where've you been?
Gift shop.
I grumbled. Tess kicked me and I got up slowly. I can'r believe my legs were so shaky. But, my strength slowly came back to me as I began walking as fast as i could towards Elise.
"Are you okay?" I say, as soon as she sees me.
She nods. "Come help me get Seena up." I nod back and soon everyone is standing. Except the static toddler. Shocking.
She used up a lot of energy. And by the looks of things, she didn't have any in the first place. I thought. i looked at the poor girl while Tess tried getting the food down. She was small, young, cute. She was wearing a torn and dirty pink dress. Her eyes seemed sunken in, as if she hadn't had a crumb of food for days.
How sad. Amy thought. i turn on my heel and stride over to the bag of food. That girl needed some water and food, now.
"What are you doing?" I said impaitntly to Tess, who is taking forever rummaging through the food as if she was the one who hadn't eaten in weeks. She said something about being hungry, then steppeed back, taking a large bite out of an apple. i dived for the bag and found some bread as quickly as I could, with a canteen of water and rushed back over to the girl.
She had better wake up soon, or else I'm not sure if she's gonna make it through the day.
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Hey, so, I uh, didn't see Blonde's post, so, uh, hehe, just pretend my last post came first. If that's not okay, tell me! :smt003
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Oh my goodness! I'm so sorry Bee!!! I didn't mean to ignore your post!! So many things were going on, and I have a pretty short memory! If you want we can make Sheara and Reva have a little cute bonding moment. I really liked the idea with the bread and I am sorry we didn't use it! You can still put something like that into the story. Again, sorry!
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Hey no worries guys! It happens and blondie you had better not be feeling bad because I'm not even insulted! So dont! Im serious tho, no beating yourself up for it. We'll just ignore my last post, and move on. There will be plenty of time for Sheara and Reva to bond.

Reva

I watched everyone treat the girl like she was different than us. She had floored all of us in a matter of seconds, and although Everlee spoke to her, and yet there was that underlying wall between us and her. I had felt that wall before. The girl was powerful, but terrified. Her powers couldn't be mature, not with how weak she was, how she struggled to even survive.

She reminds me of you. Darsor said, slowly padding towards her, purring. He had our water skin in his mouth. He didn't act cautiously, didn't eye her warily, just walked up. He was a tiger cub after all, it wasn't as if he looked threatening.

No. Not me.

Yes. Yes you Reva. The you before Kaston ruined you.


Was I really that small, weak, terrified little thing? I tried to remember the days before Kaston took me in, the days that I was alone, being taken care of by a pet cub who couldn't get any bigger.

I was hungry, so hungry, every second of every minute of every day. No matter how much I ate, it wasn't enough. Oh how my belly ached with hunger and my muscles trembled with my weakness. Darsor was much the same. We were always searching for more food, because the only time we felt anything other than hunger, it was anger. Sometimes, when we got angry because someone betrayed us and soldiers came after us, Darsor and I would get so mad that we would disappear and we would upset our bellies. Those were the good days. I shook off the horrible memory and looked at the girl, Sheara, her pet called her, with kinder eyes. I knew what it felt like to be constantly hungry, and terrified that you were going to be caught and killed. Even through the hunger I had managed to be scared of everyone, even my own kind. Darsor, feed her this. I pulled a travelling cake from my pack and held it out to him. Travelling cakes were my favorite food, they were sweet, and delicious and they filled the belly with just one of them. They gave rogues much needed energy, and helped replace depleted magic.

Darsor came back and took it gently in his teeth. This is your last one.

She needs it more than I do. Bread can only fill both a girl and a pet so much, and I don't want her to be hungry.

Are you certain you want your last cake to go to her?

I'm positive Darsor, now go.


He eyed me carefully and trotted up to her, holding the cake proudly. Jarred was giving her bread, but I was certain that she would need more nourishment than that, and if she didn't she could hold onto the cake and eat to keep herself full, not just alive.
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Elise:

I stood behind Jared, as he fed the girl bread. I smiled at the sight.

Mom used to do that, I thought. Myrtle sighed.

Yeah. It was great... until your friend's father took her in, Myrtle replied. I roll my eyes.

Way to ruin the feeling, I teasingly scolded her.

I sat on the opposite side of the girl. I examined her. She was pretty small, but powerful. I smile at Jared, who was still feeding the girl.

Skylar:

I sat on the ground beside Everlee. I smile at her, before looking at the girl and giving her a smile too.

"So, she's one of us now, right?" I asked. Everlee nodded.

"Hey there," I said to the girl. She smiled back. "We're good people, we honestly won't hurt you."

(Hey hope this is okay! I kinda skimmed the posts, so if there's anything I need to change, please tell me!)
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Hey! Okay, so I will post tomorrow, but I wanted all of you to know that I have started a DT for Rogues and Pets vs. Dolls. Hopefully this will stop further confusions! Thanks!

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Reva

"Sheara, guys. Her name is Sheara," I blurted when I realized the girl hadn't told them.

Everlee gave me a strange look.

I sighed. "You asked what her name is."

"What, are you a mind reader now?" Tess asked.

"No, you just don't pay any attention. Her pet asked us not to hurt Sheara when it shrank, and the pet's name is Poca, because that's who the girl was telling us to leave alone. Honestly, what are you deaf?"

Tess glared at me, and I felt a small twinge of satisfaction at having annoyed her.

"And for heaven's sakes stop crowding the girl asking questions. Mobbing her isn't going to do anything but scare her more."

"What do you care? You're just a murderer." The boy who voted against me staying snapped.

I threw up my hands and backed away. If only you knew what I know.

Let it go Reva.
Darsor commanded me.

I'm just trying to help that poor little girl right there. Look at them surround her, they're like a swarm of bees converging on the last flower.

I know, but they don't. YOu have to just let it go.
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Darsor

I know, but they don't. You just have to let it go.

I felt Reva nod, and stretched leisurely, smiling to myself at her miraculous change. I was glad she decided to stick with this group of rogues, they were improving her much more quickly than I expected. Especially that Bear.

I padded over to him, well aware that my form at that point was far less than intimidating. The little girl and Poca had accepted our offering of cake and water and now I had to move on to the old bear. I sat down next to him and started licking my paw in an offhand way. Cleaning myself always helped to clear my mind. I am Darsor, pet of Reva.

Tige.
He didn't introduce who his Master was, and I understood.

I looked over at him and waited for him to look back. When he finally did I caught his gaze and searched it. She is good. Underneath that cruel exterior is a little girl who is a frightened as Sheara right now. She doesn't know how to trust, not even how to cry, but she is in there.
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Tige:

“I am Dasor, Pet of Reva.” The small tiger cub said into my mind as he nonchalantly cleaned his face.

“ I am Tige.” I couldn't say who's pet I was for I myself didn't know, was I Emily's or was I Seena's now? I looked Dasor up and down, he seemed to be getting stronger.


“She is good. Underneath that cruel exterior is a little girl who is a frightened as Sheara right now. She doesn't know how to trust, not even how to cry, but she is in there.” He said searching my face earnestly, for- something.

I looked to where Reva was standing awkwardly with the others around our newest member, Sheara. Reva had seemed to take an interest in her that struck me as odd before Dasor spoke. Now his words filled my heart with pity for this girl. I had wronged her, I had no right to have treated her so harshly-she was just a child. Thoughts of my Emily flitted through my head, how ashamed of me she would have been if she had seen what I had done and said to that child! I growled softly to myself but Dasor looked worried.

“She's lost everything to the government hasn't she? All her loved ones, even her heart and soul.” I asked not taking my eyes of the girl, Dasor kept searching my face as he nodded slowly.

“Thank you Dasor.” I said patting him very gently with my paw. “I need to talk to her- do not fear I won't harm her.” I added as fear entered his eyes for a moment.

I stood up and padded over to where Reva was. Now looking at her I was even more ashamed of my behavior, she was so small and frail looking. I moved behind her, reared up on my hind legs and drew her close into a hug. I laid my head gently on top of hers.

“I am so sorry little one.” I said, my voice going hoarse. “I am so sorry.”



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Reva

I froze as the bear's heavy arms surrounded me. "I am so sorry little one." He said. "I am so sorry."

I did the first thing that came into my mind. I hugged him back, and whispered in his ear something that would have had Old Kaston shouting at me for weakness. "I am sorry as well. If I could take it all back, I would."

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