Always and forever

Thank you!:)

thank you remeberdecember.

Haa i loved this poem. I liked the way every verse starts the same way and yeah the messgae of your poem. Lovely

Thank you very much Doxie00..... I loved this poem to:)

Hallie I absolutely love this poem. It's Beautiful keep posting for the good of the world!♥

The poem was great. I really enjoyed it. I liked how the stanza were short and got to the point. And the poem was written very well and it put me in a happy mood, (because I tried to bake a cake and usually it works, but I forgot to and vinegar so it didn't turn out right) so keep writing,

I love this poem! It has a strong message that people understand and (unfortunately) endure every day. The rhyme scheme is simple, but that works well for the poem. Maybe try experimenting with different styles and techniques until you come up with something that is 100% you. Keep writing! This is excellent!