Anything Really (in collaboration with Snoink!)

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Hi everyone :)
The comic strip shown is my submission (or one of them) for the 2011 YWS Lit Journal. I merely did the illustrations and the storyline came from Snoink, with her permission. You can read her original piece here. Everything was drawn in pen, so it'll be difficult to edit, but I'll do my best to use your comments on how to improve :D
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Oh Meep(:, that's just about the cutest thing ever. I've told you this before, but I love your handwriting! And Floppy Ears. <3 So adorable. Floppy Ears is so cute and I just wanted to cuddle him when the others laughed at him D: He looks so sad, especially when the grasshopper comes to talk to him!

Your illustrations are really good and all the emotions and things are brought out so well! This is a lame review, I know, but I really have nothing else than adoration to give to you. xD <3
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Meep, great job on this one!! I love the handwriting (jealous!) and great job on Floppy Ears xD I didn't see any grammar errors. It was drwan way better than I could have done.
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*dies of adorableness overload*

No, but really, I love it. One thing I could work on is make sure who is speaking FIRST. At first, at the beginning of the second strip, I thought the grasshopper was speaking first, so I was a bit confused. But I love it. <3 Fantastic!
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Thanks for the help and compliments Dem, tuckerluvr & Ross! :)
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SO CUTE(:! I love your little cute forrest animals and the whole story was just like "ahhh" cute(:. I love your drawing you have real talent there, you should be a cartoonist or illustrate childerns book's(:. You'd be beast at it. I love this though keep up the good work!




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Ack! This is so cute! Thank you so much!
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Hey Meep(:, CaptianRandom here.

I loved this, it was very good, i was laughing all the way. VERY COOL, i liked it because it did not have color, but it didn't really need it. I loved the drawings and the characters. I would love to view more of your work. KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB.

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Meep! This was great!

I started reading it, laughing. I remembered reading Snoink's story and I knew where this was headed.

You are very talented in the drawing department; kudos to you, my lasagna-eating friend! I especially loved Floppy's eyes in the second strip, which reminded me of Puss in Boots from Shrek. Nicely done :D

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*glomps.* This is so cute. And I love your comic-y handwriting. :D
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Amazing, a cute rabbit and laughing animals.
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