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Hai. Finally here! I could ramble about how I've been meaning to make a thread here for eons but never got to it but I bet it'd bore you so I won't. Don't you like me already? Yes. Yes you do.

So. Jagz will review poetry and short stories, and maybe art (though not photography, because Jag knows nothing about that). Fair warning, I tend to obsess a bit a lot over flow and word choice, so be ready for some harking over that if it's poetry (for prose too, technically, but I can control myself better with those). I may not be the best person for historical fic, though I can certainly give it a look. Fanfiction is a-ok, as long as I actually know the fandom--just ask, and we'll see. I may be a bit slow in getting to the reviews because I am a procrastinator like that, but I swear they'll get doooone eventually.

What Jag will not do is scripts, lyrics, nonfic and novels. Pretty much everything else (aka what I mentioned in the paragraph above) is fair game, whatever genre, rating and pink polka dotted elephants you may see fit to tack on. Just give me a link to the piece, and whoo!

Hit me.

Title is shamelessly lifted from Pink Floyd, btw. I'm not that dangerous/crazy, honest.
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Yes, I'm the first one!

Hi there, Jaggy.

Will you care to rip this apart? This is my entry to Skins' contest. I would so much appreciate it if you would.

Here's the link: topic70224.html

Thank you in advance. :3
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal




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Hello, this is an older poem I wish to have reviewed, post770000.html#p770000

Thanks

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!




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Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.




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It's the first part in a two part short story. Pretty please review it? :D

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

post768574.html#p768574
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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And done~
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I have a poem, please? topic70588.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Who's next? :3
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Hey there, me again. :smt003 Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic70757.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

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Hey there, would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks!

topic72396.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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Want a review for my poem- 'The Battle For Happiness'
topic72429.html




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Hey, Jagged! Mind reviewing another poem for me? Thanks!

topic72796.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver




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Hi :) Would you be willing to review one of my poems?
Here's a link:
topic72616.html
Thanks.




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Look at me being all official.

<3
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.



Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)