These lies are leading me astray, it's too much for me to stay. I don't wanna live this destiny, it goes on endlessly. I see you so please stay strong, I'll sing you one last song and then I'm gone. I don't wanna live this destiny, it goes on endlessly.
hello my name is James, well i think you'r art is good and the name is quite heavy "love gun" though i think it is original because you have changed the concept of the weapon of killing to a gun that shoots love in you'r heart. i like it but i don't believe in forceful love.
I would like to see a little more contrast here--right now it's a very light piece without a lot of the deep shadows that would really make this drawing pop. It's also truncated strangely at the bottom, and that makes the composition itself seem a little lacking. I would love to see more of the grip, which I think would further balance out the brightness of the muzzle.
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Hi! OK, so I really like this. it is AMAZING. And while the shading could go darker, there's only one things that caught my eye at a first glance: the heart in the front. One, I think it's to big. I get that it's closer to us that the... bullet holder thing. (I don't know much about guns.) But it's not that much closer. Also, it's considerably darker than the rest of the piece (which you may or may not have intended) and the heart looks like it's staring right at us. It's should be turned more, angled. The gun is a mostly sideways view, so the heart should be turned too.
I do really love this piece. Sorry if my review sounded at all harsh. (I get very worried that I'm going to offend a YWSer.) Considering that the heart was the only thing I found really wrong with such an amazingly detailed piece (I count shading as amazingly detailed when it's done so well as this is) that is really saying something. Nice job! Keep drawing.
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I would shade in this a bit darker, but leave the heart as the darkest part of the picture. I would also sharpen the heart a bit more, and angle it to match the gun. Overall, this is a really well done piece of art.. the message is very interesting. Nice job. c:
Great! I love it, reminds me of Bayonetta. :3 um.... only thing i'd say is make it stand out more by sharpening it. Other than that, nothing. great, i love it. Good perspective.
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I've seen this idea drawn so many times before but you've definatly drawn the best I've seen so far! I'd also like to see the hilt of the gun. It may be basic stuff, but the hilt of the gun, If done properly, Is the hardest part to draw of a gun. WELL DONE!
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