'Allo! Would you like a review?

Hey! I'm kind of new to both the forum and the site, and I'd love to read some of what others have written. I'm not all that experienced with writing reviews, but I'm a perfectionist, so I like to nitpick. I'm also a bit of a grammar Nazi, so if you need someone to go through your story with a fine tooth comb looking for things like that, I'm your gal. I'm pretty much open to reading anything right now...So if you'd like a review, just let me know.
-Stone

Heya,

I love you to review my work, if you'd like.

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I need a few pointers on how it reads to other people...

Thank you!

TOYF

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