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Cirque wrote:Done, Austen. I hope that it good and helps you in your writing adventure. Is there anyone else looking for a review? I'm happy to do anything. :D


It will do! Merci!
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Does anyone want a review. I'm open all night...and day! :D




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Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

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Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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I've done it! It won't let me post on your page, so I sent it to you through pm! Hope you get it and that it helps! Anyone else want a review...please! :D




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Do you think you could review my story God's Mistake? Here's the link to part two, which is what I need reviews on. In the post there's a link to the first part, if you just want to read it then review the 2nd part. Thanks! topic65938.html
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This is madness! Nobody wants me, Cirque, to do an honoured review for them. The crimson jester! You should be ashamed!

Now, make ammends and ask me for a review! :lol:




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If you would be so kind, please. :)
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What about mine?
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Sorry for the late reply. I was away from the computer for a while, though I'm happy to report that I've finished your review, Libby. :)

Does anyone else want a review?




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Heya Cirque. :)

I'm not sure if you'll be willing to, but could you review a chapter of my story? It's, like, chapter seven so I understand if you don't want to. :lol: If you want to understand it completely, you would have to scan through the previous chapters. You don't really need to though, you can concentrate more on the structural and grammatical stuff.

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Thanks in advance!

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Could you review the next part of my story please...?

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Thanks in advance :)
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Would you mind reviewing my poem? topic67459.html
Also I am going to take French this year, I might message you one day saying, HELP ME I AM FAILING FRENCH haha.
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