Aw Snap, Reviews!

17 posts1, 2
User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Sun May 23, 2010 5:04 am
Loller65 says... · Sun May 23, 2010 5:04 am
I'll review...

-Any poem. Any.

-Any short story

-Scripts

I will not review

-Novels

-Lyrics

Also, while I will review a romance piece, they are not my favorite thing, so I may or may not turn it down.
Last edited by Loller65 on Sun May 15, 2011 5:17 am, edited 4 times in total.
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
MiaParamore
Gender Female
Points 58538
Reviews 553
Sun May 23, 2010 7:28 am
MiaParamore says... · Sun May 23, 2010 7:28 am
Hey I was just wondering if you could review my novel-A Criminal's Heart. I have posted seven chapters plus a prologue. Tun it down if you don't wanna. :D The link to the novel is in my signature.

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Sun May 23, 2010 5:34 pm
Loller65 says... · Sun May 23, 2010 5:34 pm
Sure. Might take awhile, though.
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
LauraElizabeth
Gender Female
Points 1342
Reviews 3
Tue May 25, 2010 7:44 pm
LauraElizabeth says... · Tue May 25, 2010 7:44 pm
Could you review my story? There's only one chapter of it up so far, and it's not a romance :)
Here's the link:
topic64180.html

Thanks!




User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:38 pm
Loller65 says... · Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:38 pm
Shameless self bump for improved reviewing policy.

I will review any poetry (yes, any) and short stories. No novels. I don't have the time to read 20 chapters of the stuff.

Also, be warned. I will not pussyfoot around. I will be brutally honest.
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
Vampyre
Gender Female
Points 1168
Reviews 23
Mon Dec 20, 2010 9:16 am
Vampyre says... · Mon Dec 20, 2010 9:16 am
Hey :)

Would you mind looking at my poem, Photograph to Sand?
There's a rather long spoiler I'm afraid, which is necessary to help one understand the poem, so please read that first if you don't mind.

Also, I don't mind you being honest, but please don't be too harsh. I can usually take it, but...Well, the spoiler'll explain everything.

Thanks so much,
Vampyre.

By the way, the link is in my signature
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:58 pm
Loller65 says... · Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:58 pm
Image

Bumping for reviews. Come on now, y'all!
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
Flower~Child
Gender Female
Points 12611
Reviews 321
Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:47 am
Flower~Child says... · Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:47 am
I have a poem if you don't mind. Short and sweet. topic74591.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:13 am
Loller65 says... · Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:13 am
Reviewed!

Who's next?
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
PatriciaTina
Gender Female
Points 12298
Reviews 124
Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:08 am
PatriciaTina says... · Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:08 am
Hey there! So, I just posted a short story that needs reviews, and people to help me make it better! Please help me!!! :) It's a bit rough, so please be as harsh/nit-picky as you like! Thanks in advance!! :D

topic74655.html
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson




User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:31 am
Loller65 says... · Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:31 am
Done!

Next?
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:53 am
Loller65 says... · Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:53 am
Shameless self bump. I wanna start a SB, see, so I need points.

Give me reviews or I EXPLODE YOUR HEAD.
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
Loller65
Gender Male
Points 2058
Reviews 31
Sun May 15, 2011 5:15 am
Loller65 says... · Sun May 15, 2011 5:15 am
For srs y'all. I need to review stuff!
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




User avatar
GeeLyria
Supporter
Gender Female
Points 471
Reviews 532
Wed May 25, 2011 6:46 pm
GeeLyria says... · Wed May 25, 2011 6:46 pm
Hi Hawkeye!!! :) Can you review my poem? topic81316.html
Noob is a state of being, not a length of time. ~Ego

"Serás del tamaño de tus pensamientos; no te permitas fracasar."




User avatar
Vampyre
Gender Female
Points 1168
Reviews 23
Wed May 25, 2011 7:08 pm
Vampyre says... · Wed May 25, 2011 7:08 pm
Hey, would you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you dear :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades



17 posts1, 2


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
— Oxara