Calansera

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so here's my second fairy! someone told me there's no such thing as a black fairy...well that was true before I drew one! Now here she is right there, plain as day! 8)
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:shock: erhm, that was embarrassing... here she is!!!
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Hello there!

I'm just here to comment on you "Calansera". First of all, I like her body XD. Love the hands. It would have been better if you show her feet .
Thing that I just notice:Her nose is kind of flat. Anyway, like her wings also.

keep up the good work!

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Hey ethereal, this is pretty cool! The extremely thin body and the long neck seems to only help her seem more dainty and delicate. You did a great job with her pose, especially with her fingers. The interesting wings suit Calansera very well.
Great job! I'm sorry, I don't have any critiques for you...but I guess that's a good thing in a way, right? :wink: Keep up the good work-

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Hello!

I really like this picture. Hello, Black Faerie, welcome. I like the shadow on her back and her long neck and her pose. Her leg like they go on forever.. Her body is gorgeous. One thing would probably be maybe a teeny bit of shading in the exposed part of her abdomen? It seems like it's part of her top instead of an exposed part. Perhaps a small amount of shading on the inner circle to show it's another layer?

Very lovely picture!
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thanks for the feedback guys!

Yuriko, the flat nose is an ethnic thing, that was on purpose ;-) I had meant to put the feet in, but by the time I realised I had started too far down the page, it was too late...

Kaedee, I wouldn't be able to sleep at night if I didn't confess that I "outsourced" the hands :-P I had everything perfect, but those hands weren't doing her justice! I must have erased them 100 times. eventually I asked my cousin to draw them in. hands are my Archille's heel I'm afraid. that's why I made a big deal about my dancing faerie, coz those hands were ALL me!

Idra, thanks for the tip about the shadow on the abdomen, I didn't notice that before! the strong shadow on her back is cast by a mysterious unseen bright light that she is mesmerised with. I really hope its not a bug light! :?
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Hey etherealember! Thanks for posting this; I love looking at other people's drawings and paintings and things, because I really can't draw worth beans. I think the ability to do so therefore fascinates me.

Anyway! The only thing that looked "off" to me was the left calf... you drew such nice proportions in the right leg, but then the left one just looks funny. I'm also very impressed by the hands. Nice work!
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Wings!! i just have to review now!
Firstly, and obviously
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I loved the wings!!

Secondly are my nit-pics!
The ear doesn't seem quite right. I can't tell whats bothering me about it. I think it because its a little high.
And this has been mentioned before, but the nose is a little flat.
And this is just me, but the clothes are a tiny bit skimpy. I know that was probbally your point but its just not my taste.
Thirdly, the shading is just wonderful!!
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Wow! I really like the dress and the wings! They are very detailed. Also, the hands are very elegant. I don't like the hair, though. The gray color makes the faerie look old. Shade it in more. And, shape out her face more. The nose seems awkward. I like the figure of the body!
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First I need to say I am NOT and artist. So disregard all my comments :)
I don't like the hair it makes her look old. Her nose kind of seems like it should be on an avatar, but that is just my opinion. Her body is wonderful as well as her wings.
Her hands are really well drawn.
I am amazed whenever somebody draws or paints something though :)A. S.



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