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Free reviews, but please, no poetry. I am crap at peotry and if you want a good critique on your piece of poetic marvel, don't come here.

I like reviewing:
Short sotries.
Other fiction.
Sci Fi



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Last edited by whatevr on Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:27 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Yay! Review!

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Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


~Sorrow by Flyleaf




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Hi, would you please review my piece?

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Hi can you review 'A Criminal's Heart's prologue'.
LINK: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue

Please and thanks in advance.( I used magic words)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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As yu mentioned in the PM here's the request for Chapter-1's review. Please and thank you. I think that's okay now.
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Done shubhi :)
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thank you!
Honey, you should see me in a crown.




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Done
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Done, apple :)
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