Trapped

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(If you have ever read the book GONE this is somewhat like that)

You looked out the windows and notice a green smoke appearing. The next moment your teacher disappears. Everyone looks around confused. All of the other kids wander into the hallway to tell their friends what just happened, but it happened to them too.
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The green fog is deadly dangerous and no one knows what it is. Everyone who was over 19 disappeared. (by the way, there's a bunch of food. I know it's not possible but I don't want everyone to die.) Everyone is stuck in school. With no adults.
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Age:

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Talents/Skills:

Flaws:

Appearance:

Personality:

Up for love?:

Other:
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Name: Jennifer High

Age: 16

Grade: 11

Talents/Skills: Jennifer is the brainiac of the school. She's good with computers (including hacking), she's also good at solving problems.

Flaws: She's not very sociable and she's no good at taking orders.

Appearance: Straight brunette hair that goes all the way down her back. She has an Olive skin tone and deep brown eyes.

Personality: She's shy and keeps to herself. She also is obsessed with knowing things and she adores reading.

Up for love?: Yeah, I guess.

Other: Everyone comes to Jen when they have questions, something they want solved, when they want information, or something along the lines of that.
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Read that book, loved that book! I'll save a spot for a guy! But for now I'm hungry.
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Name: Lazer Grant
Age: 17
Grade: 11
Talent: He's fairly strong and can do pretty well in hand to hand combat. Not really one to give orders but follows them well.
Skills: Fighting and sneaking around.
Flaws: He doesn't look before he leaps. His temper usually ruins everything.
Apperance: -later-
Personality: He's nice and sweet until things get serious, in that case he goes into no-nonsense mode. When he gets emotional- angry, mad, frustrated, etc.- or tired he tends to lash out at people and say things he really doesn't mean.
Up for love: Hai (( yes )).
Other: He's really handy with a bow and arrow.
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Name: Leyna Inara

Age: 16

Grade: 10

Talents/Skills: Very Agile and fast, not to strong. Lots of energy

Flaws: Very gulible, too peppy. Takes on chalanges she can't overcome out of self pride.

Appearance: Just like this:
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Personality: Very Independant, Very Sweet, Super Peppy, Ultra Caring and Kind. Very Happy Disposition. Very Curious, Over Emotional and Someone who could make anyone laugh.

Up for love?: Ya I guess

Other: Has her secrets
Curiosity killed the cat,
But Satisfaction brought it back! :D
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How do you think I'm still here? ;)

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Ooh, sounds fun. May I save a spot for a guy, please? I'll edit this post and make it the profile later on. Right now, I'm too tired to try to pull a character out of my brain. :S
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Yeah, that's fine. *saves spot for a guy*
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Name: "Trash" (Oliver Ale)

Age: 15

Grade: 10

Talents/Skills: Plenty of endurance and energy, and he's an impressive painter.

Flaws: Incredibly wasteful. Alongside being a picky eater, he'll throw almost anything out into the garbage can, including most of his own paintings, which he's almost never satisfied with. It's why most people know him by his nickname, Trash.

Appearance:

Personality: Trash is extremely bored within minutes of doing nothing. It makes him do all sorts of little irritating habits, making him feel a little intolerable at times. But when he has something to do, he's enthusiastic about it and does it well.

Up for love?: Sure, why not?

Other: That about covers it.

A thanks to you, Fiction, for making a point about the food in the description, because it helped me get an idea for this character, and I plan on using him in another story I'm working on. Have a lucky day, everybody!
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Guys, we really need more characters!
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Name: Marcus Fleck

Age: sixteen

Grade: 11

Talents/Skills: quite good at science and maths; modest; knows his way around the school very well (i'm not sure whether everything happens in the school or not? in which case this skill may be useless lol)

Flaws: not very responsible

Appearance: black hair that's tidier than it tries to be, blue eyes. 5'6''

Personality: happy to watch people and make suggestions, but not much of a leader

Up for love?: probably

Other: not at the moment
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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We need characters!
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Okay guys, since we're not getting more characters do you mind if we just start and let more people come as we go on?
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I don't mind. I was wondering when this would start anyway.
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Okay, we're starting.

Jennifer:

The hallways buzzed with chatter and I looked around. This didn't make any sense. People came up to me to ask me what was going on. That's what you get for being a braniac I thought to myself. After thinking for a minute I went into the library. Some students were there but I didn't bother with them. Talking right now wasn't going to help anything.

Lazer and Leyna came over "Hey, what's going on?" Lazer asked I shrugged "I know no more than you do." Leyna looked around confused and asked "Well will you be able to figure it out?" With a sigh I said "I don't know." Someone came running in and said "Guys! We can't get out!" Leyna scratched her head and said "What?" the guy said "Someone tried to get out and they disappeared. Like, they were there one second and not the next.

With that I quickly logged onto the librarian's computer "Something is awfully wrong." the guy said. "Ya think?" I said sarcastically. I typed in multiple hacking codes just to get her password. Typing in her password I said "We need all the information we can get on this." I glanced at Leyna and her face was white. "What?" I followed her gaze out the window where a greenish fog was floating across the sky.
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Lazer:
"Floating frogs?" Leyna shrugged and flinched away from the window.
"That's impossible," Jennifer snapped, her gaze returned to the screen.
"Well, so are disappearing people!" Jenn and Ley started arguing over the possibility of things and I just sat down in one of the chairs, watching them.
"Can we just agree to disagree," I said with a yawn. In response, Jenn finished her hacking and Ley took up residence on the top of a table. After at least ten minutes Jennifer screamed out in frustration.
"Nothing!" I stood up and shook out my hair.
"Well, we can't just sit around here wondering what to do!" I stood up and headed for the door.
"Where are you going," Leyna snapped.
"To find my parents."
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