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ultraviolet
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:28 pm
ultraviolet says... · Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:28 pm
Hey! Mind reviewing the first part of my new novel "The Ringbearers"? Here's the link. Thanks!

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MajicJumper
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:08 am
MajicJumper says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:08 am
Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post715557.html#p715557

Thanks!
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:56 am
austenite says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:56 am
Could you review Part One of my Romantic fiction short stories? I would be eternally gratefully (and fully willing to bestow gifts as a bribe :D)

Here's the link: topic64749.html
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Maddy
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Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:34 am
Maddy says... · Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:34 am
Be right on it, Majic and austenite.

Violet, your review is done. :)
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Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:29 am
Maddy says... · Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:29 am
Majic, your review is done! :)
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Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:03 am
Maddy says... · Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:03 am
austenite, your review is finished :)

and Alex, I will certainly review your piece. :)
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Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:24 am
Maddy says... · Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:24 am
Alex, your review is done. B). Finally. :)
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Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:51 pm
Maddy says... · Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:51 pm
Come on guys, I need some reviews!
Please?
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:25 am
Twit says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:25 am
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There's that if you would, please. I'm afraid it's Historical Fantasy, so two of your May Reviews, but do what you can with it, please? and be incredibly cruel and harsh. :)
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:34 pm
Maddy says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:34 pm
Sure, G-Wood, I'll review your piece. :)
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:02 am
Maddy says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:02 am
G-Wood, your piece is completed. :)
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Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:19 am
DreamyAlice says... · Sat Jun 17, 2023 9:19 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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