Danni photography - Sunrise

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Here is a photo of a sunrise, you can see more of my photography at http://www.treklens.com/members/Waterlilygirl/ Sorry link didn't work before, I forgot about the "members" part in the url.

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Sunrise at New Brighton Beach
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Hi there!

I had a few things.

:arrow: This photo should be re-sized. It's not as outlandishly huge as some photos that I've seen, but it still stretches off the page and makes it hard to see.

:arrow: I like what you were trying to do with the angles, but it seems a bit overdone. I feel like I'm sort of toppled over. Maybe you could zoom out a bit to fix the problem.

Otherwise, I really like the colors and I love the way you've captured the serene beauty of the beach. PM me if you have questions or if you post anything new!

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Hi Waterlillygirl. As Elinor has already mentioned before, you should resize the pic. Visit this link:Resize picture. this might help. At first I saw the picture and thought it was all but then I scrolled it upwards and then could see the whole picture.

the shades and effect was great. No nit-pick that I could detect. Nice job!!!!
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Hi Lily, I'm Peanut :) I think this photo is beautiful. I love the angle and the way you shot the bridge, it sorta looks like it's never ending. I just think that's cool. Also I've taken beach sunrise shots before but have never come away with these colors. It's wonderful. I agree with Eli though, if you can I'd resize it because I didn't notice all of the water until I scrolled down(and I almost didn't). If the water is important to the picture, which I think it is, it needs to be resized. :)


P.S. The link to your other photos didn't work for me.

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Wow, this is a gorgeous piece of photography!

As a user said before, the effect you were going for with the angles was a good idea, but a little bit much. That's okay, however, because I like the effect of the light in the corner, and then it transfers into the darkness.

I love the look of the water that you've captured underneath. The little bubbles, the unique pattern it's flowing in.

My favourite thing about this photo, though, has got to be the single person standing at the front. The silhouette is stunning, and I absolutely love it.

Keep this up!
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Hey Danni!

That's a really beautiful photo. Very good job with it.

As Elinor said, your angle is a bit off-putting. You should zoom the picture or maybe a completely different angle.

Also; I feel like there's a bit too much to be taken in which leaves me confused. It's like my eyes are constantly pulled toward the man, the sun, the water, the lightpoles. There isn't that defining spot here.

Anyway, you really have talent and your work is amazing. I checked out the link; very good photos.
Keep up thr good work
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Hey Danni. Yes, resize...this is beautiful! I love how the colors go from an orange, gets lighter, then fades into a blue. The sunrise reflecting on the water is also gorgeous. *clicks 'Like' button* Keep up the great work! (I'm checking out your link right now)

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