Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)

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Okay...xX_white_shadow_Xx, PuffSammy, and I came up with this storybook together. This will be a remake of the original, with some major plot changes. :smt002

The whole premise is that there is a circus, simply known as the Misfit Circus, which is run by orphaned teens. They all have special powers, the reason that they have banded together. The Misfits, as they call themselves, do not know their true origins, although, this will come into the plot...
The Misfits are a troubled group, and they are constantly on the run from the authorities (they are strange, empowered teens, after all). There is also dissent from within, as there are some nice Misfits, and some...not-so-nice ones. The not-so-nice ones believe that they should use their powers to dominate normal people, while the nice ones are opposed to this idea, to some extent. These groups will EVENTUALLY clash.
But that's not all. For, unbeknownst to the Misfits, the authorities are not just chasing them because they're underage. No, something much more sinister is behind that, which the Misfits will find out all to soon.

Why are all of the Misfits teens? Why is the government so interested in them? And can the Misfits of good keep their evil companions at bay?

The authorities are closing in. Fights are breaking out among friends. And unknown to everyone involved, something is about to happen that will change the world forever...



Rules:

All YWS rules



PG-13 rating here!



Characters need to be from ages 11-19



Everyone can die, of course



No killing off other characters without mine, or the other character's permission



No ultra-gory violence, please



And no sex scenes...



I think that's it for rules...







Character Profiles:



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Personality:



Weaknesses/Strengths



Likes/Dislikes:



Other:


Everyone can have two characters, one nice Misfit, and one evil one. I'll have my two characters from the former storybook, and I'll also control the government authorities.

Let's start this!

PM me if you have any questions.
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Totally in.
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I'm in too! Post pro later, when I get it finished.
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I'd like to make a girl who has the power of illusion. Thanks!
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Name: Juliette Loui


Age: 15


Power/Circus Act: Can charm anything and anyone into a sort of trance AKA mesmerism. She can also reanimate dead people and inanimate objects though only for a short period of time, as when she does this she loses life energy of her own...think Lord Voldy and Ginny in HP2. What she does in the circus is tame animals such as lions and such, she also occasionaly picks a member of the audience and mesmerize/charm them into doing things they averagely wouldn't.



Appearance: Light Blonde hair with strawberry natural highlights, green/blue eyes that are more green when she re-animates things and more blue when she charms. Unhealthingly skinny and tall and willowy.



Personality: She has severe bipolar disease :(: (Look at both faces..get it?) She can be sweet, charming, instantly likable, innocent and naive when she charmed recently but aftr reanimation she turns into a b*tchy, manipulatoing, sarcastic, moody, darkly humorous, almost evil like person. Sometimes her animation side doesn't go away for a while and is able to charm people into doing things they definetly wouldn't do. Vice versa with animation/good side.



Weaknesses/Strengths-

Weaknesses-Both sides of her hate each other because of videos they have seen where the good side watches in a video as the bad side reanimates a knife and the living knife killed a dog. The bad side once watched as the good side persuaded a suicidal man to go home and not kill himself. So all in all, she struggles with an internal battle and is always filled with disgust, fear or hate at a time.



Likes/Dislikes:

Charmed Side:

Likes-Animals, Cereal, Nature, Technology, Romance and Peace

Dislikes-War, Fights, Death and boats


Animator Side:

Likes-Manipulating, Affairs, Being in control

Dislikes- Everything the Charmed Side likes other than Technology.




Other: Cannot remember her alter ego or any of the acts they had done even though the other Misfits told her. She did not believe untill they video taped her in her charmed mode and her re-animation mode and showed it to both sides of her....she is pretty creepy actually.

She is really pretty and gets hit on alot but it is always confusing for the human boy. Both of her "sides" are up for love, but they like diiferent people so relationships with her are usually a no-no...unless one guy falls in love with both of her sides but too know about that that boy would have to be a misfit. Do you see where I'm going with this. If you want her, you have to love both sides not just one....

Wow. She must have been confusing but it all makes sense in my mind. ***I own Juliette so no stealing or my evil purple monkeys will attack you, General Dancing Elephant in the lead! :elephant:
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(Can I have two people who are on the same side kinda?)

Name: Eve Thomson



Age: 15



Power/Circus Act: She is an Illusionary/Enchantress. it's hard to explain fully, but basically it seems she can get into people's minds and make them see what she wants them to see. She can put them in an alternate reality and take them out at her choosing. She makes it look like a place moves, or she can show people their dream world. She can also draw people in with enchantment.



Appearance: She has long curly red hair with blue eyes that seem to have a purple tint. She is petite, slender and curvy. Usually wears dark jeans, a blue camisole under a grey jacket.



Personality: She's nice and caring, but can be manipulative when she wants to, she doesn't enjoy it though. She is compassionate, and hates violence. She has a flexible personality. At times she seems to be like the mother of the group.




Weaknesses/Strengths- When she creates a persons illusion, she can sometimes feel what the person feels so she usually strays towards good illusions. She can effect a number of people at the same time though. When she is with her sister the bond magnifies the intensity of the illusion and enchantment.



Likes/Dislikes: She likes people in general, she loves music and the arts. She doesn't like destruction or misunderstandings. She hates it when people don't listen.




Other: up for love. She sings and draws. But doesn't show it.

Other character, (Both neutral for now)

Name Eden Thomson

Age 15

Power/circus act: She is extremely psychic in a way. She is telekinetic.

Appearance: her hair is black but other then that she looks exactly like her sister Eve. She wears a purple camisole under a baggy white t-shirt, with jeans, and she likes to go barefoot.


Personality: She is quite when around people she doesn't know or trust, Usually outsiders to the circus. Kind. She keeps her thoughts to herself usually. She has a sarcastic and fun side, she can also get very talkative when nervous or upset. She likes to mess with people sometimes, playfully though. She can be jocky.

Weaknesses/Strength: Her psychic power keeps her somewhat unstable, but her telekinetic ability is strong. The bond with her sister allows them to transfer thoughts to one another.

Likes/Dislikes: She loves to Dance and play violin. She hates a very crowded place but has learned to deal with somewhat of a crowd, being in a circus and all. She loves food.

Other: Up for love. She works together with Eve, and they seem to have a bond with each other, seeing that they are twins.
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Name: Elsema (el-sem-ah) she is Else (el-see) for short



Age: 15



Power/Circus Act: She can change her density so she plays an escape artist in the circus. She can make her density so low she seems to disappear, but refrains from doing that in the performance.



Appearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes that shine a little. She is slightly muscular and tan. Here is a link to a picture of her: http://imagecache5.art.com/p/LRG/27/276 ... e-beam.jpg

Personality: A bit of a brat, can be stuck up but has good intentions. She can see the beauty in anyone. One of the more mysterious members of the group and hides two big secrets! She cannot read or write and is part human, because her mother was! The others find this out later. She has a love of knowledge and loves being able to spread her knowledge to those who need it.


Weaknesses/Strengths: She is very pretty and strong. She knows how to appear confident. But on the inside she still deals with worries of her past. She only remembers little chunks of her past life and can be insecure.




Likes/Dislikes: The colors green and pink. Orange is her favourite though. Likes the simple things in life and loves a peaceful mountain view.


Other: Falls in love with one guy in the circus. I don’t know who yet. Any volunteers? Can be a bit bragging, but loves to just show off and have fun. She also needs someone at the Circus she does not like.

Note: Else is actually a good character and wants to use her powers for good. She does not believe in mis-use of powers.

Ciao,
Kally
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Okay, here are my two charries. Nick is good, Kili is evil...


Name: Nick

Age: 15

Power/Act: Can teleport himself and other objects he touches to any place, a co-founder of the circus, magician.

Appearance: Medium height, bright red hair, huge mass of freckles, pointy nose, green eyes, always wears a bright red shirt and jeans, with Converse and a black top hat.

Personality: Talkative, but knows when to shut up, tries to be friendly with everyone, strongly dislikes killing, generally positive, but prone to fits of sarcasm.

Weaknesses/Strengths: If he has to use weapons, he teleports things to make the enemy mess up, he can also use a sword very well, he always listens to everyone's point of view before voicing his opinion, he will not leave anybody behind if they are in danger, even if it means risking his own life.

Likes: All types of food, talking, laughing, being the center of attention, friends, his violin.

Dislikes: people who bring others down, cold, being sad.

Other: Up for love.

(Nick is the the leader, BTW)


*******



Name: Kili Joy

Age: 13

Power/Act: She can change and influence people's emotions, she can make them sad, happy, jealous...murderous, any emotion you can think of, she is the member of the circus who sells tickets and takes tips, something she can do very easily by making people feel very generous...

Appearance: She is small and blonde, with murky blue eyes and a face reminiscent of a fox, she always wears an old white tee-shirt and faded jeans.

Personality: She is clever and sly and always works to her own ends, she just stays with the circus because it's best for her at the moment, she can kind of fade into the background and listen, figuring out what everybody is doing, she can be a vicious fighter (archer), but she usually just makes her opponents feel very friendly towards her.

Weaknesses/Strengths: She can only influence a person if they are unaware and unprepared for that kind of mental invasion, everyone who knows her in the circus always has mental barriers up to block her, she's a good fighter when cornered, and typically has a bow and a sheath of arrows near at hand.

Likes: Making people do stupid things, laughing when they do, making scathing comments, ripping people off, people not noticing her.

Dislikes: People resisting her, people insulting her, quietness, peace.

Others: Up for love, but you'll probably never get her.
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Name: Oliver Ale

Age: 16

Power/Act: Plant Manipulation

Appearance: Tall for his age, loose, somewhat lengthy black hair, always wears cargo shorts and a button-up-t-shirt.

Personality: Very open and polite. He likes to be quiet, but is always happy to have company. He doesn't like being the leader, but he's always happy to help motivate.

Weaknesses/Strengths: He's afraid to get hit, so he doesn't usually enjoy fighting/He can use his powers very well

Likes: A lot of rock music. He frequently is found hanging around, playing his electric guitar.

Dislikes: Aside from his guitar and other music equipment, he dislikes most technology.

Other: He carries a bit of dirt and seeds in his pockets, in case he needs to use his power and he's not nearby any other dirt or plants.

*I might add up another character that I started developing in a different storybook, but I'm not completely certain on it*
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How amny Circus performers are there? And when will we start?
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We'll start soon...Some people need to finish their profiles first, though....
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Man, I was thinking of doing like, a Misfit Circus 2, where they go to LA and the cops are after them XD.

I'll just post Zanette/Zephyra. Though I loved her when she was all crazy and that.
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

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Name: Zanette Brown and her other personality, Zephyra

Age: 14

Power/Circus Act: She has wings, light, porous, easily-broken bones. Goes for trapeze artist because she's scared of mobs.

Appearance: She's smallish, about 5'6", wan; pretty in a consumptive way. She has long waves of brown hair, usually with twigs in it, and wide, green eyes that dart around. She's skinny, scarily so, and delicate, very delicate. Tends towards white and black clothing, the shirts that can tear and velcro back together easily; wears a ski mask and green scarf. Zephyra has the same face, but the eyes stop widening, and narrow, so she looks admittedly sexier.

Personality: Zanette's twitchy, quiet, continually watching for anyone coming up to surprise her. She's afraid of a lot of things, mostly things to do with large crowds and bright lights. Doesn't talk much, but leaves notes around of the matter of 'Gone flying' and 'Pick up milk running low'.
Zephyra, on the other hand, is confident, but sociopathic (last time I had her tear my other charrie's tongue out because she annoyed her), and generally takes what she wants when she wants.

Weaknesses/Strengths: Zanette is too terrified of everything to do much, but she's good for surprise attacks from above. Zephyra is way more confident, but unfortunately their bones break easily. They are both quite good at mapping, recon, good vision.

Likes: Being alone, reading novels, flying, the color white

Dislikes: Large crowds, having to talk to people (Zanette), having to do as she's told (Zephyra).

Other: Plays bass (Zanette), but can't sing/Sings (Zephyra). Up for a very confused love triangle.
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

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RedBird wrote:We'll start soon...Some people need to finish their profiles first, though....


*cough*Me*cough*. :P Like I said... somewhere or another... I need to check YWS more than once a day.

Name: Zack

Age: 15

Power/Circus Act: Has the power to break up his molecules and float freely. Molecules can enter an object and take control.

Appearance: Short. Black hair that is roughly cut. Face always seems to be covered by some shadow.

Personality: Zack attempts to be calm, but he often erupts into rages he cannot explain. Due to this, he often steers clear of the other Misfits.

Weaknesses/Strengths: W: Overconfident, temperamental.
S: Smart, good at observing.

Likes: Being alone.

Dislikes: Constant recurring rages. They seem to be based on his past life.

Other: Zack used to be a particularly villainous misfit, seeking rule over the rest. However, Nick unwittingly gave him amnesia. His personality is now split between the old and new self, and he seems to be drifting to the dark side.

I'll post a good guy later, but there's no time now (you can start the story without him).
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