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Now this was probably my most successful storybook. So I'm going to try it again this time with a different plot.

Plot` The house of Zodiac is a school devoted to training Zodiacs. People born with abilities that relate to the 12 zodiac signs. You are going to this school to learn how to develop your powers and possibly save the world from a the corrupt Zodiac lord. The Zodiac lord is a being that has control over all 12 signs. You are competing with others in your class to become part of the twelve man team sent to kill this Zodiac lord. The school is taught by each signs respective Gods. (If you don't know this I'll put a list up later.)

Rules
No killing other piloted characters( I say this because you'll have to kill others in your sign in order to be part of the elite team)

One character to sign. If the twelve spots are taken like before I'll allow te use of other constellation inspirations.

No sex

Controlled cursing

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Character

Name
Age
Sign:

Aries- Ram
Taurus- Bull
Gemini- Twins
Cancer- Crab
Leo- Lion
Virgo- Maiden
Libra- Scales
Scorpio- Scorpion-
Serpentarius- Snake charmer (Not recognized as a sing but is in one by definition)
Sagittarius- The Archer
Capricorn- Sea Goat
Aquarius- Water Bearer
Pisces- Fish
Weapon
Power( make it relate to sign like Leo the lion controlling fear or being strong.
Appearance ( each person has a tattoo of their zodiac sign somewhere on their body.)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Astro_signs.svg the symbols on their bodies.

Personality
History
Other


I call Aquarius
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I call Gemini, though maybe there should be two people for that?
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I've got Leo. :)
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I've got Leo. :)
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Name: Abbey Allen

Age: 17

Sign: Sagittarius

Weapon: Bow and Arrow

Power:She wouldn't personally call it a power but she can control what becomes of the arrows in the air. She can control how fast it flies, how it hits and on some of her more special arrows can make them do more. Abbey is also very skilled at gymnastics and seems to float through the air. Her body has no sense of gravity, except on her arrows.
Her sign is located on her right shoulderblade and seems to pulse when she uses he power.

Appearance: Abbey has long brown-red hair that she swoops to the side and it falls out in natural large ringlets. Her teeth are white and she shows them most of the time because she smiles so much. Abbey is skinny but has curves that allow her clothes to hang loosely and comfortably.

Personality: Like her sign Abbey is versatile and likes to have fun. She always looks on the bright side and is the quickest to form an alliance. Once you have her trust she will never fail you. She has a problem with "going to far" however.


History: Abbey had a normal childhood and normal parents but many mental problems. She is on happy pills but she refuses to admit it to anyone so no one should know.

Other: Up for love
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I save a spot for a capricorn.

Question, are we allowed to have more than one character?
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Save a spot for LIBRA!!!!
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For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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i call gemini
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Ok there can be two Gemini. As main characters.

You can make another character after all 12 spots have been filled, but the second person will be minor and won't go on the quest.
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I take Scorpio. Bwa ha ha ha ha... :twisted:

Name: Claudia Dermetreuse (Gender: Female [oh my gosh, no way!])
Age: 16

Sign: Scorpio! Yay! :P

Weapon: a dagger whose tip includes the most deadly poison on the face of the earth--she's immune to the poison after so much exposure to it

Power: Can summon poisonous animals and control them, except maybe snakes if someone calls Serpentarius. She controls them by speaking to them in their relative languages; summons them by the call of "Kampaniruu!" Mostly, these poisonous animals are used for protection or to prevent an enemy from threatening Claudia. In rare cases, she'll turn Black and set 'em on you to kill.

Appearance: She has almost-waist-length darkish brown, wavy hair. You might call her semi-emo or gothic. Her skin is a pale white, she wears red eyeshadow, only wears white or black colored clothes, and is of average weight. She's a little taller than most girls her age, always has lavender-colored nails, has pale pink lips, and also wears a special necklace/amulet that no one ever sees except her. Her dark-brown eyes are searching and can automatically tell if you're lying; however, when depressed or tired, her eyes can seem lightless.
Edit: Scorpio sign on her right cheek, smack dab in its middle.

Personality: Claudia's somewhat shy and rarely ever speaks to people after the death of her best, closest friend ever. She's passionate and expressive when left on her own, however, and loves music, particularly the violin. Sometimes stubborn/determined, if you get her on your side, she will not betray you unless you're evil; however, it will take quite a while for her to truly trust you. In fact, because of her friend's death, she may never trust anybody else ever again. Whenever around a group of people, she keeps her head down. (in shame? or anger? or fear? all of the above? or maybe none of those?) When she feels strongly about something, her eyes will show it, and her voice is medium-pitched and emotional instead of her usual deep, scratchy or mysterious voice. And finally, when she turns Black, she's seriously mad and no one can calm her down, so it's best to leave her alone at that time. It takes a lot of time for her to cool down somewhat, and if you make her that mad, she'll probably never completely forgive/forget the incident.

History: Claudia was once the happiest child on earth. She had wonderful parents, a nice social environment, and everything she needed. But all that changed with the car accident where her bestest, closest friend died--after that, everything seemed to go so horribly wrong. First her friend. Then her mom. Finally, her dad died. After being bullied in the orphanage, her Black side awakened, and she also found out about her power. (this was when she was aged 11) She now lives with a lonely single mother of 3 children including Claudia. Her new family is very nice and pleasant, so it's almost as if her early life was being replayed in front of her eyes; that's why Claudia is very protective of her step-family and is never happy or joyful again.

Other: If, over an extensively long period of time, you gain her trust, she'll be open/willing enough to become friends. Being in love with someone would, for her, be the most impossible, yet wonderful, dream. So...it's unknown as of now what her relationship capabilities with other people will be. :)

Oh yeah--thanks for reading the huge, long, immense, boring post. :D
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I claim Serpentarius, please. This sounds fun.
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Name: Lisiana Dashni

Age: 16

Sign: Libra (scale)

Weapon: A dagger with a purple stone on the handle with the engraving of Libra

Power: Lisiana can sort out small conflicts and make other people see the right side and agree. She can calm people down from their anger and make them balance out their feelings.

Appearance: http://angelasara.files.wordpress.com/2 ... y-girl.jpg She has a Libra sign right above the usual neckline of a shirt or dress.

Personality: She loves to help out, but sometimes, she gets tired and just wants to get away. She loves playing her violin, and can get frustrated when she doesn’t have time. She wants to be in the forest, and help everyone, but she knows its hard to make people see the balance of life.

History: Lisiana’s parents died when Lisiana was six, and she went to live with her aunt and uncle. The year she found out about her having the powers she had had a boyfriend, but as soon as he found out, he quickly urged his parents to move away and they did. They never say each other again.

Other: She doesn’t act like she wants love, but she really does.
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Aw, my old sign from this one was taken. I'll take Aries as a replacement.
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I forgtot the gender section add that to your profile if you've made one, and the rest of you who have called a spot start making your people.

Here is mine

Name: Paris Gogden

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Sign: Aquarius

Weapon: Two gourds filled with water.

Power: Hydrokinesis, the ability to move water with his mind. Can even control the temperature of the water. Making it so hot it boils or so cold it freezes.

Appearance: Dark black hair, medium height, dark blue eyes. Sign is located on his stomach.


Personality: Paris is contemplative. He can sit in any given spot and stare at nothing lost in though. To calm himself further he likes to go swimming. It takes alot to anger him but when he is angry he is unable to contain it. He knows this and performs several stress relieving exercises. He's likes having friends, but is extreaml yprotective of his private time.


History: He discovered his ability one night when it was raining he and his mother had stopped at a gas station and a man came up and attacked his mom. In a burst of energy the very rain condensed on the man crushing him. Ever sense Paris has been careful about using his powers. His mother is a Greek mythology teacher and in her obsession she named all her children after Greek figures. His brother is Brutus and his sister is Helen

Other: Up for love
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Name: Ray Solmony

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sign: Aries- Ram

Weapon: He uses two maces with horns ejecting from the base. He either beats you with it like a club, or he uses the horns on the end like swords.

Power: He has surprising speed and strength, along with bones as tough as steel. He can also eject two twin bone masses from any part of his body that act as ramming horns.

Appearance: http://men-haircuts.com/wp-content/uplo ... tyle-4.jpg
His symbol goes from top to bottom on his chest.

Personality: He is generally a calm and helpful person. He is very closed minded and stubborn though, and if he says no there is really no way around it. He has a very short temper as well, and when he is angry resorts to violence. They give him pills to help calm him, which make him sleepy and out of focus a lot, while not very much effecting him.

History: When he was seven he accidentally lost his temper, and brought down half of his house. After that he was recruited.
Other: Up for love, I guess.
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