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"Oi, all of you! Pay attention to me! Damn it, i demand you include me in this story right now!" I yelled to no one in particular. "Alright thats it. It's because i'm a skeleton isn't it? Its because i'm DEAD! Well in that case," With that he released Mikael from the vault with in his mind. Pale flesh began to billow from beneath his clothes and cover his boney visage.
"Better," smiled Mikael, running his fingers through his golden blond hair. Some had descibed as an angel who had fallen from heaven. If only they'd known how close to the truth they were. His unearthly beauty was not of this world. It was from Evil Earth. A land where bad guys always. He was, quiet litterally a startling beautiful, yet completely evil, Prince Charming.


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rofl this is the reason you're mah home dawg Amzille.
let's get this parataaay started. woo (:

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I winked at the atonished faces of this very low IQed in the "Just add water JD" object field..
"Though Amy. You do realize that this fairly rude behaviour of yours is making me quite angry towards you at the current moment." I said looking at AquaMarine straight in the eye.
"What do you ever so mean Just Dance?" Amy asked a confused look beginning to form in her cornia.
"You know how much I dislike ballet. You seriously need to read the directions. You need to add warm water in order for me to come out all Pop and stuff. Ya dig?" I scowled while saying.
"Dig homieh. I declare that from now on this mistake will not be made again." She said.
I gave her a slight nod and looked over at some blonde haired angel sorta dude and summer girl all giggly and jumpy around him.
I rolled my eyes.
Lovely.

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irishfire

Irish tried to crawl toward the door of the room. "Gsp," she croaked, "we must get away from the evil Ripples who makes me bleed overlymuch!"
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SiSi

As SiSi passed by the cell door she noticed everyone standing around in there. Looks like the Boss's plan has finally worked, she thought. She turned and pushed open the door, then announced her arrival.

"Greetings, everyone. I hope you are doing well--especially you pathetic YWS writers who seem not to know that there's a lot more to life than writing."

*Shocked silence*
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
--Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134

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"Are here you are," Grinned Mikael, breaking a dazzling smile which showed off the very tip of his vampire fangs. "All of you come a long now follow me. If you don't want to be caught by the failed extras for the tinman in Wizard of Oz." Almost without thinking then began to forward, startled by my visage and eagerness to help. Well that and my hypnotic gaze.
"Wait aren't you a bad guy?" Asked one. Damn new it was good to last.
"Not at all i'm here to help. Now which of you needs the heart, the brain and the 'courage'." They all look around bemused. I produced a bag and from it removed a human heart, a brain in a jar, and a large bottle of wiskey.
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"Mine!" Aqua shouted and pounced on the good looking baddie type guy. She wrinkled her nose and pushed away the heart and the brain, ignoring his shouts which were soon muffled by JD's hands.
Aqua grabbed the whiskey and hopped off his stomach, winking as she signalled to JD and began to back down the corridor.
"Let's roll, dawg." She drawled to her partner as they both began to speed up, keeping their eyes on the guy who was obviously reluctant to leave the rest of the prisinors.
"It is curious how often you humans manage to obtain that which you do not want."

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Apollo began to reply, but sounds of a commotion stopped him.
"Wait. We should se what that was." He said unnsescesarily.
He snapped his fingers, making a tiny light in the dark corridor.
"Let's go." He silently levitated, sneaking around. BUt then he had a moment of memory, a flashback. Because his powers were the product of writing, he was subject to random flashbacks in points of his life that if, say, some writer was controlling him, would give a little explanation.
He was his old self, happily ready to return to YWS. Then, it had happened. He ran into the giant notebook that you had to put in your username and password into to gain accsess. But it would not budge. He continued to do it for an hour. He felt broken inside. So he pushed the forbidden button. The "Register" button. And after that, he became Apollo. Some still knew him by his old name. The name that wouldn't work anymore. It was... ANate145.
Apollo passed out on the floor.
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SiSi

She sighed and turned to Mikael. "Don't worry...you look after the prisoners, I'll go after the escapees," she said, then rushed off after the escaping prisoners.

Once in the hallway, she passed by Skeyeler. She coldly nodded to SiSi, then SiSi returned the favor by bowing stiffly. As Skeyeler again went on her way, SiSi asked, "By the way, Skeyeler...you didn't, by any chance, notice any escaping prisoners, did you?"

"Ah." Skeyeler stood transfixed for a moment, trying to suppress her anger. "No, I didn't, SiSi. Did you?!"

"Can't say I did, Miss Second-in-Command," SiSi coolly replied, then raised a hand in farewell. "Well, I'll see you later, I guess...."
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
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Mira

Mira continued walking down the hallway, jumping as she heard some noises from behind. It sounded like someone was complaining about someone escaping. Well, as long as it wasn't her they were looking for...

A light exited from a room just at the end of the room. The door was cracked open and noises came from within. Mira moved closer, listening to an evil minion mumbling about paperwork. She held back a chuckle and continued on.
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Summer tried to slyly follow Aqua and JD out, making it to the doorway before getting caught.

The Mikael guy chuckled, and she froze. "It's obvious which one of you needs the brains here."

Summer smiled sheepishly, trying to inch her way out.

"Hey, you, whatever your name is, stay here," Mikael said calmly but seriously. "I was serious about the tinman extras."

"Oh yeah right," Summer scoffed. "No one will ever catch Sum-" At that moment, Summer was tackled to the ground by a cold, mechanical tinman.

The tinman scooped her up and dropped her back down on the floor again with ease. Summer grimaced and kicked the robot's shins. The robot only responded by promptly kicking her back. Summer clutched her throbbing shin and rejoined the circle.

"Not going to run away again, are you?" Mikael asked. Summer shook her head.
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June -

And there they stood -- Mizzle and June at what seemed to be the end of the world. The trail of giraffe footprints ended mysteriously and there was a ten foot drop down the side of a cliff before more land continued. Mizzle dragged a dirty hand across her tired face, trailing dust across her face.

"Well," she croaked. If anyone was in need of water, it was Mizzle. "This is..."

"Exciting," June finished. She was tired and her legs ached and she desperately wished she could crash on her couch... or what used to be a couch anyway. June had seen the remains of the living room through a hole in the wall-- the couch was nonexistant. Instead, a pile of wood, fluff and fabric sat where the proud couch once stood.

"Yeah," Mizzle said sarcastically, "this is totally what I need to spend my afternoon doing."

Mizzle dropped to the ground and sat, letting her legs dangle off the cliff. June say besides her.

"What do you think happened to the girls?" June asked, worry becoming prominent in her voice for the first time. "You don't think giraffes can harm them, do you?"

Mizzle shrugged her tired shoulders. "Maybe. I mean, who would have thought that giraffes could destroy a house and kidnap them?"

"Right." June sighed and pushed her hair back. "We need to find them."

Mizzle said nothing to this. What would she have said? It was understood that they needed to be found. Otherwise, she wouldn't be here now.

"Mizzle?" June said suddenly.

"Hmm?"


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"Let's roll? So not gangsta. Your thinking 70's sweetheart." I said my nose crinkled.
"Right..uhmm.." Amizzle pondered trying to think of a better word to fit our oh-so-pimpin vocabulary in gangsta talk.
"Hey. Look's like we have a little minion follower on our hand." I said grinning slyly as I pointed behind us. One of those YWSers had thought of us had obviously escapees.
Amy chuckled.
"Escapees?" She said.
"Ha. In their opinion? Yes. Now..why not show them who we really are?" I said.
"Ya got it JDizzle."




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SiSi

"Hey," she coldly interrupted JD and Amy's conversation, arms crossed. "Where do you guys think you're going? Because I assure you--" here she evilly chuckled--"if you think you're going to escape, there is no way that will ever happen."

She started walking slowly up to them, one step at a time, always with that menacing smile on her face... :shock:
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
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Irish limped up to Sisi and tapped her on the shoulder. "Um.. excuse me? Could you help me stop bleeding? A Band-aid will probably be fine!" She said gesturing toward her chewed up shoulder, broken nose, and shot kidney.
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SiSi

"Of course, Irish. Wow, you got yourself banged up pretty bad! Let me guess...Skeyeler?"

As Irish nodded, Amy and JD started sneaking away, but were forced to stop as SiSi coldly commented, "You know, Amy, JD, do you honestly think I'm so stupid that I didn't notice you guys creeping away? In fact, why don't you help me out." She gave the 2 of them a crumpled sheet of paper. "Here are directions to the Health Room. There you will find some gauze, band-aids, and hydrogen peroxide as well. Bring me 3 strips of gauze, 3 band-aids, the bottle of hydrogen peroxide, and a few cotton swabs as well. Come on now, hurry up!! The last thing we want on our hands is an infected YWS-er!"

Her businesslike tone made it clear to Amy and JD that they'd better be back in less than 3 minutes, or she'd have the whole building alerted of their escape.

As they hurriedly went on their way, SiSi leaned against the wall. "So, how's life, Irish?" she asked casually.
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
--Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134

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