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The YWS Adventure

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This storybook is (hopefully) going to be completely fun. I'll get through all of the important information so we can start. If you have any questions, please PM me. :)

Plot
One day, Juney the mommeh was watching over her three wonderful children: Gsp, Mira, and Sophie. The kids are playing and having fun when suddenly... Duh duh duuuuh. *dramatic music* A herd of evil giraffes storm the house and take the three little girls! June is frantic and gathers a group of her friends to find the girls. However, the team realizes that they aren't the only ones to have been kidnapped recently.

As a deeper meaning to the crimes come to light, it seems that all is not well in YWS. Who is the villain? What will happen to the children kidnapped?

Characters
The amount of members that join is unlimited, though I would like each person to only use one character. You will be playing as yourself. :) All that you need to do is pick a side. You will be good or evil. Please PM your choice of side and I will tell you any information that you need to know.

Side Info
Juniper will be the leader of the group to go out searching for the kidnapped members. Make sure to listen to her orders! Do not make your character too powerful (aka no god-modding). Keep everything you write appropriate for twelve and older. Violence and a bit of cursing is okay, but don't overdo it. Also, please do not kill off anybody's character without first consulting them.

Okay, I think that's everything. I'll add more information if I can think of anything, but basically everything is up to you! Either you will save the beautiful town of YWS or help ruin it! What will it be?

Edit: Oops. I did forget to mention that you can also be kidnapped. :)
Last edited by Mira on Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mira leaned against the wall in her room, an open book perched on her knees. She was entranced in the story and not at all concerned with the chores her mother had given to her that day. A stack of clothes sat in the corner of the room and the sheets of her bed were thrown on the ground. Mira had no care for cleanliness, though, not when she could exist in a completely different realm of being.

Maybe if she had been doing something else, however, she might have noticed the noise that was coming from outside.
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Gsppcrocks10

Gsppcrocks10 sat on her bed, scribbling in her notebook frantically. She was falling behind, so far behind... Shouldn't have wasted your time in the Storybook forum and chat. She berated herself silently. She was into the second week of NaNoWriMo, and things were getting intense. Just two thousand more words... you can do this. She was concentrating so hard on her novel that she didn't see the spotted leg by her window.
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When the wall exploded inward, Mira knew something just had to be wrong. She was sure walls didn't normally doing that. And she did the thing any normal child would do when such a thing occurs; she screamed. The dear girl threw her book at the monster that came into the room, its eyes daring to look at her.
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Is it ok if I get captured? :D
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Definitely. ^-^ We'll need a good amount of people for each part: the search party, the kidnapped, and the villains.
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Awesome :D

AquaMarine

She stepped back from her newly painted wall with relief. It was now the same shade of blue as her desk, bag, door, shelves, radiator, curtain and the majority of her wardrobe. A job well done, she decided with a certain air of smugness.
Happily, she grabbed the nearest book and began to read it, her eyes flickering uneasily to her laptop where a big neon sign flashing the words "WRITE NANO" was appearing on her desktop. With a sigh, she flipped the lig and closed it, smiling as the annoying message disappeared from view. She was doing NaNo tomorrow, her computer should know that.
She was so wrapped up in her book that she didn't notice the rather loud hoof noises that seemed to be getting rather closer. Nor did she notice that she was being picked up and thrown into a bag; until it went dark that is.
"Hey! Turn the lights back on," she shouted at the unseen kidnapper, "you aren't even gonna let me read? What kind of monster are you?!"
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Gsppcrocks10

Gsppcrocks10 was just about to finish off her chapter when she heard a scream. That's Big Sis! She leapt out of bed, closing her notepad and sticking it under the mattress. She walked briskly out the door. "Big Sis?" She called.
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Mira

Mira frantically crawled to the either side of the bed, but the giraffe's head bent down. Biting the back of her shirt, the monster raised her into the air. The girl was completely afraid of heights, and this caused her to scream even more.
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Gsppcrocks10

Gsppcrocks10 raced into Mira's bedroom and froze, staring. Then an angry look crossed her face. "Let go of my big sister you spotted freak!" She shouted. Suddenly another giraffe busted through the wall behind her and hit her on the back of the head with its own head. She crumpled to the floor, unconscious. The new giraffe lifted her up by the back of the shirt, like the other had done to Mira.
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Mira

"Lil Sis!!!" Mira screamed, tears starting to fall down her cheeks. Looking at the other giraffe, she begged, "Please, let her go! Leave her alone!"

However, giraffes are not known for understanding the speech of human other than their master. Both of the animals turned around and left the house, traveling to who knows where.
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**Can I join and be captured too?**
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**Well, considering the fact that there's only three people, and that I asked you to join... go ahead. :P**
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**Hahahaha thanks!**
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irishfire

Irish looked up from her book reluctantly at the noise coming from Aqua and Mira's room. She sat up, what are they doing? Hitting the wall with hammers? She thought. Suddenly she heard Mira beginning to scream and she bolted for the door. Before she got to it a random wind blew her door shut and clicked, locked tight. Irish scowled and pointed to the door. "Ok," she called to the air, "that is incredibly non-realistic! I am inside there is no wind indoors smartypants!"

Suddenly a figure appeared behind her and grabbed the back of her shirt, and threw her into a lumpy bag. "Ow!" Aqua yelled when Irish landed on her. "Watch where you land!" Irish felt her hands around the bag looking for Aqua. "Aqua! Whats going on?!"
I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant. - Robert McCloskey

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Student: Wait, legally?

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