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Summer suppressed a burp. "Beats me," she shrugged.

"Oh, ummm, Summer, you have a little ketchup on your mouth," Aqua said skeptically.

"Oh." Summer attempted to wipe it off, but really just smeared it more. "Did I get it?"

"Yup, you got it alright."

Just then Gsp and Irish ran by, Skeyeler and Ripples following.

"Prison break! C'mon guys let's watch!" Summer exclaimed excitedly, jumping to her feet. Unfortuneately for Summer, she got up much too fast for a person with as little coordination as her, and proceeded to run two feet before doing a nasty face plant. Summer somersaulted so that she was sitting with her legs tucked underneath her.

"Ow, I think I broke my nose!" she said, gingerly touching it as it bled and swelled up. "Anybody have a tissue?"
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Aqua rolled her eyes at Summer and proceeded over to the window that Mo was standing at. She pressed her face against the window and began to breathe onto it, created a big cloud of condensation that covered the surface.
She leant back and drew her finger over it, writing a sentence that showed up against the white.
After a while, Aqua leant back and admired her handiwork. The window was now adorned with the slightly smudged words. "You smell bad."
She turned round and and grinned at the rest of the group.
"Anybody got a sharpie? I want to immortalize this moment."
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This is the SB Amzille told me to join?
Cool, I'll catch on for sure!




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xDD Oh my God Aqua
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Mira stared at Aqua and then looked at Lil Sis and Irish running by. What in the world was going on? They had been kidnapped, of course, but what now... Nobody would even notice if she just slipped away and tried to find a way to escape.
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Skyeler.

She was just enraged by the fact that she had the nerve to touch her. Even when her dog was on two legs, dressed as rambo, with a machine gun. Thankfully Ripples stopped Skyeler from biting the face off of anyone.

Ripples had shot Irish in the kidney. "Oh... we don't want her to die... right Mommy?" Skyeler narrowed her eyes. "No." Ripples took a few steps back. "Oh look! I'm so cute!" Ripples gave her best cute eyes. Skyeler smiled at these eyes.
All I can hear; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". Even those tears; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". No one's frightened of playing it. Everyone's saying it. Flowing more freely than wine. All through your life; "I me mine".




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I laughed at Amy's writing. DAB LLEMS UOY - well, I guess that was suppused to be "you smell bad". I laughed at her, she hadn't realised she'd written it so infact, she smelled bad. :D
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha




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Irish collapsed as she was shot in the kidney by Ripples. Tears streamed down her face as she lost more blood. I swear I'm never going near Boston Terriers again!She thought furiously.
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She slapped some fuchsia substance that came from a jar with a toxic waste sign on the side on a slice of bread with a resounding slap. After slapping it a few more times, she put on more the same way and finished her sandwich, folding the bread in half. Taking a big bite, Tex swaggered out the door, aimlessly walking down the hallway. Wow, I need to ask the Submarine Collector where he buys his slop, she thought. This is fantastic! Sticky, yet tasty.

She heard a commotion and gunshot around a corner and decided to go say hi. When she saw it was only el second-in-command and her psycotic dog trying to eat the captives, she went up behind them and said, "Wha tha thon tieth? Hathn thn?"

Skyeler turned to look at her, whipped cream foaming out her mouth and shooting out her nose, and asked sharply, "What?"

Tex took another bite and replied. "Ah thad, wha tha thon? Bethn uth a thew kithnatheeth, uh?" She turned to the captives who were bleeding and missing parts of their bodies. "Hah gahs. Enthoeeguh yoe sthaee?"

Skyeler screamed. "Can't you think of something more useful to do than watch me fight and eat who-knows-what?"

Tex took offense and screamed back, the goop slowly wearing down in her mouth. "Ah thou kiththing me? Theh ah ounlee, whah, tou dothen peethple oun thi boath, an wth thah ien minth, thouah thellien me thah I dohn doo nothien? Wiel, juth foe thath, I ahm leaving! I'm going right over to their side and fighting against you! Howdaya like that? Huh? How would you like it if our side, soon to be your side, broke up and their side, soon to be my side, won? Huh? Huh?"

And with that, she took another bite and stormed off to stand behind the captives-- er, her new teammates.
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Aqua pulled a face at Mo through the window and sighed. The book hadn't really filled her up, and her tummy was starting to make some really strange, hungry noises.
Outside, a slanging match started between Skylar and another baddie type person. Aqua couldn't really make out the words, it seemed like the baddie type person couldn't really get their words out. In the end, they stormed into the cell and took their place with Aqua's group, obviously joining their side. And then Aqua saw it in the baddie type person's hand. She. Had. A. Sandwich.
"FOOD!" She screamed and jumped on the person who had just joined their motley group. They were knocked to the ground and Aqua proudly perched herself on their stomach, grabbing the end of the sandwich and taking a bite triumphantly.
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*head\desk*
Aqua dawg I demand you to bring me in right this second.

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"Oi, all of you! Pay attention to me! Damn it, i demand you include me in this story right now!" I yelled to no one in particular. "Alright thats it. It's because i'm a skeleton isn't it? Its because i'm DEAD! Well in that case," With that he released Mikael from the vault with in his mind. Pale flesh began to billow from beneath his clothes and cover his boney visage.
"Better," smiled Mikael, running his fingers through his golden blond hair. Some had descibed as an angel who had fallen from heaven. If only they'd known how close to the truth they were. His unearthly beauty was not of this world. It was from Evil Earth. A land where bad guys always. He was, quiet litterally a startling beautiful, yet completely evil, Prince Charming.
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Summer grabed a tissue from someone and wiped the caked on blood off her nose carefully, trying not to touch it too much.

"Oi, all of you! Pay attention to me! Damn it, i demand you include me in this story right now!" she heard someone yell behind her.

She turned to see someone that could only be described as an angel, glaring at all of them. Summer, being as nervous as she is around guys, blushed and scooted closer to the group.

"You!" he yelled, turning his glare on her. She let out a surprised squeak. "Why are you running away from me?"

"Well, if you're evil and I'm good shouldn't I run away from you?" Summer babbled nervously. "I mean, if you're-"

"Never mind, never mind!"
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Mira

The shadows of the submarine seemed to dance, causing Mira to continually squeal. Shivers went down her spine as she ran into a cobweb, fear completely overwhelming her. Pressing herself against the wall as a robot marched by, Mira felt that the shadows were going to swallow her.

"Maybe I shouldn't have left the others..." she muttered as she continued down the hall, her arms folded around herself. "It's so cold... But I'm sure there's got to be a control room somewhere... and maybe I'll be able to save all of us."

Determination filling her, Mira raised her head and straightened her body out. There was no such thing as 'maybe'. She would find a way to get this hulking mass of metal to land.
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((Fiiine JDizzle. I'll bring you in. Uhmmm, ok. Got it :D ))

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Aqua patted Tex's head and hopped off her stomach, swallowing the last of her sandwich noisily. She passed Summer who was babbling noisily to one of the baddie type looking guys.

Aqua rolled her eyes and carried on walking to the corner she was aiming for. Sitting down, she began to rummage in her pocket.
"No, nope nothing in that one." she sighed and moved onto her back pockets. After a few minutes her hands closed around what she wanted and Aqua drew a small object out of her pocket jubilantly.

It was a very small cube of some kind, and sticking to the cube was a big label with the words "JUST ADD WATER." Next to the label was a tiny bottle full of water.
Aqua nodded and, picking up the bottle, poured the small amount of water ofter the equally small cube. Aqua sat back and waited as the cube began to expand.

First the flaps opened and some tinny ballerina music began to play from somewhere in the box. Then, a tiny figure began to rise from inside the cube. As the figure got bigger and bigger you could see it's face scowling, and eventually it bent down inside the now miniscule cube and pressed something. Immediately the tinkly ballet music stopped and some synthesised, high pitched pop song emenated out of the cube which was evidentally just a small beat box. The figurine sang along and eventually her voice became less high-pitched and more human.

After what seemed like an age of the song, which made Aqua want to squash her figurine back into the box and throw it at the baddie type guys, the figurine finally stopped growing and looked Aqua straight in the eye.
"Amzille, ma home dawg!"
Aqua grinned at the group of people who were watching them with wide eyes. She took a small bow and laughed.
"Grow your own JD! Just add water."
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