I didn't like my original chapter two of this, so I changed it completely... I'm not too keen on this one either, to be perfectly honest! I really, genuinely struggle with the beginning of a story. If anyone has any advice on beginning a story, please share!
This will make a lot more sense if you read the first chapter ~
Can You See Me? Chapter One
Thanks in advance for any reviews, xoxo Skins
I stared blankly ahead of me. It felt as though I was going to throw up. My head was spinning; my heart was beating frantically, and my entire body was shaking. Any ounce of happiness that was inside of me had vanished within a matter of seconds, and all it took was one stupid mistake.
I was sitting in my English class, not really bothered about what was going on. Jax and Cassie were chatting about a movie or something, but I wasn’t listening. Flicking his fringe off his face, Jax turned to me.
“I’m so right, aren’t I?” he said, nodding at me.
Lifting my head from the rather dirty desk, I looked at him. His eyes were wide; his lips curved upwards slightly. He was still nodding.
“Huh?” I mumbled, breathing out heavily, stretching out my arms.
“Dude, is that all you do in school?” Jax laughed. “Sleep?”
I rolled my eyes at him. He had a tendency to forget that not everyone had photographic memory. He also forgot that not everyone found school as easy as going to the toilet. Not all of us actually enjoyed learning about pointless crap.
Jax was still looking at me. He also had a staring problem. I sighed heavily, before lowering my head back onto the school desk.
“James Webster,” Mr. Nichols spoke sternly. “Is there something you’d like to share with the class? I’m rather certain that you’re not discussing Hamlet.”
Jax’s face went bright red as he mumbled "No," under his breath. Cassie giggled quietly at his sombre reaction. Jax pulled his dyed black fringe over his face with his long, thin fingers, avoiding any eye contact with the teacher.
I’d almost fallen asleep, when there was a quiet knock on the classroom door. Not bothering to open my eyes, I heard the headmistresses squeaky voice.
“Can I see Maxxie Lovett please?” Miss Cheddar spoke calmly.
I opened my eyes, lifting my head. I turned my attention to the small, mouse-like woman standing in the doorway. There was a wide smile plastered on her plain face, but her eyes told another story. They looked unsure, nervous. What had I done now?
Sighing for the hundredth time, I stood up. The fake smile was still spread across Miss Cheddar’s face. As I headed towards the doorway, she spoke again.
“Bag,” she said, nodding at my desk.
Gritting my teeth, I dragged myself back towards my desk. She wasn’t going to expel me, was she? My parents would kill me. I hadn’t done anything wrong. I couldn’t think of anything anyway. As I passed the group of Britney Spears wannabes, I heard them snicker viciously. Freak, I heard one of them giggle. Gay boy, another one laughed. Why was it that just because my best friend was gay, I had to be? I gritted my teeth. I was lucky that I was good at ignoring people.
After leaving the room, I felt a small shiver run down my spine. Shaking the feeling out of my body, I looked ahead of me. Miss Cheddar hadn’t said anything, which was odd, because normally if I was in trouble she’d be lecturing me right now. That’s when I began feeling nervous. Something didn’t feel right. I had no idea what that something was, but it definitely felt wrong. After passing many classrooms, each one filled with unenthusiastic kids, we finally reached the headmistresses’ office.
“Stay here,” Miss Cheddar demanded, signalling for me to sit down on one of the cushioned seats outside her office.
Without saying another word, I immediately did as I was told. I was feeling even worse now. There was a small lump forming at the back of my dry throat. I attempted to peer through the small window on the top of Miss Cheddar’s office door, but I couldn’t see a thing. I dove my hand into my trouser pocket and brought out my iPod. Music always helped me escape from reality. Before I could put the headphones into my ears, someone distracted me. Well, you could say something distracted me.
I stared at the pretty girl in front of me. The second I saw her, I knew that there was something wrong. Horribly wrong.
“Annabel...?” I spoke slowly.
Annabel didn’t say a word. She didn’t even flinch. She simply stared at me, her eyes full of sympathy. My heart was slowly beginning to beat faster every second.
“Annabel?” I asked again.
As I spoke, I could hear the desperation in my own voice. A small, rather pathetic smile appeared on Annabel’s face before she suddenly vanished. Shoving my iPod back into my pocket, I breathed in heavily.
What felt like hours later, I turned my head to see Miss Cheddar, standing in the office doorway. Behind her was a tall dark haired man, dressed in a police uniform. I swallowed hard. Still with a stupid, fake smile spread across her face, Miss Cheddar sat on the seat next to me.
“Maxxie,” she said, way too calmly to be comforting. “It’s your parents, darling,”
She placed her limp hand onto my knee. She paused for a few seconds too long before finally speaking again. “There’s been an accident,”
That was the moment the world, as I knew it, rapidly came to an end.
Edit: Thanks for the reviews guys. I checked out the whole period thing. There doesn't need to be a period after Miss, so I've changed it now.
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