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Name: Anne Breden

Age: 14

Vampire/Werewolf/Human: Werewolf

Appearance: Anne is short for her age; this may have had something to do with her growing up in a slum. She is pale, not in the ultra-romantic way, but in the sickly, pallid way. Anne's hair is shaggy and tangled, but, if it were cared for, would be a light brown and quite shiny. Her eyes are a golden brown, but they are mostly shadowed. All in all, she looks like one of those Dickensian characters who has 'I am going to die' written all over him/her.
As a wolf, she is scrawny, and small, her brown fur scruffy; her head is angular, and one of her ears has a rip in it (in human form, that ear is cut).

Personality: She doesn't really trust many people, although she does wonder why they are fighting in the first place. She isn't stupid, more, she was educated by her mother until she was put to work. She is trying to learn more, and especially enjoys poetry; she'd never admit it.

Special power or skill: She can remember scents longer than any other werewolf, so she's useful in tracking.

Other:(history) Anne Breden was the fourth child of a servant in London. She was sent to work as a maid since she was ten, often not getting more than a few hours sleep in between working shifts. This was before she was bitten by a werewolf. After one day of being bitten, in which she a) did all the work too quickly, b) broke her brother's nose, and c) almost killed her friend when she turned into a wolf, decided to join the pack, deciding that it was too hard to try to be a werewolf in a human's world.


(Is this alright? If not, I can change it.)
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I just added in the history thing, by the way.

Name: Rena Astle

Age: 19

Species: Vampire

Appearance: 5'4, pale skin, piercing green eyes and dark brown hair. Quite muscly.

Personality: She takes quite a cynical, sarcastic view on life. She doesn't want to be the leader; preferring to take the back seat, let others make the important decisions and then disregard them and go her own way. Rena has no respect for most people, unless they have done something that she believes is worth her respect. She used to have a lot of drive, but most of that has dissipated over the last 70 years.

Special power or skill: Speed and combat skills.

History: She was turned a very, very long time ago (about a century). Her whole family was killed by a rogue werewolf - she went crazy with revenge and seeked out a way that she could kill the wolf. She searched and searched and searched, eventually finding out about the Vampire's hate of Werewolves; she found a lone vampire and pleaded with him to change her - he agreed and she became a vampire. She managed to track down and kill the werewolf after 30 years - killing both him, and 5 other werewolves that tried to help him. She never felt any anger (or at least any more than other vampires) towards the other Werewolves, she was only ever after that one.
This story has become rather well known among Vampires, some use it as an example of their great dedication. Others use it to show off Vampires' strength and skills. Most think that Rena is crazy.
Despite her age, Rena has never held a position of importance within the Vampire clan; she is deemed too flighty and stubborn. However, her fighting skills ensure that she takes a lead role in many fights.

Other: Up for love. Has a silver bracelet given to her by her mother that she never takes off.
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((Someone needs to make some elders. I'd do it myself, but I've already made my two characters))
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I will make one. Do both species have elders?
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((Yeah, both have elders))
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Name: Sharona (Sha-ROH-nah)

Age: Looks 25, but is the oldest werewolf.

Species: Werewolf (Elder)

Appearance: 5'7, thin but muscly. She has silvery blonde hair and white, almost transparent, skin. Her eyes are a bright, piercing blue. Despite having the features of a 25 year old, everyone who has met Sharona says that she has the "aura" (for want of a better word) of immense age.
In wolf form her fur is the most perfect silver, with a white star on her forehead.

Personality: Sharona is the oldest, wisest and cleverest werewolf. And she knows it. However, she is far from a big-headed, arrogant blonde. Sharona is sharp, witty and blunt. She will tell people what they are doing wrong and will get impatient if they do not listen or challenge her. Sharona's anger can be sudden and immense, she will become fierce if anything threatens her clans, friends or herself.

Special power or skill: Intelligence

History: She is the oldest living wolf, equal in her age to most of the Vampire elders. Sharona was bitten by the one of the first ever wolves - she was his first "creation". He bit her because he fell in love with her, after watching her obsessively for months on end. She was furious with the change, when she was human she had been about to marry the man of her dreams the next week. In a rage she killed the man who had turned her. However, she tried to escape and go back to her fiance, but when she told him what she had become he rejected and humiliated her. She accepted her fate and began to live her life as a werewolf, only changing those who she knew would have a better life living with er. She has never made any extremely close friends or fallen in love. But she has helped a great many along the way.

Other: Up for love although might not happen because of her age. But that might not matter if it is true love.

((That OK?))
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Name: Rayen (Ray) Redthorn


Age: 21


Vampire/Werewolf/Human: Werewolf


Appearance: In human form, she's tall and slim, with brownish blonde hair. She has a long fringe which constantly sweeps over her gold eyes. She has an unearthly air of grace around her when she moves. In wolf form, she is a creamy white with brown paws and tail tip, harsh yellow eyes and a brown muzzle. Her paws are small and dainty, and her legs are long and slender. She has a light, sleek pelt.

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Personality: Towards strangers she is cold, harsh and rude. She prefers to poke fun at their intelligence and make snarky comments. She prefers silence over speaking when it comes to more worthy opponents and will only loosen up around those she trusts. Towards close friends, she is teasing and smug, and loves to have little mock arguments or play fights. She's well known for her rebellious nature in the pack. She's the perhaps the most efficient warrior in the pack however so the elders permit her to stay. She tends to have a bit of a short fuse. She has an extreme problem with authority figures and is extremely irritated that a 'child' has taken over Alphess position. She's been thinking about challenging her leader but has decided to put it off for a while, as fighting among themselves is the last thing the pack would need. She can come off as intimidating, especially because of her harsh yellow eyes.


Special power or skill: Her eyesight and tracking skills cannot be matched by any other werewolf in the pack. She is also completely silent in movement and and excellent warrior.


Other: She was born into the pack and is proud to be a werewolf. She has a particular bitterness towards the vampires and her encounters with the creatures are practically legendary. One night, she set off by herself to hunt Mikaela, one of the greatest warriors in the coven. She was greatly outnumbered and was fought back quickly, suffering serious injuries. Due to this damage, she now has a strange tic in wolf form; twitching her left ear back and forward.
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You're right Moo, I know werwewolves change once and can't change back, and Lycans can.

Ok, so characters so far:

Werewoloves:
Moonchanger-Forestquessn88
Layla Blackblood: Silversun
Jonathan Matthews: TalaPaulwic
Anna Breden: Hero
Sharona: AquaMarine
Rayen Redthorn: Mad_Moo25524

Vampires:
Rena Astle: AquaMarine
Ruben Thatcher: Buggy
Mikaela Ibanescu: Pudin.junidf

Humans
Lynnete Taylorson: TalaPaulwic
Paul Thatcher: Buggy

OK so, we're werewolf overloaded, so next characters, have to be vampires or humans.
adn I'm making another vampire character.
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I'll make a vampire one if needed. :)
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Wow, not only am I the only female human, I'm the only human whom stalks wolves, and vamps! This is awesome.

So far to all of the above.
All I can hear; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". Even those tears; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". No one's frightened of playing it. Everyone's saying it. Flowing more freely than wine. All through your life; "I me mine".




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Yeah, Paul doesn't stalk wolves and vampires. He gets stalked. xD
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True...
But this way I can save everyone the cheesy "Oh please don't stalk my mister [either wolf or vampire]" line.
All I can hear; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". Even those tears; "I me mine, I me mine, I me mine". No one's frightened of playing it. Everyone's saying it. Flowing more freely than wine. All through your life; "I me mine".




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((I think we're better off without that, actually, thanks Tala. xD Maybe we should start a DT.))
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Yeah, a DT would be good to sort some stuff out. :P The vamps are also quite outnumbered at the moment :twisted:

Oh, and when can we start? :D
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I've realized, almost all the werewolves are female. If this is unfair to anyone, I will quickly give Anne a gender change.

Also, I'm thinking of creating a male vampire.
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

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