Lileh's Likity Reviews

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Hey there! So, I know I had a WRFF thread somewhere, but it's gone fairly neglected after the change from the Old YWS to the Current YWS. Anyway, I'll review anything, but I prefer
Romantic, Fantasy, Science Fiction and Other Fiction along with some Historical Fiction.

Plus, well, I have a lot of time to review so it's likely you'll have your review within 24 hours of posting it!

Just go ahead and post your title, approximate length, genre, and the link, and I'll get right on it.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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HI Lily!!

Could you review this poem please?
It's called Nothing Compares to You.
topic53241.html

Thanks so very much for your help

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Done! Anyone else want one?
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Lileh!
I'd like a review! I would, I really would!
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Narrative poetry, anyone?
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Step right on up! The batter's box is empty!
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Hi!!

could you review this poem please?
It's called The War Wind

topic53456.html

By the way, thanks for your review on my last poem

Thanks for the help
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Hi Lily!!! Um I would appreciate it if you would review my story "Learning The Truth" (It's no as stupid as it sounds :lol:) Um I'll post a link since the beginning so you don't get lost but what I would really like is a review for chapter six. Um I would like to know how I'm doing with characters plot and grammar (my grammar scares people. you have been warned...) But I wouldn't mind if you pointed anything else out. Sorry I'm rambling!! I'll shut up now!! So yeah... Thanks!!! :P Heres the link:

viewtopic.php?t=49812

Thanks!!!!
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I would love it if you read my short story Scarecrow
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It's in other fiction.
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Thanks a ton.
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Done and Done!

Who's next?
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