ZOMG Dono Drawing

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Tiffany's DnD character, Dracen. Enjoy, comment, complain--watevs.

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Hello, I’m Roon! Wow, this is awesome. I love the wrist and shoulder guards, they’re very well drawn, I love the design on them. There are a couple of things I would change though:

The eyes, the look slightly flat, I think they may be a little too close together too, and they seem to be looking in different directions.

I think the cheek and around the eyes on the outline of the face, if you see what I mean, should be more curved.

I know her breasts are supposed to be large, but they are a little too big I think, also they’re a slightly odd shape.

Her legs are quite large in comparison also.

But these are only very minor. I love the character, she’s so well drawn, you must have spent a fair bit of time on it! Your use of lighting and shadow are fantastic, and the detail is wonderful! Thank you for posting, it is a pleasure to see things like this.

Thank you again!

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Hey Buscador! Its a pretty awesome drawing but I have somethings I hope you dont mind me pointing out.

The only thing that could use some help is the face. First of all its too small which, by comparison, makes her body too big.

And the right eye is not placed very well. See, cuz theres too much space between the ear and the right eye and too litle space between the eye and the other eye. It makes it look kinda flat.

And her chin looks too small.

But thats all. Loved the details in the armour and clothing. Hope you post more!
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ZOMG is right! It's really a wonderful drawing and Tiff was totally right in squeeing after it. The details are amazing! :D As someone before mentioned, the eyes seemed to be looking somewhere else. Also, I think you can draw a little bit more hair before it's covered up in the bandanna. But, all in all, this is excellent. I'm glad you're drawing again. :)
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About time!

Once again, I'm impressed by your abilities. Bravo on the detail. Particularly like the shoulder piece. Everything looks brilliant in it, but the face seems a little off. After a bit of staring at it, I've decided that it's the nose. The way it's positioned doesn't make it look like it's her nose that's hiding her eye. It looks like that part of the face is round, but smooth, and that the eye is just curving around to the other side. Maybe take off a tiny bit of the bottom line of the nose, so it looks like it's close to the edge, and perhaps add a tiny line coming down from her eyebrow to show the bridge.

Actually, depending on the line near the eyebrow, you might not need to fix the line near her lips at all. It just depends on the angle.

Other than that, bravo.
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