I am awed by the simplicity and subtleness of this poem's point, how well the meaning is hidden among the richness of the imagery and how brilliantly you avoided turning this poem into a cliche.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir
Fantasic! ^^ But was it a poison dart frog? Was he intending to kill the moon and make plumit into the earth?
D;= I must know!
"The Circle of Rising!" Alita shreeked while looking down at the circle with a seven-pointed star with a rose in it. The star's points touched the edge of the chircle while the rose almost seemed to drift in the middle. ~The Alchemy Child
That was... amazing! Absolutely amazing! Screw JK Rowling, you're the most amazing writer the world has seen!
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
