My Most Embarrasing Moment

You should be an editor! I know I have a problem with run-on sentences. Actually I know about all of the stuff you mentioned but parallelism. Truthfully I hate grammar and spelling. Also I am excruciatingly lazy. It is a bit embarrassing you could go on so long. I like vocabulary though and would feel embarrassed if you thought I did not know what stubble is. I am putting some effort in this post so you can not correct my grammar. That would be my new most embarrassing moment!

Oh and Ha-ha! I am younger and can use that as an excuse!



(oh and my vote does not count so its tied)
i voted i was hit twice

...But it's your job as the writer to pay attention to grammar.

By the way, your avatar threw me off, too.

Oh and Ha-ha! I am younger and can use that as an excuse!

You know it!

But it may not work. I wrote this when I was 13: forum/viewtopic.php?t=3758&highlight=

No excuses! Just do your best. Editors hate being editors.

I read it it did have some problems, if you want my more complete opinions I posted them under it.

i dont think my embarrasing moment tops your but it was till pretty out there. this was like a couple of months ago, this took place in band practice. I am loosening my lips for playing the trumpet, and everything; the guy to my left goes "wow you would be a good kisser" i just kinda stare at him, then he leans over me (no he did not kiss me thank god) then he asked the girl (who i am good freinds with) that is sitting right next to me "is he?" she totally freaked out. and now he keeps bugging me to date her, very annoying, weird, and a little embaressing.