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*hey, i was just reading to what the other members say...i'm still confuse if Gale ahd actually died or not...




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If chinchillagirl wants Gale to die, it's in her rights.
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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OK people, Moo's going to get annoyed because chatting what she made the DT for. If we're going to talk, lets do it in the DT.
"Everything should be made as simple as possible, but not simpler" -Einstien




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kay: Ive already written this,


arya wrote:If she now really is dead then:

Jackie

Gale closed her eyes it forever.

Now I had to fulfill my job once again.

I had to separate her soul from the body, and bring her to the better place.

This was such a terrible job. especially with people you knew...


and foxfire wrote this:

foxfire wrote:asuka

alucard stared at me with both shock adn surprise. His eyes shifted from me to Hinata. Others had followed.

"Hinata, is that you?" ALucard asked, "What are you doing with her?"

"Hey, long time no see, dhampir boy...My friend Hinata here is with me now..." Hinata did said a word but moved a bit far from me.

"What are you talking about? Hinata would never..."

"follow me or Theo, sorry pal but things changed. She's a hunter now.

"I was not talking to you!" he growled before someone step forward. I can feel tension growing. I do not want a fight not since i saw someone had just died. I gave a sigh.

"I did not came here to fight...i just wanted to check what all these commotions about and now that i've know what it is...i have no bussiness what so ever...Though i want to give some sympathy to your lost."

"It was all your fault. You and the rest of the hunters. First you killed Gale and now you force Hinata to side in with you." he growled but i took no comment. I stared at the creature thatw as killed and remembered the girl who had made it. She is still loose somewhere else in this city and for a good reason, i can tell that those two new hunters know where she is.



Jackie:

Everyone stared at me, as I quickly separated Gales soul from her body, lifted her, and said, "Ill be right back OK?"

I flew away with Gales soul, brought her to the other side of the world, were all good souls come to rest.

I was kinda looking forward to also come there sometime, but I knew it wouldn't be likely that it would happen soon.

I watched Gale for a wile. Sad for the loss, but I knew this was a beautiful place to be.

I flew back to the others.
Life isn't fair,
its just fairer than death,
that's all...




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Hinata

Alucard was staring at me in disbelief not quite registering what Asuka had said. "Alucard, I said stepping forward, "Look, do I have any signs of physical injury? I joined of my own choice. I don't think it would have worked with me being around you guys anyway," I looked at him, "I could never have stuck being around you or your brother for long anyway." I began to turn around.
"Hinata, I don't believe you!" Alucard shouted at me, "you wouldn't do something like that!"
I laughed, "How long have you known me?" I asked.
Alucard frowned. "Exactly" I said, "Oh, and Deacon, you wanted to know what Alucard was saying to me earlier, well I give him my permission to tell you about how I murdered my parents."
"Hinata, don't do this." Alucard said again.
"Alucard, grieve for Gale, and get it over with quickly because the next time we meet, I won't hold back"
I turned and walked away, not caring if Asuka was coming with me.
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Asuka

i stared at watch her leave her friends but i had some doubt on how she treated them. I grinned secretly before i face the group.

"I'm sorry about your loss, but its not my or ehr problem. we did not kill her so don't blame on us and as for Hinata...sorry for that as well..."

i can hear thatthey were screaming for us but i ignored them and followed Hinata. I stared back at the dragon and try to make a plan to find the one who conjured such creature.




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ALUCARD~~

It was happening again. I could feel the Hunter rising in me again. That familiar feeling of hate swept through my body, leaving me devoid of senses and emotion. Once again I inherited my birthright. I became the son of Dracula and grew into my true power.

Breath puffed out of my lips, dry like the skin of a corpse.

"Believe me, you wont even get a chance to attack me."

I turned to Gale's dead body and closed her eyes. No matter how hard I tried, people seemed to die around me. I turned to the group gathered around me and gave my farewells.

"Get out of the city. Find a secluded place far away from here and stay there."

"What about you?"

I paused for a second, "you don't want to go where Im headed."

The darkness around me pulsed and in a second I was gone, half way across the city in the blink of an eye.

Triston~~

I cursed as he disappeared. Many more people were going to die before this would end.

I started to run after him, but turned back to the others, "Do what he says, right now its your only option."
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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I could hear footsteps rapidly echoing and splashing in the water coming up behind me, it was Asuka, "I'm sorry you had to confront them, you must feel really bad."
I turned and looked at her, my face was blank, she recoiled, "you," she said, "how can you say things like that and not show even the slightest trace of emotion?"
I didn't answer her.
"I don't understand how you couldn't care about that girls death."
"Why should I? I didn't even know her."
"What?"
I ignored her and upped my pace, I didn't want to be there if the others decided to come after us, "We should head back to base." I said.
Asuka followed behind in silence, deep in thought.
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Jackie

I had stood with the others for a while without anyone noticing me.

My head was somewhere beyond this world.

I wanted to be there.

I wanted the Peace splash over me.

Suddenly someone noticed me. "Hey Jackie. Your back."

At first I didn't hear.

"Jackie?" The voice repeated more urgently.

I was still spaced out.

*Anyone can jump in.*
Life isn't fair,
its just fairer than death,
that's all...




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Naomi-

"Jackie?" I asked quietly, somewhat worried about her odd expression. She jumped but looked at me calmly.

"Gale's okay."

"She is?" Jack asked.

"Now's not the time for this," said Deacon. "We need to find the next manhole and get out of these sewers."

All of us quietly and quickly walked down the wet sewers. It seemed like forever before we found an exit. When we came up, the light was unsettling. I cringed at the increased brightness and finally let myself go. I broke down and cried. I just couldn't handle it anymore.

"Naomi... Naomi we need to get going," Violet said quietly.

"Violet? Jackie!" someone yelled. I sniffled and looked up as Peyton ran over to Violet and embraced her younger sister. She looked at us all and how solemn we were.

"What happened?"

"A creature attacked us in the sewers. Gale was killed," Jack said slowly. Peyton looked horrified and a tear slid down her cheek.

"No, no no no no... I-I didn't mean-"

"Peyton, what's wrong?" Violet asked.

"I created that creature."

I wiped the tears from my eyes and looked hard at Peyton. "You created that thing?"

"I didn't mean to. The hunter. He-he made me- oh it's all my fault!"

Peyton looked down at her feet and trembled, all of us staring at her, wondering what to say.
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Asuka

"Make yourself at home...I'll cook after a few minutes." i said as i let Hinata into my apartment. The room was clean and polished.

Hinata said nothing but walked inside like a zombie.

"Heh, i was right to what i had said to Theo, hnters who were force to become one ended up much worst than before. I have a proof for my theory already." i said.

"You're not funny, Asuka!" she exclaimed before she dissapeared into the living room. I gave a sighed.

Oh great, Theo, you made a monster

the door bell rang and i answered it. It was Theo.

"I found this..." he said as he showed me my cellphone, "...don't ever lost it again. I tried to call you many times."

i took it before he showed me my flute.

"I did not know you played the flute..."
"Hmph, guess you don't judge me through my looks. And oh yeah, about Hinata, i should tanked you by making her a monster."

"Really?" he said.

"No! It's not...she was completely the same Hinata when you caught her!" i gave sarcasm in disgust.

"He have a meeting with the Hunter."
"again...but i was just about to cook. I'm desperately hungry after being in a fight and being kidnap."
"Just eb there, we're talking about the new recruits and bring Hinata as well..."

I sighed before he left. I asked him if he could come inside for dinner but he resigned. I shrugged before i retreat indoors looking at my picture for some advice.




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Hinata

I went into Asuka's living room and looked around, it was a simple room, I noted that she didn't have many belongings. A moment later she came in, "that was Theo" she said, "Hunter wants to meet up with us."
"Great," I said getting up, "I was a monster long before I came here. You're not the first to realise."
I got up. Asuka looked at me with pity, "where are you going?"
"I'm going to base, I will see you there."
I stepped around her and went out of her home onto the street. "Gosh, shes annoying," sighed a voice from the night sky above.
*anyone can jump in*
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Theo

I jumped down beside Hinata, sighing.
"I agree with you sometimes," she murmured, scowling and refusing to make eye contact.
"I actually came to save you."
"From who?
"Who do you think?"
She made a growling noise. "She was trying to be nice but I just want to get out of here." I leaned against the building wall, eyeing a cop car as it zoomed past.
"You need to be trained on how to use your Sense anyway. I guess that's my job."
She looked at me with interest. "That would be... bearable." I straightened up again, shoving my hands into my pockets and sauntering ahead. "We should go see Hunter first. Then I'll teach you."
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Naomi-

The police cars could be heard from a distance, and even in the chaos they still blared in my ears. We were trying to comfort Peyton and comfort each other.

"The-the hunter... he-he made me-"

"Peyton, enough. Stop blaming yourself," Violet whispered. But Peyton had a right to blame herself. But she didn't know... she mustn't have known...

"The h-hunter-"

"Peyton, please stop," Jackie pleaded.

I stood up and looked at Peyton. "Peyton, show us where you saw him." She didn't look at me. I sighed and sniffled back more tears. "Peyton, please. For Gale."

Peyton looked up and closed her eyes. She was silent but gave a small nod.
"Oh please don't tell me you're archaeologists."

"Do you have a problem with archaeologists?"

"I'm a time traveler. I laugh at archaeologists."

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Peyton

A sharp screeching pain pierced through my chest as sobs of guilt still escaped my dry throat as we left the sewers. People tried to comfort me, but at this point their words were useless.
Her Nightmare side was taking over.
You killed her! You might have well as been the creature yourself. That poor little girl, innocent and brave, and you killed her, the evil little voice seemed to chuckle in my head, laughing louder and louder as my sobs hung in the cramped dirty air of the stinking underground.
"Peyton," came the soft voice of Naomi in my ear. She placed a hand on my shoulder, and my sobs fell silent with an aching shudder. "This isn't your fault. I know I keep saying that... but it's true."
"I-I should've just let them kill me," I stammered, whiping the hot tears from my face roughly. "G-G-Gale was the brave one. I'm nothing but a stupid...cowardly..." my words trailed into the nothingness that seemed to numb my whole body with guilt.
The group was silent.
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