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Haiku Train

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Below the window
lies a dove that mistook it
for gloomy dusk skies.




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For gloomy dusk skies
Lie flat on the horizon
In the cold of night
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In the cold of the night
My mind wanders seamlessly;
The dead of the day.




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The dead of the day
Looms over my cold shoulders
Like snowflakes drifting
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like snowflakes drifting
like frost melting with the sun
like your secret smile.




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secrets lie beneath
the earth rumbles majesty
we discover them
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans




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We discover them
the clouds behind grey tree tops
lit by the pale sun.
she/her




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Lit by the pale sun
Lonely heart answers to none
Betraying flowers
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Betraying flowers
Hold me close and slash my chest
As I kiss petals
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The train starts running
Choo-Choo I hear the engine
An adventure awaits
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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An adventure awaits
the white butterfly, at dawn --
flight until mid-day.
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@Kelisot You should end with the last line of the person before you. So for example my haiku will start with start the last line of the haiku of Lim’s haiku.

Flight until mid-day
Hares scatter around headlights
But so still at night
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Sorry! I didn't know :(

But so still at night
The silence was so fragile
The wolves' howls broke it
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Don’t worry. I just hope you’re enjoying taking part!

The wolves’ howl broke it
Like a tingling crawling down
Down, down, down your spine
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022




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down, down, down your spine
the first showers of rain bring
a slowing, a calm.



I’ll marry the finest banana in the galaxy for you.
— Atticus