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*Hum. My character just killed a human, so*

Arabella

I walked away of the bleeding body, almost running, when I passed a vulture who apparently saw me killing that young man. I froze, and tried to escape.

*any hunter can come along and wound her, but not too badly, she's pretty good at fighting ^^*
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**I never knew this started so I will just pop up somewhere. If anyone wants to comunicate with me and prevent myself from talking to myself, it would be much appreciated. ;)

Will

He shifted his feet nervously as he looked at the door to the club. Bright colours were flashing from the inside and it seemed evident that the music was thundering and spilling out into the dark street. Alyse was supposed to be in there, yet his feet did not want to enter that room, to be surrounded by all the shifting bodies. That was not his way doing things. He looked at the door longingly once more and decided then that he would return later. Alyse had her other friends with her, right?

Will swung his hood over his head and walked through the lamplight that was illuminating the street almost omniously. He wished at this moment to go off to the edge of town, maybe sit on one of the benches and watch the stars that were not so easily seen in the rush of the city. At this thought a car sped by, spraying water, just narrowly missing Will. His mom would kill him if she figured out he had snuck out.

He passed the dark stars that were closing for the night, examining the bright light discrpting the name of each, maybe even flashing lights declaring what they were selling. He had never been downtown before.

A person wearing a black cloak and looking fairly guant eyed him warily and pushed back him. Will smiled weakly at this bizarre man. He did not wish to get into any trouble. But then he realized the man had left a note in his hand.

Your life is feeble, there is not much left. You are mine. It was scribbled in an elegant hand, and Will felt a shiver down his spine. What did it mean? Walking faster down the sidewalk, he saw another person. This one had bright red hair, was female, and was holding an electric bike at her side. Goggles covered her eyes. Will looked at her in alarm. This was not what he would call normal.

"Hello?" He spoke timidly. She turned to face him, her mouth drawn into a hard grimace.

"What do you want?" She asked almost quickly and harshly.

"I-I..." He didn't actually know why he had spoke to this odd girl. More over he felt safer in her presence. "I was just saying 'Hi'." Will smiled weakly as she seemed to stare at him blazingly.

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*No dying! ><*
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*yeah, but it was just a human, not someone's character. She's a vampire, she has to drink blood*
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I'll post then my charectors calls Ollie right if not well it is now

Ollie

I waved goodbye to my mates as I walked out of the cheap Italian place we had been in. We couldn't get into any of the nightclubs round here and the put a were crowded. A thud ecohed from the wall of a nearby alley. I imeditaly froze and started to gingerly step towards the Alley. A awful spell if tobacco and alcahole flodded my nose as I rounded the corner. A man drained of blood was lying on the floor dead. I looked up to see a beutiful vampire standing above him.

"dam" I said before turning aroun and running. I hope she wasn't followin me.

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Maxima~

It was still dark out, but the rain slowed to a drizzle as a drunken man made his way from the pub across the street. I crouched lower behind the taxi that was hiding me from his view. Come on....just a little bit closer... My shotgun was clutched at my side.

The man chuckle to himself, wiping a red substance from his cheek with his finger and then licked it. My stomach dropped. That sick bastard had already had his dinner, but it was my job to make sure it was his last. He neared, only a few yards away. I raised my gun over the hood of the car and aimed.

"Say your prays you sick-" I was shouting until gunfire sliced through the air. Before I knew it the vampire dropped to the asphalt street and black blood was oozing from a single bullet wound on his chest.

"You know, ya really should be a lot faster."I turned to see AJ smirking, while she walked toward the body and prodded it with a boot.

"Or maybe you shouldn't take other people's kills!" I practically growled, not finding the situation funny in the least bit way. She shrugged.

"Well this one counts as mine."She glanced at me,"so what does that up my score to? Twenty? Forty maybe? I had a lot of action this week."

"No way did you get forty of these bloodsuckers in one week!" I replied shoving my shotgun back into it's holster across my back.
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haha I meant the storybook cant die.
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**Sorry, I have been grounded so I have to sneak on. Please ignore my unreliablity at the moment. My last post does have to be just LaReina's character. Any of you can pop in and intrude on anything that may have happened...

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I'm confused. Is Lareina still doing this because I brought, AJ, her character in with my last post?!
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you could try PM ing her?
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**In_the_Moonlight, I did the same with my last post! xD
I don't think she will be on tonight. I will talk to her at school. ;)

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