A Drawing of a Crying Girl

*Holy figgin WOW* *gold star*

Gawh, your skills amaze me. *whimpers teach me please!* I love every bit of it, especially the hair.

One little thing I wanted to pint out:
The left eye tear (as seen from the computer user;s position) is kind of not exactly right. I think it there should be some wateriness near the left tip of the eye and also slightly brimming out of the lower eye lid.

OMG, keep it up. Post some more of your artworks, i would love to see them.

~LAVA

Oh, she's so pretty!

Hair: Wonderful details and shading. Very realistic. Oh, and I love her bangs!

Eyes: Nice! I like how you drew the little brow-bridge on top and shaded in the shadows near her nose. The only thing I can say here is that the tears seem to go out in an odd direction. Usually, they just go down, but you drew them sort of curving...

Nose: Nise shading near the nostrils, but it looks a bit oddly shaped. I don't know how to describe it, but it sort of bulges out to the right? That might just be the angle, but it seems kind of odd to me.

Eyebrows: Great browline, but they're uneven! The left is definitely bushier than the right.

Lips: They are a little too big, but the shape is lovely. Also, they're a bit crooked and throw off her facial symmetry. Move them over the tiniest bit to the right.

Hands: Nice enough, but they're a bit pudgy. Also, since you didn't really draw wrists or arms, it looks like they're just coming out of nowhere...

Overall: Well, this is just lovely, dear. Beautiful details and shading, and nice job capturing her emotion. The only thing that bugs me a little is that she doesn't really have cheek bones... Other than that, amazing!

LOVE THE HAIR! Sorry... no caps, I know. But really; you have a great gift! The hair is awesome. So is the shape and shading of the face. I wish I was that good!

Everyone else= pointed out what was wrong before me.

Me= compliments.

Compliments= :):P



Wonderful job! We definitely have some true artists on YWS, and you are one of them!

wow. this is really good. Only, why is the tear on the left black? the only thing i could come up for my self was that she was wearing mascara or something and it smeared? i dont know.

they lips are really good but they look at little full for reality, but that's probably just me. The detail on her hair is AMAZING!! you can tell where her hair starts and everything!! Plus there is so much emotion in her eyes and face, i love it!!

Her hands look kind of small for her body, but i know how hard it is to draw hands in proportion to everything else. GREAT JOB!!

Her eyes draw you in. Hold you intrest.

It's all so realistic. I think maybe the lips are to big for the face.
Bext time may you could try to do the eyelashs less of a object and look at the tones of them on a real person. It'll may it more realistic. That was my art teacher told me anyway.

It's fair better then anything I could attempt to do so well done.

I absolutely love this piecer. Of course it's not flawless, but it's darn near perfect. The hair looks soo real I want to reach out adn touch it. Oh my those tears are drawn perfectly. The emotion that pours out of this drawing are so real. Its beautiful! You are a true artist my friend! I wish I could draw like that.

I cannot believe that you are only fourteen!

Hiya!

Eyebrows: The left one doesn't seem to arch up enough compared to the right one. There are also some creases missing on the forehead, which we should be able to see despite her hair.

Nose: The nose here makes the picture look like she's on a slight angle, when her eyes and mouth indicate she's looking right at us.

Mouth: Her mouth is a bit longer on the right side than the left. It makes it look like she's turned slightly to the side (the other side as the nose).

I also find there are some lines missing around the corners of her mouth to show anxiety.

Hands: It could be that I have bony/thin hands, but I find the knuckles are a bit smooth here. Add in some more shadows at the bottom to give them some relief.

Skin in general: Her sin is remarkably smooth, which gives her a very beautiful look but can also be a bit too perfect. I'd add in some lines to the corners of her mouth to show a slight twitch, and some more creases around her eyebrows to make it a bit more obvious she's crying.

Overall: Despite my comments above, I really liked this and found it hard to critique. Nice work!

Questions? PM me.

~Rosey

This is absolutely fantastic! I am so amazed by this! My jaw dropped, literally, when I saw this. You can just see the sadness in her eyes. As so many reviewers before me said, the lips look to be a bit off centered. But, it looks like the page was wrinkled, maybe? If you stare at the picture it pops right out at you, but I didn't really notice it at first. I'm thoroughly impressed. You have some amazing God given talent. Bravo!

Becca

You are sooo talented! Please tell me you are doing something along the lines of art class or somewhere you can be put out there with this?

One thing, I'm not sure if this is on purpose, but the left side of her face is a tad wider than her right.

I would LOVE to see a copy or this in color possibly.
Her eyes are exceptional, also!
PM me when you put more work out, PLEASE!

I adore this!

I must have looked at this drawing something like ten times, but I've never commented on it and if I don't comment now I'll probably explode!

I would love to be able to draw like you! I love the eyes, the position she's in and I absolutely love the hair, it's so realistic and beautiful!

You can actually see the saddness in her eyes which in my opinion is incredible. I feel like I'm blabbering on now so I'll shut up!

Please, please post another drawing!

Love Meg

xoxo

*gasp of delight* oh. my. god. This is amazing! Wow. hey i was actually just browsing through the drawings on YWS looking for some really good artists and this is why;
I really really really need someone to sketch out my characters. Seriously I'm loosing them and i need something to look at. Your so talented so maybe you could use this request as an exercise? Maybe? Please let me know! And it's ok if you don't want to.

Beautiful picture; I love how you rendered her face. I tend to be really terrible with ebony pencils myself.

The only thing that seems off to me is her shoulders. They seem too small in proportion to her head, but the way her left shoulder goes off the page suggests her body could be at an angle, so I could be wrong.

Anyway, wonderful work. Keep drawing~ c:

The picute looks great. Try cleaning up the edges a little. Also what type of pencils did you use, because they look better than mine. The drawing potrays a sense of something everyone feels once in a while and it is hard to find that in a sketch.