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Wise Reviewing:

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-Can be anything.
-If you like it, come back for more!
- Guaranteed review in two days or your money back?


Anyway, I've just became an Instructor and I want to do a frenzy.

I'll be like a shark. :D
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Hey there =]

Congrats on becoming an instructor!

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my prologue for me. The story is yet to have a title though.

It's in Other Fiction,

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Thank you!

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Hey there, congratulations on becoming an instructor. c:

Could you perhaps review my story, Listless, for me? Thank-you, if you can. x)




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Done!
They were both good! :D
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My turn!
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Steps Ahead of Thunder

I feel obligated to contribute to your post-Instructordom frenzy, Jon. :P And even though this story above already has some awesome critiques from some awesome people, I've never has a Wise Review. So I'm curious.

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Wow! You get your money back AND it's free?! Count me in!!! (;))

Yes, I know this is fantasy and it's predictable... But I'm working on it! Will you review this for me?
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Thank you so much!
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Hey! Can you please do me? I got no critiques on my latest thing.

It's called "Last Date."
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Hey! I'm peanutgallery007, obviously. Can you review my new poem, New Generation? It is in Other Poetry section. That would be wonderful! ;)

Thank you :D !
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Peanut, Done.


Lydia and Icaruss: I will have to get to those this weekend. I know I'll spend an hour or more on each and I don't have the time right now. I will definitely get to them this weekend though. :D
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Lyric poetry topic46134.html thanks! :D
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Would you be so kind as to go over this for me (The Gate, Fantasy fiction)? Mostly overall comments. The grammar, or lack there of, I know about. I meant it to be that way.
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I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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