I understand that the poem wasn't suppose to rhyme. It seemed to make sense to me. I read it out loud and it sounded even more beautiful. I could feel Edward through your words and I could feel your emotions towards him. As a fellow Twilight fan, good work. But it could have rhymed and it would have made it all the more special. I mean, its Edward Cullen, and he is like a poem, always rhyming, maybe you should have put that "edward-esk on it" Good job though!
