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Night Fall Re-Worked

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im probably gonna feel like an idiot, but whos Shinjiro?
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Billy's character.
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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oh, sp its still on the old thread?
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Billy just joined recently on this forum. If that is not the answer to the question then I don't actually know what your last post says...

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Oops... I didnt see his profile. So we have two full squads? we can start now, or we can wait until we get another squad.
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But who is the teacher for the sky group? We need one.
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I can make one. Let me work on my homework, but I will post one by eleven ish.

actually, tomorow is more likely ><
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Name: Akira Ayame (last names means Iris, like the flower)

Age: 31

Gender: Male

Country of Origin: Sky

Personality: He is very calm and reserved. At some times he may seem lazy, but as soon as the situation demands it he focuses, and never misses a thing. He is very sympathetic to the troubles of his squad. However, he does not go easy on them, if anything he trains them harder. He makes them focus on teamwork above anything else. His motto is "You are only as strong as those behind you."

Appearance: He is tall and he has long brown hair that he keeps tied back (sort of like Itachi's). He wears a black roab with an Iris flower on the back.

Gift: He uses an almost puppet like Gift. He has two manikins made of pure steel (they look like Alphonse from FMA). He channels electricity energy through them so that their strikes do extra damage. Each one is about as strong as A chuunin and can use small Gifts. He has a vast array of Pure Gift that he uses while his manikins are protecting him.

Likes: Good students who work together, Helping people, Root beer.

Dislikes: Trouble makers. He has a grudge against the Mist country because he believes his family was massacered by Ninja from there.

Strengths: Vast array of long range attacks. His puppets are very strong.

Weaknesses: Bad at close range.

Other: His right arm is metal.
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So can we start now? And if we can what will our first posts be about?
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yes we can start. I was hoping to get three squads *sighs* but whatever. Your first posts will detail the week before the Chuunin exams. They will be held in the Land of Shade. Just talk about travelling there and maybe seeing the other squads.
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I will start off this show! I am apart of the Shade remember!

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Kazuna

She held her cloak close to her body, trying to conserve all heat. The night was frigid, that was for sure, and now as she watched her breath form mist in the cold air, Kazuna knew it would not hurt to light a simple flame.

The fire leapt from her fnger tip, gentlly making a small almond shape which was flickering and moving with the slight breeze. She had no fear of being burned, instead she enjoyed the sensation. The Chuunin exams were coming closer, and with them would come the people from the other clans and village, unique to their own style of fighting. This people would fight through challenges and matches, which of course could result in severe injury or even death. She felt a shiver run down her spine. It was these exact exams that had left her brother blind and deaf, and she was to take part in these exams.

Kazuna let the fire manifest itself, growing larger in the night providing more heat and light. The fire was her only comfot in these times, and as she waited her in the dead of night with only her own thoughts to keep her occupied, the familiar flame was needed as much as any time else.

"You better turn out that flame you know." The voice said from behind her. Kazuna had heard no steps, or heard no sign of movement, but she was not surprised. For this was the land of the Shade, where unpleasant surprises were at every turn.

The flame extinguished itself then, as if it was never actually there.

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I left an opening.

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*Note: Im changing my characters name to Itachi, because it fits with the name theme that has developed, and I just really like that name XD. I will try and write tonight, but no promises.*
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Violet~~ Sky

Violet perched upon one of sky's shortest buildings, about forty floors. The sky people were proud of thier tall buildings and still wondered why poverty still struck as a problem. The building was on the edge of town, overlooking a large valley. Wind ripped through the air and thunder was boiling. The rain hit the building in large drops, almost like buckets of water themselves. She laughed when the first of the lightning hit the valley below. This was her favourite spot, only her and her team mates knew about it. Here she could bend the lightning safely, making shapes and different colors from the dull yellow. She made it her signature colour, a shocking blue.

"Couldn't imagine finding you down here," A voice said sarcastically.
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Cole~~

"Okay go," I said and then quickly tighthead a rope. I ducked into the bushes clutching a few ropes around me. Immediately after I ducked in two figures emerged from the forest, Violet and Itachi. The two blurs ran forward hopping off branches they looked around carefully for any sign of a trap.

Violet jumped forward and I pulled a rope, immediately the tree branch she was about to land on fell down, Violet behind it. The branch hit the ground and then hit another wire, that moment a bunch of shurikens came from the bushes, Violet tucked in then fell to the ground, rolled and dodged the shurikens. Brushing off the dirt she got up and followed Itachi again.

I pulled a handful of ropes and fire began to emerge from the sides, and oil vapor with it. the vapor caught the fire and an explosion came with it, Itachi jumped forward before it hit and he dodged the blow, Violet jumped up dodging it as well. The two of them evened pace. I pulled yet another rope and immediately more shurikens came out, forcing them forward, and into a tangle of trip wires, they triggered them then a net fell down and a pit opened up. the two fell in the pit tangled up in the web.

Stepping out of my spot I sighed, "Guys you did better then last time, but you should always have a shuriken at the ready to cut this stuff," After that little nugget of wisdom i pulled another rope tied to a tree and the web rose, with it the two. Pulling out a shuriken I began to cut them lose, "You have to do better at avoiding these, I might not always be able to help with this," I told them, they both fell and got up.

"Yeah but who will be able to set this elaborate trap up in the middle of the exam..other then you Cole," Itachi said pulling off some stray wires.

"Hey you never know," I said with a shrug.

"Well what ever, we have to go to training ground B now, Ayame is waiting there for us,"

"Ok," I said and ran back to get my trap bag, tucking a roll of wire and some shurikens in.

The three of headed off the the ground to meet master, for some combat training.
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Shinjiro

For Shinjiro, things didn't get much better than the cold and dark of a winter's night. The shadows of the forest were thick, broken only by thin moonbeams that stretched from the canopy to the twisted paths like delicate spider webs. He could move just about anywhere in the forest from where he was standing, it was more or less just one enormous shadow. It almost made him smile.

A spark flared up in the far distance, Shinjiro's excellent dark vision allowing him to see the offensive light. He narrowed his eyes instinctively, trying to blot out the tiny flicker of light. "Ugh...I hate fire." he murmured.

He squinted a little more as it grew and intensified, becoming a much larger flame. I’ve had enough of this… He thought, then jumped forward. Shadows embraced him, wrapping about his body as it dissolved among them, becoming one with them.

A moment later he had materialised by the fire-wielder without a sound. Her identity didn’t surprise him, not much did any more. Kazuna. His polar opposite, and (unfortunately) his team mate. Why he was stuck with a firebug when he hated it so much was beyond him.

“You’d better turn out that flame, you know.” He said. She clenched her fist, and it vanished without a trace. “Practising?” Shinjiro asked.
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