Conrad's Critique Center

So my last two "Will Review for Food" threads got buried. Here's this one.

I will review all fiction except for hard fantasy. You will have to talk really sweet and say please to get me to review poetry, because I'm not all that splendid at it anyways. I will not review multi-parters, I refuse to.
I will not go in and nitpick much, but I will try to point out the overall things that I see and give you pointers on them. That being said, let's go!

Well thats awesome then. Haha. Could you check out my newest post, post513696.html#513696. It's pretty short but it has a lot of personal meaning so it would be amazing to get a good review. Thank You.

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