Winter's Reviews!

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My "specialty" when it comes to reviews is grammar. I'll pick out all your grammar mistakes, if there are any. I'll do anything from quick critiques to line-by-line critiques. When you post please include how in-depth you would like me to go.

I will not review:
-Fantasy, in most cases
-Sci-Fi
-FanFiction, in most cases
-Lyrics

I will review:
-Historical Fiction
-Scripts
-Other Fiction
-Romantic Fiction
-Non-Fiction
-Action/Adventure Fiction

I will do my best with:
-Poetry
-Art & Photography

These are links to some works that I have reviewed in-depth:
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topic42074.html
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post497920.html?highlight=#497920
post494432.html?highlight=#494432

These are links to some quick reviews that I have done:
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So, if you would like a review please either reply in this thread or PM me. Please use this format for replies:
Title:
Genre:
Link:

Thanks!
-Winter
EDIT: I forgot to mention that reviews are free! No need to donate points or review in return. :D
Mamillius: Merry or sad shall’t be?
Hermione: As merry as you will.
Mamillius: A sad tale’s best for winter. I have one
Of sprites and goblins.

The Winter's Tale




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Title: Untitled Chapter One (I need help on this, so if you have any suggestions)
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post505446.html#505446

I would really like an in-depth review, grammar, puncuation, flow, character development, and entertainment value. (Tell me honestly if you are interested in reading more or if you're just plain bored). I will happily review anything of yours that you need a critique on, just PM me. Thanks!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.




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Moriah Leila: Done! Nice work.
I don't need a critique on anything right now, but thank you for the offer! Reviews are free.
Mamillius: Merry or sad shall’t be?
Hermione: As merry as you will.
Mamillius: A sad tale’s best for winter. I have one
Of sprites and goblins.

The Winter's Tale




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Hi Winter!!

Could you please review this little poetry piece?

Here:
Threnody

Thanks so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~




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