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*how did they break the news to us? I'll change my post if this wasn't how it was*

Marianne


I ran to the street after hearing the ambulance siren. The people around whispered her name and theories.
"It's May, that happy girl"
"May?" I asked confused. She couldn't...
"May!" I screamed panicking.
There was no answer. I got to the centre of the confusion and saw Matt broken hearted and Alyse worried sick. I looked at Alyse desperately. We all waited for news until they came.
"We're so sorry, May passe-"
"I don't want to hear it!" I screamed and ran out. Matt seemed to be in too much pain to even... react. Chad followed me into our dorm, while I searched May's room for her.
"It can't be..."
"Maria!" He called. I started to cry. He embraced me and I sobbed on his shoulder.
" You should rest" He said.
I nodded silently. The next day would be much painful. I feel asleep on my bed, with Chad right next to me, holding my hand. Without him right there, what could have been of me?
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Reina: May is alive. But everyone thinks she is dead. Her father staged the death to keep her safe.
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But isn't she in the hospital or something?
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NO, she is at her American vacation home, about to be moved to a safe house with her mom.
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*Modified post!* And it helps if you say the first paragraph really quickly and without expression.

Alyse

Alyse couldn't believe it. She was trembling when she saw May lying motionlessly there. But she was okay. She wasn't dead.

As Alyse headed down the hall during the weekend to get to cross country practice, she found her thoughts wandering. Who was that boy she'd seen before? From what she could tell of that perilous dark night, he was quite smart, but he seemed reluctant to use his brains for some reason.

Alyse was just about to jog outside, when she nearly bumped into someone as she tried to pull her hair into a ponytail. She stumbled back. She looked up. This guy was fairly tall, with a leather jacket unzipped over a white T-shirt. He wore sunglasses-- despite the fact that it was sort-of dull out, and he had dark hair with bangs almost covering his eyes.

Alyse felt her cheeks flush red. In fact, probably her whole face. "S-Sorry," Alyse stammered, holding out a hand. "I'm Alyse."
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Okay just A quick question for Kori. IS she heading back to the school or her room in her house? I wasn't sure.

Nick~~

I Looked down and Lei and sighed. She was so sad, I was to, but for some reason I felt more like it was a see ya then a good bye to May. It was strange, but maybe it was just how I felt about death, I had never had anyone I knew die, so I couldn't really judge the feeling for this. Lei was now sound asleep, so I picked her up gentle and placed her on my bed, then I changed quickly in my closet and went to bed on the coach.

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Her room in her house. But she should be coming back later today ... just to warn anyone if they care.
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*I'm freakishy bored so if this post is totally random my bad...and oh yeah, I do care about Kori's whereabouts^^*

Leighton

He thought I was asleep....but I wasn't.

I silently got up from Nick's bed and walked over to the couch where he was sleeping.

Nick was the kind of person who sleeps with his mouth gaped open. He looked hilarious; I wanted to laugh but I didn't want to wake him up.

I couldn't go to sleep because of all the commotion about May so I got a bag of marshmellows from Nick's stash of food.

I grabbed a handful and started to drop marshmellows into Nick's mouth.

One by one the marshmellows disappeared into his mouth.

As I started to drop the last one, Nick moved a little and I accidently missed his mouth. The lone marshmellow hit his nose.

Nick's eyes fluttered open.

Aww man

"Lei???" Nick said, still half asleep.
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*Completely irrelevant, but hilarious! That was something that I'd probably try to do to someone but would be too scared because I wouldn't want them to choke...*

Okay, Kori is back at school now!

Kori

Kori sulkily slammed the car door closed and stomped up the stairs to her dorm again. Though she really wanted to see Kevin and make sure all was well, she was a little worried about home.

She dumped her suitcase in her room and started out towards the barn. She was just in the courtyard when she heard something shift. She jumped and turned, her eyes wide. But it was only a short blonde-haired boy. Kevin...

"Erm ... um ... uhm .... Kevin?" Kori stammered, cautiously nearing him. He was meditation. Kori hadn't yet gotten past the fact he meditated, even though she'd known him for a couple of months now. She feard that one day she'd near him and suddenly he'd whip out a random stapler and chuck it at her head. What is this paranoia with staplers? Kori asked.

He opened one eye, and luckily, he seemed calm. She almost sighed aloud in relief.
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Hope that's okay.
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*cant write because I have alot of homework, but Lariena, she 'died' at the hospital, we all think she is dead. her parents took her to their house for a funeral service, which never happened because she was alive the whole time. It makes no sense, I know, but thats what happened. It seems very unrealistic >.<, but its interesting... and drama...*
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*This time i'll get it right...

The first time i glance at the boarding school, the first thing i thought was a new life. I cannot wait to have a new life. My life in Bosnia was tragic and this time i promise myself i will not get it wrong.

I tug my bag to my shoulder and pulled my soft green cap over my long blonde hair. Many people i saw passing to me. Their faces were full of joy. I take my first steps and walked slolwy at the building.




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*I'm so confused! I have to fix this again?*
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*Gosh, I just read over my post and its sooooo poorly written...I know right? Dropping marshmellows into someones mouth seems so much fun xD I'm interested to see what Nick does lol (marshmellow fight!!!)*
*seriously bolt can you pretty please make them have a marshmellow fight? xD*
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OKAY
Nick~~

"rar mar goo boiging," I said then realized there was something in my mouth. Taking a curious taste I swallowed a marshmallow, "Did you do that."

"Yep," She said.

"Well thanks, can I get another please."

"Sure here you go," She said and threw on purposely at my eye.

"Hey-," I said as more came at me. Quickly I grabbed the bag and started flinging some at her. In a few minutes it was a full out war.
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*Muhahahaa Lei is totally going to beat Nick*

Leighton

"No fair!" I yelled, grabbing the bag from Nick's hands.

"I'm sorry, Lei. Is this ok?" He quickly moved the bag out of my way and flung a few more marshmellows in my face.

"Sure! More ammo!" I said, ducking and picking up the now gooey marshmellows off the floor and throwing them at Nick.
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