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(I should check the DT, lazy me...) what were we skipping to?

May's funeral? Christmas break? Maria's b-day?

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Yes, because I don't really know what to post... and probably many of you feel the same way.
Well skip to when? May's memorial?
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*day of funeral*

Leighton

I groggily got up remembering what today was. May's memorial service. I took a shower and I looked at my clothes to figure out what to wear. It wasn't that hard. All I had to do was wear everything black. I grumbled and tried not to cry as I put on a black sweater and black skinny jeans in memory of May Kurenai (sp?) It was the weekend so it was about 10am.
I walked down the hall to Nick's room as I usually do every morning. Though this time with a frown on my face.

*Um, is Mike coming now or later?*
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I'll have him come in now.

Mike~~

I walked up to the school proud. I had driven up alone in my jeep and was now at the front steps, I took a hasty step forward then began to run a huge smile on my face. When I started to come to my dorm I saw a wave of black, and a few strange looks, climbing the stairs I got a few more stares that said "Whats he wearing,".
When I arrived at my room I saw a girl come out, she looked at me then sighed a bit, while obviously holding back tears.
"Nick why are you dressed like that," She asked.

"because I ain't Nick," I told her.

"Sure your not," She said, "Not a good joke though,"

"Seriously, I'm Mike Nick's broth-" I started but then a familiar voice came.

"Mike. I thought you didn't come till next week," Nick said. He was also in black, straight from his black shoes, to his head which where his hair was dyed black, even his bored had a plain black bottom on it.

"Well I came early," I said and smiled, He didn't return it, "So why is everyone in black? Such a drag."

The girl burst into tears and ran into Nick.

"Just guess," Nick said and the two walked off.
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*Okay I'll skip but I'll just finish up some dialogue*

Jack *before the skip*

Alyse chuckled to herself.

"I don't think you boring I think your hot" she shook her head.

"I don't want to get into another relationship especially not a fast one like it was between me and Tony". Alyse said. she was so cute in her trainers with her little pig tails.

"but I'm not an asshole I don't just abandon people especially people like you" *Christ I feel like I'm listening to twilight* I took my chance and gave her a quick but slow kiss letting my lips explore hers. *holy shit I'm might as well be copying twilight word by word* She pulled away leaving me wondering if she's like it or not.

Jack *Mays d day*

I hadn't really know May but I had gone anyway dressed all in black to her memorial service. since May had died it was a sad time but still I had manged to get to know the people in the group mostly thanks to Adam. As Maria got up to go to Chad I stole her Chair sitting down next to Alyse.

Adam *Mays d day*

I held Shannon's hand tight in mine she had been hit hard by Mays death and seeing a picture of May only made it worst she sobbed silently into her hands and I whispered words of comfort into her ear.




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Alyse

[Before]

Before she could scoff at Jack's words his lips had already pressed against hers. Her eyes popped open wide. What ... wait...? her thoughts were mangled and confused. She barely knew this guy ... though she though him cool and hot and cute and handsome and - alot of things.

She pulled away, and stumbled towards the track, in a daze. The couch howled at her as she arrived. "What took you so long?" Good, she hadn't seen Alyse and Jack kissing. As happy as she wanted to be ... May. She couldn't get her mind away from the terrible news about May.

She started around the track, her thoughts drifting.
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[After]

Alyse sat sombrely beside Maria. Neither said anything, and Alyse was biting back tears. May had been such a good ... person! She was crazy and amazing and unique. She was almost everything that Alyse wished she was herself.

Maria shifted in her seat beside Alyse, to get up and go to Chad. Alyse barely batted an eyelash when Jack sat beside her, slumping back in his chair. "Hey," He said, his voice level, yet still grim.

Alyse feared opening her mouth. She was afraid that if she went o make a noise, she release a sob. She nodded her head down once, stifling a sniff. She was happy to have Jack there. He was the closest person to her right now. She knew at some point that she'd break down crying, and atleast she wouldn't be crying alone during the service, as all of her other friends had their guys...

Poor Matt, She thought, not daring to look up and see if Matt was there. She just knew that his stolid expression and grave eyes would make her burst into tears. She knew she was feeling sympathetic for herself, seeing as her close friend had ... passed away ... but Matt ...

Poor Matt, Alyse repeated to herself.
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Shannon


May's funeral. I just wanted it to pass quickly. Adam helped me so much. He's the greatest guy. After a bit, Lei, Nick and Mike. It was hard to discover who was who but Mike was a bit more ladies man that Nick. (i don't know if that's ok bolt...)
Maria got there a bit after, crying rivers. She saw him and ran to him like a crazy girl, waiting for some comfort in his arms. The seat next to me was available and Mike decided to sit there.
"May I ?" He said.
As I heard her name, tears rolled by my face, again.
"Yes, you can..." I answered.
"Ohh... I get it. Sorry.." He replied.
The funeral started after it. It was so sad and depressing but God, something was bugging me!! Mike! I knew he didn't know May at all but please, it was her funeral. Some respect would be good. He couldn't take his eyes of Lei and her breasts.
"Excuse me," I said "She has a boyfriend who's your brother by the way!"




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Adam

"Oh" I heard Mike say in answer to Shannon.

"well can I look at your breast" he said jokingly.

"can I punch your brother mate, just once. hard. across the face." I whispered to Nick as some people who barely knew May came up and talked about her as if she was their best friend. Their were crazy rumours going around about why she'd been shot some said she's probably been raped then shot and some said that maybe she was pregnant and her dad had been pissed so he shot her. Their were also a host of other rumours all bullshit of course.

"what no I he is a nice guy he's like so sweet and a ladies man and any way he's my brother how would you like it if I said I was gonna punch your brother" Nick whispered back to me making sure Lei couldn't hear him.

"I's say go ahead he deserves it my brother's a pig got a pregnant girlfriend back in England but you know he doesn't tell many people especially not Alyse" Nick nodded turning back to Lei.

"would kinda make him look bad" I turned back to the speech.

"yeah but if you ask me he's just worried that people will think he's the dumbest fuck alive but eh he's a nice guy" Nick nodded and we focused on the speach.

*their fixed it*
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*Oh wow. This is a random comment but I always laugh at the word "ladies man" because it reminds me of when my friend called my german shephard a ladies man because he loves women : - )*

Leighton

Nick put his arm around me as we walked down to the [insert whatever building this is being held at] for the funeral. I laid my head on his shoulder which was warm; a relief to the bitter cold weather.

My tears were nearly frozen; I wiped my eyes. I didn't like myself crying like that so I tried to say something.

"So that's Mike." I said, sniffling. I looked up at him and he shrugged.

"Yep, that's Mike alright."

We walked in silence to the building and sat down next to Shannon and Adam. I turned around to see that Mike had followed right behind us the whole way there.

May's coffin was at the head of the room with pink flowers on top. Just how she would have liked it. The atmosphere was still and I didn't dare look at Matt.
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*Oh God this is hilarious. Shauni: I told you to post that. I told you it would make a big fuss. Anyone, is Amon360 out? because he hasn't posted in like 6 pages or something*

Marianne

I walked into the funeral with Shannon. My tears hadn't dried since it happened. I still couldn't say that May was dead. Her picture was there, big and bright. She was smiling, like she always did. She did not deserve this! She was a good person. her images came into my mind and I started to cry harder. I saw Chad near by and he opened his arms to me. he had really helped me through this all. I did not deal with death very nicely. Let's just say we had some issues.
I ran to him, and he sat with me in some chairs near by, calming me down.
The service started. Some people I had never seen her with were saying beautiful, probably fake, things. I grabbed tightly onto Chad with one hand and the other was holding his. Suddenly Shannon shout something I couldn't understand, because i was too absorbed on my thoughts. I saw Nick and Adam whispering and Shannon changed seats to somewhere near Adam, that held her hand. I sighed. Without May, this would be much different.
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Kori

Kori didn't know the girl, May, really all that well, but she went to the funeral anyways. Wearing the best thing she could, a black frayed mini-jean skirt, a pair of black slip-ons and a black shirt - her Sunday best, really.

She couldn't fell that bad about it, since she'd barely known May, but she still felt sombre as she stalked after the procession of students, really, who all dragged their feet as they went.

Some faces were tear-stained, others were just stolid. But one, she noticed look particularily happy - that jock ... Jared, Kori thought his name was. As he walked by her, a slight bounce in his step, Kori stuck out a foot. He tripped, stumbled, and regained himself.

"Who the Hell do you think you are-?" He snapped, grabbing Kori's wrist.

She felt his yank hard, and she pulled back. She almost thought she heard a tiny, very miniscule bone snap. She yelped and jumped back, shaking her wrist. It hurt, swivelling it around. "Idiot," Kori mumbled, snarling at the guy and hurrying towards the service.

She thought nothing of the pain that shot through her wrist each time she moved it. Yet, with time, it began to get redder and redder, and more swollen. Kori, however, highly doubted that it was broken.
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Actually Mike is the better one. He is the more polite and nice one. He is a joker and a bit of a player, but not like Nick. He is just good with girls, not a full on player. Just think Nick, but then decrease his player, skater, and pranking nature, and add a bit more Nice, polite, smart, and good.
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*Awwwwwwwwwww man. shoot we're going to have to edit everything. To be honest, Nick doesn't seem to be much of a player : - ? *
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cool okay I really don't want to edit my post because I'm a lazy shit so could you have it so Mike is just trying to be cool make a good impression even though he well isn't




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No. Thats not Mike.

And why would he think that would make a good impression. And if you to lazy to edit, then how come you weren't to do that.
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