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*Umm... if anyone hasn't noticed MAy got shot... just putting that out there. So we may be at the haloween stop for a while.*

Matt~~

I felt my calm about to crack. I pulled out my phone and dialed 911.

"Hello, my girlfriend just got shot by a guy, I dont know who it is. We need help."

"Where are you?"

"The school up I-97"

"We'll be right there."

I hung up my phone and dug May's out of her pocket. I found her fathers number and pressed call.

"AH my darling!" His voice was full of love.

"Umm... Actually this is Matt-"

"Why are you on my princess's phone?"

"She was shot. I just called an ambulance, and I thought you should be the next to know."

He choked a little, and it sounded as if he were crying, "Who did it?"

"I have no idea." Then I remembered, "He was speaking in Italien though."

"I will be right there."

*Lizzifer, I think this is how you wanted it to go.*
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*She got shot?!?!?!*
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*apparently, yes*
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*yeah the post was like three pages back, we were waiting for people to notice, but no one did.*
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*I noticed something but I didn't get it very well. Now I do...*




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*Yeah, I guess it wasn't very clear...*
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*im sorry.... yeah she got shot..*
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Oh I thought that someone shot of some fire crackers or something and she got knocked out. Well I'll get that in next post.
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* I thought she got shot but I thought it was more fainting and she drought she was dying ohwell I'll post anyway*

Jack

I walked down the hall when I heard someone shouting into a phone for help. I opened the door and jumped out of the window landing perfectly. The boy looked up at me shoked.

"who the hell are you" he said the girl was his girlfriend by the way he was holding her"

"um Adams brother Jack but what the hell happened here anyway who shot her" he looked at me with a stunned face.

"I don't know who shot her I haven't really had time to ask her and um come on help me stop the bleading or something" he put his hands on her stomoc area were she had been shot. I let my more nerdy ways take over.

"well it's stem the bleading and you can't push down their or you'll damage her arteries and digestive system" I said thinking of what we could do.

"so um what do we do" he said and the thought came to me.

" well salt it will make the wound scab over faster" he nodded and we both started shouting for salt. A girl ran out of the dorms and round to us with a jar of salt.

"hey Alyse" Matt said as she passed him the salt.




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*Um...salt??? That makes it burn! And there's probably an ambulance coming any second now*
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May~~ She doesn't know what time it is...

I awoke with the shuffling of legs around me. They filed out of the room with whispers and my father stood lone in the middle.

"Where am I?" my throat was dry.

"Home." he said simply, not looking at me.

"Italy?"

"No your in our american home right now, fully outfitted and such." he said gravely, his face towards the large windows.

"Why am I here?" I attempted to jerk up but fell with the pain on my side. Looking downward I saw the bandages wrapped expertly around my lower torso. I repeated my question and was answered with a sigh.

"Hunny, you were shot and are in danger. Your mother has been taken to a safe house where you will soon join her."

"What about my friends!?" I cried.

"They think your dead, poor Matt." He said in a chilling voice.

"No! They can't! They have to-" I cried again, tears rolling down my face.

"Your dead to the outside world, everyone. Even my competitor who tried to get to me by hurting you." he said with a content sigh.

Tears streamed down my face, my life was gone. May didn't exist anymore, May Kurenai did not exist anymore.

She was dead.

My eyes flickered to my father who was thinking he did the right thing.

"There will be a memorial service at your school, scheduled for november thirteenth."

"How long have I been asleep?" I mumbled.

"You put on a great show at the hospital let's just say that." he smiled trying to lighten the mood and at once i hated my father. More tears and I wouldn't rest until I went back to that school. Eventually, I had to go back...
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Nick~~

When we got the call me and lei drove right to the hospital to see her. I watched the whole surgery, along with Matt, making sure he was okay. After that she was announced dead and we all left but Matt.
Not till we got back though did I speak up.

"It doesn't add up," I told Lei

"What?" She asked.

"May dieing. Bio might be my weakest science but I know it well enough. And according to what I know that shot's position was not close enough to the heart to kill, or really damage that much of the body. And that type of surgery is a simple one, interns can do it. So she should be alive still, I just don;t get it," I explained.

"Well there is nothing we can really do to it," Lei said and put her head on my shoulder.
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Chad~

Of course the school informed all the parents about the incident. Some parents called with concern and others actually pulled their kids out, but of course I heard nothing from mine. The kids that were allowed to stay were sent to their rooms, and were instructed not to leave. This was extremely hard for me to do for the last time I had seen Maria she was holding back tears. I knew that once alone she would let it all out.

*Short, but I'm a bit lost right now.*
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Leighton (I'm guessing its about midnight..)

"She's gone." I said, still confused about the whole thing.

How could she be dead? I would never see May again?

I started to cry.

"Sshh. Go to sleep." Nick said, putting his arm around my waist.

That was easier said than done. But I was tired, so soon I closed my eyes and fell asleep on Nick's shoulder.

*short....are we skipping to the funeral? Maria's b-day? Christmas break?*
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This is after Jok's post with Jack. And this skips to a few days later. Does May ... erm, die? And if so, then I can modify Alyse's post.

Alyse

As she handed Matt the salt, Alyse felt her stomach bubbling. The blood that was seeping from the wound ... she felt lightheaded ...

Alyse was lucky not to be panicking, but something wasn't right. "May?" Alyse remembered croaking out. But to no response. May was gone. Alyse denied this, but something inside her was screaming, She's dead! She's dead!

Through the turmoil of that night, Alyse had found a way to get back to her room. She felt herself collaps into tears of worry, and fear, and sorrow. She wanted May to be all right. But what if she wasn't?

She went into town on the weekend to get her hair done like she'd scheduled, but along the way she stopped and bought May a huge bouquet of died daisies, and a huge teddy bear. She imagined that Matt had already topped Alyse's gift about twice, but she'd ended up giving it to a nurse anyways. She couldn't bear to see May lying lifelessly in a hospital bed.

Kori

She slammed the door of the old pick-up closed and dragged her suitcase down the gravel driveway. The crickets were chirping, surprisingly, since it was fall, but a light flickered on in the house.

A figure stepped out, wrapping a pink housecoat around themselves for warmth. "Kori I told you not to come home!"

"You think I'd listen?" Kori said, pushing past her aunt into the house. Heaps of bills and cards lay on the table, and her uncle was busy watching some fishing some on TV.

"I'm taking you back tomorrow." Her aunt said gruffly, heading back up the stairs. Kori hurried up after her, and went into the first room on the right. There slept Jacob, pale and tired-looking, but yet he looked serene and peaceful. Kori smiled and headed back to her room. Heis going to be all right!
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Boring, pointless, I know *sigh* It's early.
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