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Matt- Group one

"I can herd them into a passage where you guys can jump out and scare them."

"Sounds good."

I got up and walked out the door. My guitar was back in my room, and I had taken off my costume for the time being. It was hard to move in the overlarge shirt.

I moved through th hallways silently until I caught sight of the other group. Someone turned around to looked behind them, but I turned into a classroom so they all they saw was the dark hallway.

I went throught he class to the hallway in front of them. I checked to see if they were coming and when they were close I untied a string and let a sheet of cobweb fall across the hallway. I heard screams, but I was already running back to my orriginal point so that I could cut them off and force them down the side hallway.I saw a knight on a rolling platform and i got an evil idea. I lit two smoke bombs and put them in the things helmet along with two light sticks. When the group was close I pushed it out into the hallway. The smokebombs exploded with a bang made louder by the helmet. The lightsticks just enhanced the effect. There were more screams, but again I was gone, looking for my next way to guide them ever deeper into the school.

After several turns they were finally headed down the right hallway. I saw may in the back lagging around with a slightly scared look on her face. I snuck up behind the group and right as they followed a turn in the hallway I grabbed her. I covered her mouth and pushed her into a classroom. As I pulled the door shut I threw some more smoke bombs and some fire crackers into the hallway. I wasn't paying attention though.

I turned May around so that she was loking at me and gave her a kiss. She resisted at first but then she realized it was me and pulled back.

When I pulled back I said, "You dont really want to go down that hall right now."

She gave a little laugh, but I could still feel her heart doing cartwheels.

"Scared?"

"Not any more."

"Well I payed you back."

*And now I have to go. Hope that fits with the plan*
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Nick~~

"Hey Lei," I whispered in her ear.

"What," She said.

"Come follow me," I told her and grabbed her hand pulling her away from the others.

"Where are we going?" Lei asked.

"No idea," I said and lead her to a broom closet.

"Wow, so romantic," Lei said, "So why did you bring me here?"
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Kevin~~

"Kori, wait up," I said and grabbed her shoulder. She jumped at least five feet in the air when I touched her. Turning around with her arm raised she was about to punch, but then she saw it was me and stopped.

"I thought I told you to go a head," She said.

"You did, but I hate Halloween. I would much rather hang out with you," I told her as we walked away.
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*I need to go to therapy. I have a major test on Monday yet I'm still on here. I'm trying to withold my need to post. I know I'm not supposed to sabotage this with little comments but I want yall to keep me in your prayers : - )*
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*Okay. So Kori and Kevin are quits with Hallowe'en because I made Kori such a wimp. :)*

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Kevin walked Kori towards the stairs that would take them to her room. "You really didn't have to come. I'm ruining all your fun because I'm a wimp!" Kori blushed, moping sweat off her face with her wrist. It wasn't that she was hot ... just that she had been so frightened.

"S'okay. I told ya I didn't like Hallowe'en much." Kevin said.

Something occurred to Kori. She'd be all alone. Her eyes widened at the thought, but she quickly covered it up. "A-ctually, let's head back! I just realized that they'll be playing scary movies all night and ... well ... I'm obviously not a big fan of them ..."

Kevin raised a single eyebrow at her. "You sure...?"

"To be honest ...," Kori sighed, her shoulders slumping, "no."
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Kevin~~

Monster movie marathon, sweet. Kori would be jumping around the whole time hiding in my calming arms awesome!

When we got there I turned the TV on and she turned some music on. The first movie was one so bad and unscary Kori only hid two times, the rest she was laughing. But the second one got me. It was gang movie, and it set me back. I was 12, and city kid, with a rich dad and mum, a brother who was like a dad, and two friends you would love to have. Oh and I was in a gang, did i mention that. And one day, this day, a few years ago, there was a war, and that night my brother and my two friends died from it. This movie brought it all back, I could feel tears starting to form in my eyes, then one fell down. Kori looked up and saw them.
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Kori

"K-Kevin?" Kori was panicking. Her heart was throbbing in her chest. What was wrong? I am really that annoying? Kori thought, shifting closer. She placed a hand on his shoulder, as another tear rolled down his cheek. He was staring blankly at the TV.

Kori bounced off the couch, stumbling to her knees because she was trying to move to fast, and flipped off the TV. She quickly turned the music off, too, and hurried back to the couch. "W-What's wrong?"

She felt tears welling up in her eyes. Was it something from his past? She barely even knew him, for Heaven's sakes! "Look ... if you didn't want to stay, that's okay. You could've just told me...," Kori said, trying to sound reassuring, though her voice gave away her dissappointment.
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Hope that's okay.
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*I don't know why, but the way Imaged Kevin I can't really see him crying, but I am doing it fro some reason*
Kevin~~
"No its not that. I was having fun, but that just brought back some bad memories," I told her and tried to stop crying, but the tears wouldn't stop.
"What about," Kori asked, but then a mila second after said, "no never mind you don;t have to tell me, I'm just invading where I shouldn't be."

"N, I'll tell you. its just some really close people died a few years back, today. That movie reminded me how," I told her.

"In a gang war?" She asked.

"Yeah," I said slowly nodding at the same pace.

"Wait were you in a gang?"

"Yes." I said solemnly and looked away, I had finally gotten my tears to stop, but now they came again.
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May~~

My heart pulsed blood through my ears, the fast pumping made others comments inaudible to me so I kept to myself. So far I had run through some maze, by myself scared to death, got chased by a man with a chainsaw, of the joy, and finally I was here back with the group. Smoke bobms went off somewhere and I was pulled into a classroom, with a hand over my mouth.

Escape Route Escape Route

I was jerked and lips pressed against mine. i sighed when I realized it was my bard, I wrapped my arms around his neck and heaved a sigh.

"You really don't wanna go into that hallway right now," he said pointing, as I heard the yelps and cries of team members. I chuckled and my pulse got lower. I wrapped my arms around his neck again as he said.

"Scared?"

"Not any more."

"Well I payed you back." he smiled and touched my nose with mine.

"Meanie." I stated plainly and he laughed.

Click


"Ok that has done it!" I spun around to the window, the moon light's glare was interrupted by a jagged shadow.

"May.." Matt said reaching for my arm and I bolted out the window towards the dark figure. I heard Matt's heavy foot falls right behind mine. The skirt fluttered and glowed as I ran towards the slow moving figure. Finally, catching up, I lept onto the male figure and ripped his camera out of his hands.

"This?" The man looked pleadingly at the camera and then into my eyes. He was obviously italian, with his dark hair and eyes. I smirked and then...

BANG BANG BANG


I smiled and fell back, the man ran off and a figure stood over me. "MAY!" Matt cried over and over.
I smiled weakly and fell back into my abyss of darkness. I mouthed something I barely remembered then the darkness finally consumed my soul.

What a screwed up way to die
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Shannon -Group 2

I reached Maria. She wasn't moving probably scared.
"It's me you silly. I said.~She turned with an angry face.
"You sick girl! Don't do that again please? You scared the hell out of me!" She replied.
"Ok but it's Halloween. This is really scary. You were the only one that I found. So we are gonna be together. I know the other group is out there to scare us. Please, let's keep together..." I said.
"Yes yes. I don't wanna be around there alone..."
"Sure. Now, let's explore our school by night!" I said with a sneaky voice.

*short I know but I'm kind of out of ideas and action. Please someone get action here!*




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*Oh yeah, I totally forgot Lei is in her pirate costume..*

Leighton

"So, why did you bring me here?" I asked, as if there were so many reasons that a guy would bring a girl to a closet.

"Oh, nothing really." Nick said, closing the door.

It was pretty dark. I jumped a little when Nick put his hands on my waist.

"I scared you, already?" Nick said jokingly.

I laughed and wrapped my arms around his neck. His breath tickled my cheeks as he leaned in to kiss me.

I pushed myself closer to him as we kissed and let out a giggle.

"Wait a sec. Can I put my locket back on?" I asked, looking him in the eyes.

*Did you have something particular in mind? Otherwise, I was going to have Maria and Shannon find them*
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*Ok yay ^^*

Marianne (G1)

Gladly, it was Shannon that found me. We walked together through the school. I didn't remember how we got separated from the group and Chad. We were in a hallway, when we heard something crack and quick foot steps. We saw a black silhouette with a knife, turning to our hallway, and we ran to the closest closet. We were so scared we did not notice someone was in there already.
"Oh, Lei!" I said, still panting.
Then I noticed Nick.
"What's up Nick?" Shannon said.
We looked closer, it was very dark, and only then we saw that they were really close and that we interrupted something.
"Oh, sorry. We'll leave right now"
They just looked at us strangely while we opened the door and sneaked out. Shannon saw the figure near again, and I closed the door as fast as I could, letting go a little scream.
"Maybe not so soon..." I whispered.
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Adam

I 'd started off scaring people but we had all gone our separate ways and well it was dark and scary.
Two figures walked towards me.

"Nick,Lei is that you?" Their was no answer and the figures got closer.

"Matt , May" nothing.

"Kevin, Kori" nothing.

"oh screw it" I said and ran in the opposite direction the weird things chasing me. while the older students were being scared the younger one were having a dance. I burst through the doors and ran through the dancing kids.

"help me I swear to god theirs fucking things out their and they want to kill I don't want to die I'm Irish" I screamed at no one in particular a year 8 spoke.

"wow at least I know I'll lose my virginity before this pussy" he said getting a laugh out of his little friends I wasn't gonna take that scared or not scared.

"Hey mate if you were in the dark being chased you'd scream wouldn't you, yes you bloody would did you get that rhetorical question before yeah I'm hip and all that with all your f in swearing and shit yeah guess what your that fucking smart see what I 'm doing because dumb shit can put swear every to f in words okay and any way I already lost my virginity so take that and go home to your.." I felt a hand on my shoulders and screamed running out of the dance hall and into the school building their I opened the nearest cousin and jumped in. I slammed the door. Suddenly I could tell I wasn't alone in the cupboard I put my hands together in prayer and screamed at the ceiling.

"no god please not the undead god no please" I screamed

"Adam" a soft voice said but I was to scared to the softness.

"noooo they know my name I'm dead dead as the bloody do do I'll confess anything god anything.."

"Adam" the same voice said I turned around to see that it was Shannon three others of the group were their too.

"sorry I get scared you know to many horror movies" they shrugged and then the door swung open as we all screamed at the surprise I did the classic thing of pulling the girl into my arms to scream would we run or would we stay.

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Kori

Kori didn't know what to say. She felt her own tears welling up inside her. "B-But what about the ... the 'o-oom'?" Kori stammered, mimicking the 'ooom' made during mediation. Kevin gave a faint smile, and though his tears had stopped, she felt that she saw them again.

She looked down. Oh yeah, she was still in her costume. She decided that this was her chance. Maybe just give him a minute to himself. Kori got up. "Well, I'm sure it isn't the greatest getting sympathy from Dorothy of the Wizard of Oz. I'm just going to get into some PJs."

Kori got up quickly, and wiped under her eyes, her mascara wet on her finger. She felt like this hit home, too, somehow. Her dad ... in prison ... she couldn't think of it. She hurried into her room and much too eagerly slammed the door before she broke down into tears. I've been so selfish! Never thinking of anyone but myself. What about dad ... and my brother ...? Kori sniffed a few times, and clasped a hand over her mouth to muffle the sobs that had broken through her lips.
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Kevin~~

When Kori left I decided I needed to stop crying. So I got up, shook the sad off. I was done finally, and I knew they wouldn't come back know. Getting up I headed to the bathroom to...well go to the bathroom. But as I pat I heard Kori crying softly.

"Hey Kori you okay," I asked, no response, "Kori you okay," Again no response, "I hope your descent," I said, then whispered, "Kind of," Under my breath.

I found Kori weeping on her bed.

"Its okay," I told her and sat down next to her. She kept on sobbing. "Don't worry its okay," I told her. I really had no Idea what to say, with no idea what she was crying about, and her inability to tell me in this sort of crying, "C'mon, it'll be alright," I told her, really this was going to be hard.
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Kori

She took a few, deep shaky breaths, and nodded her head, her lips quivering. She tried hard not to cry. When Kevin looked questioningly at her, she just mumbled, "Stuff at home" and wiped beneath her eyes before getting up. "S-Sorry to being all ... pathetic tonight." She swallowed and put on her best smile, though she knew she looked horrible. Her eyes would be red, mascara running ... She tried hard not to make eye contact with Kevin.

"S'okay." Kevin said again. Kori knew she should tell him what was wrong, and why she was crying, but she couldn't find the courage. She found herself yawning soon. Luckily she'd gotten into her pajamas. She knew she'd be tired that night.

"Well," Kori stretched, trying hard not to look troubled, "let's go watch Children of the Corn! Oooh," She added for effect. Chuckling, her and Kevin went to the couch, but all the while the pit of her stomach was gurgling. Something was right. Something definitely wasn't right. I'll have to call home later, or check my emails, Kori decided, slumping back into the couch cusions and yawning again, as Kevin turned the TV on. She decided that - just to show she wasn't too pathertic - and if she started crying again - she flipped off the lights, leaving on the kitchen flood lights, and two lamps on.
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I sense character plot!
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