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Angels vs. Demons

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Name: Cale

Age: 19

Race: Angel

Personality: Very protective. A little cocky.

Strength/ability: He can control elements; Wind, Air, Fire, Water.

Weekness: Darkness.

Appearance: http://wayw.deviantart.com/art/HOT-GUY-2-91143516

Other: Up for love, Senra's brother

Senra

"So, you going to to prove you can beat him?" Senra asked as she leaned against the wall watching Cariad practicing.

"No." Cale replied. "I'm older, I should be able to beat him. Only when your around to block my mind though." She smiled a little. She'd learned that trick when she was little sense her father could read minds. She'd learn to pass it to others with her healing skill.

"Next person he fights I'm going to block their mind." She smiled.

"Looks like your in luck, him and Aiden are at it again." Cale repleid. Senra focused on Aiden's mind slowly putting a wall up leaving just a rose for Cariad to 'see'. That was her mark, and only Cale knew about it.
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**Aiden's a demon. He wouldn't be fighting Cariad unless they were in the same place. Which they aren't, at the moment. Lol. Cariad can fight Cale.**

Cariad:

I approached Cale. "Hey. How's my friend doing?" I smiled.

"Very good. How are you?"

"Good." I glanced at his sister. She was really pretty. I tried to burrow my way into her mind. I wanted to know if she liked me. I frowned. That was odd. I smiled. "Cale? You up for a challenge?" I asked good naturedly.
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain




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**So ignore my last post the fight part that is :D**

Cale

Cale smiled and nodded. "Of course." He smiled at Senra who smiled back and sent him a quick wink then leaned against the wall watching them. He knew she had a slight crush on Cariad, but she always had.
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Cariad:

I smiled and got ready to fight. I tried to bury my way into his mind, but couldn't. I was shocked. I felt blind. I couldn't anticipate his next move. I scowled. Everyone gathered to watch. Even Crystal seemed interest as I got the biggest butt whooping of my life.

"Nice job." I said to Cale. "You did...well. No one has beaten me before." I chuckled and smiled at Senra. "What's your secret, Cale, I'd love to know." I grinned.
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Cale:

"Secret?" Cale asked.

"Ya, how do you blokc me ou?" He asked as they walked over to where Senra was. She smiled jumping up and giving Cale a hug.

"Block you out?" Cale asked again.

"Keep me from reading your mind." Cariad growled.

"Oh, I don't know. Just happens I guess." He smiled.
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Cariad:

I laughed and flashed a smile at his sister. Crystal walked over, smirking.

"What?"

"Nothing." She giggled.

I rolled my eyes. I hugged her quickly. She laughed and smiled at Senra.

I laughed. "What we would do for our sisters, right?" I tease.
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Senra:

"You mean what you would do without your sisters?" She asked smiling at Cale who laughed and lifted up the ground under her. "PUT ME DOWN BEFORE I HURT YOU?"

"That's against your power." Cale laughed at her putting her down.

"You know I"ll do it though." She hissed at him. He smiled and hugged her so she couldn't move or elbow him.
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[Hey TN, since everyone's doing this claiming stuff, want our characters to have a relationship?]

Latanya:

"I don't want to fight." She said aloud, more to herself than anyone, really.Don't hesitate.Release. She released her fingers and the arrow quickly shot out from the bow, landing slightly off from the bulls eye. She only used this one target, for she only used it in times of stress.

Whenever she hesitated to release the arrow, she often missed her target...slightly. It aggravated her a little, but not enough to worry her. She had always been good at archery. Everyone else had really cool supernatural stuff, but she was....kinda normal, which made her feel like the oddball.
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Name: Ringo Tori

Age: 17

Race: Demon

Personality: *will think of it later*

Strength/ability: Slow time.

Weakness: Time partially reverses (as in he gets slightly younger.) every time he uses the power. So he can only use it limitedly. Every hour or so he loses a minute of age.

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Gatian

He arrived in the training rooms late, already most of the angels had picked a training partner and were sparring. He saw Cale and Cariad with their sisters, laughing, joking and having fun. For once, the downside of his abilities was actually a blessing - where he should have felt a sharp pang of loneliness, he simply felt a bright reflection of their joy. Almost as if he were standing at the side of God with the Archangels.

He sat down in a corner, simply basking in the combined happiness and the thrill of competition as they swept over him. He supposed he'd have to spar sooner or later, but until then, he was happy just to relax. After all, why fight your brothers when your enemy is at your doorstep?

Ben

It was raining again. Once, the rain had been one of Ben's favourite things. Nothing was more relaxing than a walk through the pouring rain. Nowadays, of course, nothing was more depressing.

But he was short on supplies, and a medium he'd visited recently had sensed brewing conflict in the realms of the supernatural, and that meant he was going to need to get some weapons fixed, maybe upgraded.

The medium who'd warned him had also given him the name of a weaponsmith of some kind, Jude Heartworth. Apparently, she made top of the line weapons when it came to demon hunting, if she could get the right supplies. Ben was sure he could get those for her.

Reaching the apartment building the medium had told her he could find her in, Ben went to the nearest public phone and rang her from it.

"Is this Jude Heartworth?" He asked, and continued upon her answer, "I'm calling about what you make. I need some repairs and supplies. I'm outside your apartment block right now, if you'd care to help me out."
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"Hey guys" she said as she pulled the big Skull Candy headphones down to her neck. She liked that particular brand because she thought it was ironic. Now she was standing amongst Senra and the others, who had been playing and messing around together. Latanya had been a little to stressed to join in.

"What are you guys up to? I'm kinda worried about this whole demon situation." She nervously shifted her bow onto her shoulder and looked at the others.
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Rose

Rain poured down as Rose stole the country side, searching for a lone house. She passed tall trees and several villages, but never the house she was looking for. She had crossed the path of a few unlucky humans, and after just one look, they stayed frozen to the spot with fear.

Upon reaching the house, Rose ran inside of the unlocked shelter and descended a flight of stairs, and there, in the deepest of holes, was the hideaway for the Demons. There were several people there already and they all bowed their heads in respect.

"So, what is the newest plan for the war?" Rose asked.

**Just thought I should add something with the demons. If there has already been something like this, just tell me.***
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Jude Heartworth

"Who is this?" I asked warily. I was used to getting calls about weapons but I was always careful. I knew something was going on in the realm of the supernatural and I didn't want to be responsible for making the right weapons for the wron people.

"My name's Ben," was his answer. I couldn't tell just from his voice whether I could trust him or not but I told him to come over anyways, if he wasn't trustworthy I would know as soon as he walked in the door.

I hung up the phone and walked into the kitchen. I pulled a big red leather bound book off the shelf above the sink. It was heavy and there were papers and leaves sticking out of the pages. A little bit of dust flew up when I dropped the book on the counter. I coughed and flipped it open. My powers were limited except in the area of weapon making so I needed the book a few other things.

I thumbed through the pages until I found the one I wanted. I reached over and open a cabinet containing a dozen uniform jars all filled with different herbs. I reached behind the jars until I found the bag of salt. I pulled it out and put a solid line above the door, that would keep him out if he was a demon.

The next test was a little tougher but wouldn't take too long.
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