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(Hope no one minds my guys jumping in.)

Kokuga. Yori, Koka Koga Group Positioned Somewhere on the Outskirts of the Hidden Leaf.

An old master with two males lurk on a dusty broken merchant path, disguised as samurai of the lord. Kokuga takes the lead with his walking stick out proudly in front of him as he scales the hill. Directly behind him lies the disguised Yori, baring a long sword firmly in hand, Kokuga's servant. Koka appearing to be the legitimate son of Kokuga brings up the rear with a small arsenal of weapons kept under a burlap sack.

Alerted by the sudden rush of activity, the three genjutsu users begin to make their moves.

"Let me say this one last time," Kokuga began, "Our orders from the honorable Raikage are simple. Observe and monitor Konoha. If you come into contact, reveal nothing. If hostile you are to immediately retreat. Infiltration level 1."

"Understood, Master Kokuga." Yori and Koka said in unison.

"Yori go with Koka. He will need monitoring with so many powerful opponents around."

Koka did not show his anger and accepted her support on the matter, but Kokuga added one gracious exception at the last moment.

"In case of unavoidable conflict. Incapacitate them and deal with the matter. We don't want a war, so only do it as a last resort. Now go."

"Kage Bunshin no Jutsu," Yori and Koka spoke and a second clone appeared beside them. The two clones immediately went off and towards the Konoha gates at full speed, to monitor the coming and goings of any ninja. As long as they stayed downwind they could hopefully secure an outpost just a mile from the gates.


As the first two clones of Yori and Koka left, Kokuga finally had converted enough chakra for the more complex Tajuu Kage Bunshin and created four separate clones of himself. Those three clones used Hensojutsu to duplicate a three man team of genins with a Jounin instructor.

The three genins wore the emblem of Konoha on black vests and black pants. The three's faces were cold, expressionless and having their characteristics drawn from a similar bloodline. Two boys and one girl, appearing to be academy graduates around 12 or 13. Both boys possessed short raggamuffin black hair and the girl had soft blonde hair the color of goldenrod. The Jounin supporting them bore uncanny resemblance to Orochimaru, in fact it would be accurate to say that the pale snake-like features of the hated man would be obvious amongst the chuunin and jounin of Konoha. His long black hair and merciless eyes made a mockery of the legendary sannin, but all in the name of information gathering. This team of three genin and the orochi jounin departed from Konoha set to intercept Konoha ninja if necessary not far from the city borders.

"Reveal to us your secrets, Konoha. For the honor of the Raikage!"
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( this makes no sense, follow the others the leaf village is under attack, all the people are hiding and half the place is knocked out)




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(Its the most powerful of all the ninja villages, that attack may hurt player characters, but what about the dozens of Genin, Chuunin and other Jounin. Sure you lost twenty, but Konoha has plenty in reserves. I'm going under the assumption the Hidden Leaf is hurting bad, but I am not Hidden Leaf, I am Hidden Cloud. We are mere observers to the battle and have not even gotten close enough to learn anything which happened. It takes time and my characters will not burst in until the situation is understood by them.

Edit: Additionally, they have not even learned the extent of the battle which took place. It is still being regarded as 'activity' by Kokuga, not 'battle' or anything of the sort. Once visual confirmation of the situation as been relayed, they will act delicately because they are not from the same village. Diplomatic relations come first for them, so you probably won't see any of my characters entering the hidden leaf to do any sort of aid. Tough luck, but that's how different nations operate. The Hokage would have to ask the Raikage and the Raikage would have to give orders to Kokuga and change their mission from observation to humanitarian aid.

Edit2: The last part about interception, purely a guise which Kokuga will use to gather information first hand from his clone team. If the situation plays out in his favor, the hidden leaf might gain some temporary allies if they ignore the fact an unknown team on Konoha's borders are watching matters. I'll explain this in length now:

1. Intercept Ninja from Konoha
2. Learn of matter by conversation/capture.
3a. If conversation proves useful, follow and go based on judgement.
3b-a. If attacked, surrender and be brought before Hokage or higher ups)
3b-b. Use information garnered to follow based on judgement.
4. Ascertain key information from interaction necessary for the Raikage.
5. Depart once observation of Konoha is complete.

This is a rough summary of Kokuga's mission and plan. Every measure has been thought out and made ready. No matter what happens, he will succeed in his mission. To what extent lies in the Hidden Leaf's needs and suspicions.)




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*wow ok i need to get all the chars straight. Shouldn't every leaf village ninja just go to a meeting with Tsunade?*
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Usiko~~

Usiko and Shageno climbed the steps to the hokages office with Tristan ahead as they were going to the debrief on the situation. Gero still flew up above ordering the other bats to distract the new enemies.

(sorry it is so short but i have nothing else to say)




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Lita woke up in the medical ward and was sent to the Hokage house. A group of leaf village ninja were already there.


The Hokage addressed them

"It has been brought to my attention that our village wasn't the only one to be attacked today. All the villages have reported missing Ninja attacking their villages. Most of the situations are under control but we have a bigger problem. It would seem that a new village has been created. We know nothing of it exept that the missing ninja that escaped today were headed in that direction."

"Wait, only one ninja attacked each village. If they have an army full of ninja then why only attack with one. Lin was strong but she was only human. She wouldn't have been able to kill you." Usiko said.

"That's what I want you to find out.

*You're next mission travel to the new missing ninja village and gather information.
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*I seriousl hope this works. But let me say: this is dang confusing.*
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Zakuro nodded her head as the hokage asked her questions. "You have sworn never to betray konoha" "be there for the interrogation on Sunday" et cetera. Finally an anxious rap filled the room. Shizune went to answer it.

Two boys burst in. They began telling the hokage about an attack. They waited for Tsunade to answer.
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Yeah, yeah, I know its short.
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*someone pull my character in please, i missed a lot. ^^*
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*someone should give a detailed explanation of all that has happened in the DT... not it*
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Ok alll the villages were attacked by a missing Ninja(which is a ninja that has left their village. Usiko's old teacher Lin who was a vampire like ninja attacked the leaf village by sending charkra sucking bats to attack. Usiko,battled Lin. In the mist village Syth formerly of the sand attacked and was held off by the mist ninja. Ti a ninja that eats things attacked the rock village, and Kita attacked the sand village. Use your imagination when it comes to all the other villages they were all attacked. Ok Lita who is Kita's sister was sent to the leaf village to help out, and was taken down by the bats. Hiro was eating Ramen in the leaf village and was drained of his chakra. Tristin and Zakuro went to the Hokage manor but were sent to hel Usiko battle Lin. Kita finds the missing ninja village and. The battles come to a close and the corpses are taken before the villages can do research. The Kage's of the village plan send representative ninjas to gather information from the missing ninja village. That's what's happened in a nutshell for further questions pm me. Think of this as a fresh start forget the first mission and go on to you're new mission. Oh and the cloud village is gathering information on the leaf village. Now to form squads.

Leaf village squad Multi Squad
Kuzon
Zakuro Lita
Tristin Tenkuu
Shangeno/Uskio Maro
Ringo Akumu


Hiro and Ichiro I don't know if you're still active, join in when you're ready.

And La I'm aware that you you're only chunnin. Lets say all the villages are running low on ninja, for most are already on missions or injured. This rag tag team is all the villages could scrounge up.
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Please remember: Zakuro is only a chuunin.
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* i think we shouldlimit everyone to one charachter that way people could keep track better.*
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Amon, Maro is from the mist village not the leaf




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**Same for Tenkuu and Akumu, but I think I get the idea, the villages are forming a multi-squad?**

Tenkuu

Syth gave a laugh, "And you truly expect me to believe that? I know what Sagi Shibou teaches, and it isn't the typical ninja path. You won't kill me, and I won't give up the sword. You'll just let me go on my way, and I'll leave your village alone."

Tenkuu gave Teishu Sagi a pleading look over his shoulder, "Teishu? What must I do?"

The old man hung his head a little, "My students are men of their word."

Tenkuu nodded, understanding, and looked back to Syth, who had turned around to leave. Tenkuu placed the point of his naginata against Syth's chest, a calm mask coming across his face, "May the spirits forgive you, Syth of the Sand Village." He pushed forward with the long-bladed spear, impaling the missing ninja.

As he withdrew the blade, Syth staggered back, a look of shock on his face. He started to fall back, but before he hit the ground, another two ninja dropped out of the air. They didn't bear any mark that might distinguish them as being from another village. They caught Syth before he hit the ground, and then, hoisting him up, seemed to vanish again into the darkness.

A moment later, a young messenger in the pale blue robes of a civil servant of the Kirigakure Mizukage came running out through the gates. He stopped as he saw the poisoned bodies of the ninja, and threw up. Straightening after a moment, pale-faced, he delivered his message, "Teishu Sagi Shibou. The Mizukage has requested that your students join a squad to investigate reports of a Hidden Village of Missing Ninja. What say you?"

Sagi nodded once, "They will go, but I will go with them. My genin student Akumu Denrei is not yet fully trained, and Tenkuu Denrei isn't capable of training another yet."
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As I said, most ninja from the various villages are already on asingment or injured from the attacks. The vilages have to get creative, and join forces againts the same danger.
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