PRETTY Please review my work :)

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I need some feedback for a school assignment urgently- if you could assist me, my poem's called Stains and its in lyrical poetry. I'll return the favour.

Cheers guys.




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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. You seem to have misunderstood what this forum is for. This is a place where you offer your services as a reviewer, not a writer. People post links to their works for you to critique. Please pm me if you have any questions.

This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!



The idea that a poem was a made thing stayed with me, and I decided then that I wanted to be an artist, not just a diarist. So I put myself through a kind of apprenticeship in writing poetry, and I understood even then that my practice as a poet was deeply related to my reading.
— Edward Hirsch