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Awww, this was awesome. I think it's dead, but is a revival too hard to ask for? The plot was just getting interesting. Though we'll need an actual plot for this to be resurrected and so it won't die again. Anyone got any ideas for this necromancy?
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we follow what is happening, make it kind of like the actual show, so the first season will be about taking down the company that hunts down people with powers.




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Taking down the Company was more a side note in all the seasons - the main thing in the first season was stopping the bomb, the second season was stopping the virus, and the third was about stopping Arthur Petrelli's villains trying to synthesise abilities. If we had a precog character, then we'd be able to bring up the bomb thing, or another plot where the characters would be trying to stop the future.
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well, we have a bomb in my peter and maybe Ballow could develop his power to go to the future and see it happen.
But really i meant the first part of the first season was for that then after that it was about the bomb.




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PLEASE WATCH THIS SPOT FOR MORE INFO!!!!!

Yeah, that sound pretty good seeing as Ballow's Base Power is to slow time. Perhaps travelling through it could his advancement. Okay, well we got that out of the way. What are the villains going to aim for? I mean all the goodies will be trying to stop the bomb, so what'll the baddies being doing? Seriously its not like they want the city in ruins either.

So PLAN SO FAR (PSF)

PSF: Ballow learns how to go forward in time sees the bomb exploding and whole place going up in flames.

Goodies: Band together and try to figure out how to stop bomb.

Baddies: Get the wrong info so they fight with the Goodies, thinking that the bomb'll give them better powers.

Now how are the Baddies going to know about the bomb in the future? I mean Ballow is a goodie, so how's that gonna work?

*If you also have any questions, do tell.*
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they learn some false info on the bomb and think the explosion will help them because the radiation will give powers to normal people.
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Okay well. I'll post Ballow's trip to future when I get back home. ^^
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well, i am going to make Tyler a baddie but he will act has a goodie at first then he betrays the others and joins the baddies and tells them that.




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Hooray! It's back!

Ok, so where do we go from?
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About anywhere, or where you left off. ^^ No actual time date was set while we were planning this was there? In that case let me just do a few things.

Ballow


He glanced at X and the girl, something didn't feel right. A coldness surrounded him and he gripped at his shoulders to stop his shaking frame. Soon everything blurred as a frosty mist covered evrything in view.

He lost sight of both X and the girl. His nose soon began numb and turned pink and his ears follow suit. Rubbing at his arms to regain warmth he exhaled air through his mouth. It came out in little puffs of clouds and his jaw began to chatter.

Frost was forming on his clothes and he gave it a half-hearted flick to rid himself of it, but as soon as it was gone more appeared. Chill set into his bones and momentarily his heart stopped as if frozen in time. And maybe it was.

It is said that the human body can still blink even after death moves in to claim life and as Ballow blinked nothing moved behind his eyes. Nothing, not a single thought, brainwave or nerve signal from the rest of his body. Intruth he didn't even remember wanting to blink, it was more the last spasm that human's get to signal the end of their life.

Then as suddenly as it came, the frosty atmosphere disappeared and Ballow took in a sharp breath. His body was racked with coughs and as he hald a hand to his mouth, something warm and sticky was spat out.

He stared at his hand in alarm. Blood. He had just coughed out blood. Flicking it off his hand he glanced quickly around for X and the girl, but in their place there stood buildings which hadn't been there before.

Ballow smiled, maybe this was heaven. A car zoomed pass and the driver shouted obscenities at him and he took the thought back. He gazed at his surroundings and took in everything. He knew where he was, he'd been here countless times before.

He was in New York. A newpaper drifted past caught by some unseen wind and it snagged on his feet. Vageuly annoyed Ballow picked it up and glanced at it. The dat portrayed underneath the title of New York Times was the 03/6/09. Suddenly something burst into light in the sky and Ballow watched in awe. Slowly the light grew brighter and brighter until Ballow could no longer look at it. Closing his eyes he saw little blots of colour dance upon his eyelids.

Taking a deep breath he braved possible blindness to stare at it. And then as the light grew no more, it exploded. The initial shock shook the ground on which he stood, but as full effect hit where Ballow was layer so things were being wiped out of existance.

Knowing he couldn't run Ballow took a deep breath and smiled as the next wave of destructive force hit him. Then there was nothing.

When he came to he was aware of the fact that his body was horizontal and he could smell the sharp tang of hygienic products. Pulling his muck stuck eyelids apart he stared at his environment.

White walls, white bed sheets, white everything. A face was glaring down at him. X.

Sitting on a white chair slightly dozing off was the girl a worried look on her face. Ballow tried to ask X something, btu the only thing that came out was a dry rasp. X had an ecstatic smile on his face as he shook the girl awake. Ballow heard him whisper into her ear, "He's awake. He's not in a coma anymore!"

She fluttered her ees open in amazement as the same time Ballow managed to get out, "The wolrd as we know it is going to end!"

X turned to him in shock, "What do you mean?"

He took a deep breath, which was followed by a coughing fit. More blood landed on his hand as he covered his mouth, but he wiped it on the bed-sheets leaving a nasty red smudge, "Well, there's a bomb. And it explodes on the 3rd of June this year."

The girl frowned, "But its the 10th of May now."

X checked his watch and raised an eyebrow, "No, that was before mister light-headed fainted and fell into a coma. It's already 1:05 am on the 11th."

Ballow groaned and then a smile lit on his face, "I think we'll need a few more guides."

(And that's where everyone else comes in. ^^)
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I am a baddie... I'm still trying to kill you, not help you. Last thing that happened to me was my character feinted.
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* sorry totally forgot about this*

Alex~~

After Ballow's little incident we parted ways. But not for long, we were just going to pack for our trip to New York. For some reason Ballow had seen the future and now we had to get to the city to stop a guy from blowing up and destroying the city. The problem was we did not know who he was just a face in a city with tons and tons of them. but still he was going, it was winter break soon so he could go there, and he had even gotten his mom to say yes somehow. So the next day he was off in ballows private jet to start the craziest search ever. The he saw his brother poke his head in.
"why are you packing" He asked
"I'm heading to new york with a some friends over break" i answered
"who, most of you friends couldn't afford it" he said
"that's only Brendan, and they are a new friend, his dads a billionaire flying us their on his private jet."
"can i come" he asked
"i don't know let me give him a ring, I'm sure he'll say yes" i said
"okay" he said as i took out my phone and dialed his number.
"hey ballow, my bro wants to come with me can he" i asked
"sure" Ballow said "there is plenty room in your new york home and the jet and hey the more the merrier."
"cool" i said then turned to Tyler. " he said sure, so you better get backing we leave tomorrow." and with that Tyler left.

Later~~
the next day we left for the plane by limo and set off quickly. But soon we landed way to soon.
"why did we stop" i asked
" we are making a stop here" ballow said
"where is that" i asked
"Portugal" he said
"why" i asked
"cause last time i was here i got some super vibes from this skateboard shop owner i met, i think we out to pick him up" he said

* i made this to bring in my 4th guy, Ricardo*

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Tyler~~
I was trapped and the other man brought me down.
"so, guess you die" one said and began to approach him
"no wait" another said
"why" the first said
"because who knows he might have changed his mind, and his powers could be helpful to us" The second said
"yes but i can just take it" the first said
"true, but their are strength in numbers"
"fine"
"so did you change your mind"
I thought for a moment, was it really worth dieing over pride and at my age. No i did not want to die and i could always try to get away. "fine, i'll join" i said
"good, then meet us at the airport tomorrow, we are heading to the states for a little meeting she told me before she got knocked out that they have been active there a lot lately." the second man said again. "and pack for efficients and not pleasure"
"okay" i said and began to walk away wit the others as we left the alley, the first man carrying the girl.

Later~~
I arrived home a bit later to find Alex going to the same place, weird, plus he was going most likely better way so i asked and i got my way. The i called the others to tell them i had another way to get there. They said okay, as if i did not matter any more weather or not if i went there and told me to meet them there in three days a the top of the rock building where ever that was.

Later~~
Later the next day we boarded the flight but i was very mad we had made a stop in portugal cause a guy who the billionaire got some coll vibes from. But was glad at least that i had three days till the meeting, hopefully though that be enough.
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