Starstruck

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Colt kept pacing. The nurse brought out a little baby boy, but what about hte other two.

"Where's the girls?" He demanded cradling his son close.

"We got one out. The other will be a little harder, your wife passed out." The nurse replied.

"Where's my little girl? Why can't I go in with her?" He growled. The security guy that they had brought up to keep him from banging hte door down stood up.

"Calm down. They'll take care of it." The man said.

"The first baby is still getting cleaned off. We'll bring her out in a minute. WE're working on getting hte other out." THe nurse said.

"What about my wife?" He growled.

"We'll bring your little girls out in a few minutes." TH enurse disappeared and Colt sunk to the ground.

"What about Journey?"
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Journey could barely breathe, her eyes weren't open but she felt the baby.

"Journey, your daughter is still coming, stay with us honey." A womans voice said, Dr. Sasha Andrews. "Journey... Journey..."

Journey felt her belly contract, Journey couldn't scream, she felt it, it was the worst pain above all. Another contraction hit hard.

Journey screamed, the last thing she heard was a little baby girl screaming, as she took her first breath of life.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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**Two hours later**

Colt sat beside Journey's bed cradling two of the three babies. Trent was holding one of the little girls beside him just as carefully as he could.

"What's her name daddy?" He asked.

"That's Lillian Rose. You can call her Lilly." Colt smiled. "She's got the black hair like yours."

"And the boy?"

"Jamison Cale." COlt replied.

"He has blond hair!" Trent grinned. "How about the other girl?"

"Your mommy said her name had to be Abigal Kaitlyn." He replied.

"Her hair is red!" Trent smiled.

"Don't know where she got it from." Colt replied. He'd listed the babies' names over and over again. He glanced at Journey. He wanted her to be awake. He wanted her to see their babies.
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Journey wanted to scream, she tried to open her eyes. She couldn't. She didn't have any strength. Her eyelids were too heavy, she felt as if she was going to die.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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***Write some in Colt's point of view. I know you don't think your good at a guys view but you gotta write from a guys view to get better***

*Two days later*

Colt woke up in the nursery again, Abby on his lap and the other tow fast asleep in their beds. He looked at the clock, it was ten already.

"I brought breakfast daddy." Trent said slowly walking in with a bowl of cereal that was was dripping. He'd probably spilled most of it on the way up.

Colt quickly put Abby in her crib and grabbed the bowl.

"Thanks buddy, I couldn't do this without you." He smiled.

"I made a mess." Trent frowned looking down.

"DOesn't matter, your helping as best you can." Colt smiled back at him. It was a tired smile, he needed Journey, but she wouldn't wake up.
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**are they at home or at the hospital???**
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**Home**
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Oh, ok thanks lol**

He couldn't believe what was happening. How and the hell was he suppose to get through the week without her? Last night all of the babies, except Trent started crying. Colt had no idea, having one baby was one thing but having three was another. He was starting to compare the babis to drunk people, you didn't know what they wanted, they throw up, they also get very emotional, and you'll regret it if they do something by themselves.

"Journey wake up." he whispered.

Journey's eye lid fluttered, she felt like a veggie, she couldn't move and her body was completely useless.
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Colt sighed when he saw a little movement in Journey's face. The nurse that had come home with her was standing there.

"That's good." She smiled.

"I know. I wish she'd wake up. I need her help." He sighed.

"I'll stay over in the extra room and help you with the babies." The nurse smiled. IT was an elderly lady who the little babies loved.
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"Thank you." he said, smiling, although it was painful seeing her just laying there. She didn't look peaceful, and knowing Journey she was probably fighting with all her might.

"Well, I love them, their the cutest little ones, I have ever seen." she said, truthfully.

He nodded. Why won't she wake up???
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"Daddy, their awake!" Trent said walking in. Colt nodded and got up.

"BEtter go feed them again." He said getting up and walking ot where the babies were and then feeding htem one at a time, burping them, and thens etting them in the swings.
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'Journey!!! Wake up!!!!' he thought, one of his dauthers, it was hard to tell which one she was, threw up all over his shirt. Then she kept crying. Finally a large burp escaped her throat.

Colt laughed. "Your starting to act like your mother." he said, and smiled.

He could have swore the baby smiled.
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**One daughter has black hair the other red**

Colt cleand up the throw up and then smiled down at the little red head. "Abby, that's right." He smiled. "I'm so tired I can't even remember you names."

"YOu need sleep then. Give her here. We're taking over." His mom said wlaking in.

"I can take care of my own kids." He replied holding Abby close.

"We know, but you need a break. You've been going none stop, plus worrying about Journey, go spend time with her, and sleep." His mom grabbed Abby gently and shooed him out of the room
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He nodded, finally realizing there wasn't more that he could possibly do fo rthe kids. He went into the room where Journey was laying straight, and her hands were by her side. She looked horrible. He layed next to her and wwhispered in her ear.

"Please wake up." he whispered, then he kissed her forehead. "Our babies are beautiful." he said taking her hand.

Journey felt one tear leak from the corner of her eye, she wanted to wake up too.
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Colt wiped the tear off her face. "I know you can hear me." He whispered softly. "Abby's got the reddest hair I've ever seen. All of their eyes are blue, but the doc says they'll change to their normal color soon enough. I sayAbby's will be green. Then Jamison's hair is blond. I say his eyes stay blue. Then sweet little Lilly, she's got the blackest hair. I think her eyes will be like yours, but I"m not sure."
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