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Primal Oblivion

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Wait for me!!

Name: Zire

Age: Unknown

Race: Wraith/Vampire

Location: Aetha

Appearance: Normal - http://samanprox.deviantart.com/art/Evil-79871816
Physical - http://ngart.deviantart.com/art/Red-Cloak-70937287 (With a normal head ^^)

History: Recently appointed to be an adviser to the Queen of Aetha. Appointed for his power and knowledge of the other races, and admirer of Erach, whom he treats equal to a king.


Name: Ahihud

Age: Looks 20 (Unknown)

Race: Djinn

Location:Vulca

Apperance: http://andyparkart.deviantart.com/art/G ... 2-63274510

History: One of the only trusted friends of the king of Djinn. Decades ago he pledged my life to the Djinn empire as a repayment to save his life from the punishment the last King had for him. Therefore from that day on he had to be the faithful adviser to the Djinn king and queen until the Djinn race itself collapsed. He spends most of his time helping and journeying with his majesty when King Liamades goes on his famous hunts and battles.


**Is this okay with you, guys?**
Last edited by Firestalker on Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:30 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Name: Skye

Age: has no age

Race: Guardian of the gate, no race she is spirt

Location: Obilvion

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History: She has no history

Other: up for love

"Welcome to Oblivion Akiyama" said Skye as she pushed her hair back "What gate would you like to go through?"
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Okay here i go.

Zire

The castle was certainly deserted now. All the Queens subjects had gone and so had the rest of the palace except me, the Queen and his most faithful adviser Erach.

"Your highness we should get going" I said after several moments of silence.

"Yes, Its time for the banquet" repeated Erach.

The Queen said nothing at first then he looked at me and Erach.

"Please go, i shall come afterward" Said the Queen.

I looked at Erach who nodded. I knew that Erach was still going to be with the Queen so i shook my head and replied "Your highness, we will stay here."


Ahihud

"What now Liamades?" I asked as i followed him to the throne room.

I was one of the only people who could call the king by his name.

"Now we wait," Replied the king seating himself on his magnificent throne.


(Hope thats okay guys?)
Last edited by Firestalker on Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:54 am, edited 1 time in total.
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* we need a wraith king, in wraith lands the queen is most powerful*
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*In that case, should we make Erach and Zire advisors to the queen?*
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Yeah we could do it that way, Although then me and you, Billy will have to edit our character descriptions and i will have to edit my post.
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*Is it possible I could have another queen, because I really want another character?*
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Seleneforeverdream

yeah you can have a queen in one of the other portals as long as nobody else has toke it.

Billy and Firestalker

Why dont one of you make the king, just remember he has to be in love with the queen. If you need a picture, look at the one of the queen and you could say the bloke is him.
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Perhaps Erach could be advisor to the queen and Zire to the king. I was just thinking about it tonight and it seemed best that each should only have one major advisor. As for making the king, I'm not really capable of maintaining more than two characters in a single storybook, so if you're up for that, Firestalker? Or maybe someone else could.
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So does that mean i have to change my post yet again? -.- If you read it i had to change all the 'king' parts to 'Queen' Oh well I'm fine if you are.

Three characters in one storybook??

I'm having enough things to do with just two. No way.
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Name: Sepia Damien

Age: 25

Race: Djinn

Location: Volca

Apperance: http://bitchinblack.deviantart.com/art/BLACK-MAGIC-WOMAN-73954652 (normal form)
http://StinaBG.deviantart.com/art/Ice-Queen-85448445

History: She is queen to King Liamades. They fell in love while battling side by side.

Other: Kills like her husband, with no mercy.
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Hi, is it okay if I join?

Name: Sian

Age: 19 (ish)

Race: Human

Location: Earth

Apperance: Brown hair; loosely tied with a ribbon with a long fringe. Blue eyes, cold and she tends to stare quite a lot without realising. Stick thin (slightly unhealthy looking) but stronger than she looks. She wears combat trousers and a t-shirt with an old waistcoat. She wears non-matching fingerless gloves.

History: Is adopted so she doesn't know her exact age. Her foster parents taught her magic but she hates to use it. Her foster mother died when she was 17 and her father dies shortly afterwards. Now she is looking for a way off the earth.

Other: Up for love.

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hey i would like to join!!

Name: Eirda Elizabeth morkin

Age: 13

Race: Vampire/Wraith

Location: Aetha

Appearance: http://api.ning.com/files/UJTlpSOMH07sX ... ampire.jpg

History: Is a young girl loves blood,parents dead(she killed them without knowing)

Other: She is the queen of aetha




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I think I need to drop out... I'm busy, and have another storybook to post in, plus running "Blue Guardians." Sorry.




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well now we have a queen. So lets continue. Plot is -

We (Zire and Erach) are the advisers of the queen. but when needed we advise the king too although he does not handle most of the political problems, which fall into the hands of her majesty. Hmm Hows that?? Everyone okay with it? :roll: :roll:
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