Can you review this for me?
post488028.html I have no clue really what genre it belongs to. It's kinda romance fiction but it's not romance fiction. Yay for confusing! Feel free to be as harsh as you can be! Harsh critiques are usually better than the polite, non-offending ones. =] Hope you enjoy it!
It's posted in other fiction. It's fine if you don't do it, though.
I just want feedback, like how it was and stuff. If you can, please try and concentrate more on the writing style rather than nit picks.
So, this is the first story that I've posted. I've gotton a few wonderful reviews, but I'd like a bit more feedback. I'm not sure whether to continue this into something longer, or keep it as a stand-alone short story.
And you welcomed me so wonderfully, so I thought I'd turn to your Unicorn Highness.
Title: Shine Bright, Little Baby
Genre: Lyric Poetry
A poem for my brand-new baby cousin! (New babies are so exciting, and they don't even do anything!) ^_^
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*anti-pop
...Bitter cold, it grows changing holds cynicism the new norm... -Libretto
