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*singerofthenight* wrote:okay i'm lost...this is too confuseing, i have to drop out. *ekk*


Sorry, guys, but I'm going to have to as well :(

Keep Tobias' character or not, I don't care. I can tell this definitely is not going to flow well =[

Good luck, I guess.




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I think I'm going to have to drop as well, Jessica isn't that big of a character, and Esme isn't either. Sorry. Don't hate me. *runs away*
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*Whoever plays Edward, I strongly suggest reading Midnight Sun. :D http://www.stepheniemeyer.com/pdf/midnightsun_partialdraft3.pdf*
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**Well thanks to the people that have stayed in, Thanks very much! We have the best writers staying in. we can easily have there characters in the background.**

Ayumi would you post the way that scene sould be and then Tncowgirl just play as your characters. Thanks .:Echelon:.
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***See, though? This is the problem with writing a storybook on a movie/book. Some people go with the book; others go with the movie. And, I'm sorry, Echelon, but your writing is extremely choppy. You skip around too much, using too much dialogue and not enough detail. Sorry, again, if I seem harsh.

But here we go!***



Edward Cullen

I thought I would be safe in Biology. I thought I would get away from her, sparing me the torture of fighting my instincts.

I was so wrong.

I smelled her before I saw her, that suffocatingly sweet scent that woke everything carnal in me. I wanted to taste her blood, I needed her blood...Such a delicacy...

Stay cool, Edward. Stay cool. Calm down. If you don't talk, you don't breath. That's it; just don't say a word.

And then there she was, asking the teacher where she could sit. Damn... Right by me. The only seat left in the classroom. Was it just me, or was everything happening in her favor? First her scent, then her natural beauty, and now such close proximity...

I pushed the work toward her, letting her take over the class assignment. I would just have to bear it, to ignore it as best as I could, and get out as fast as I possibly could when I got the chance.

Not a word, Edward. Not a word.

I could not ignore, however, the static I got when I tried to see her thoughts. But that I would have to discuss with the family. Later.
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** sorry :( **

Bella

I sat there looking at our work then looked at Edward. He held his hand over his mouth and nose as if he had smelt something bad. I pulled my top up yo my face.

Do I smell, if not why is he looking at me like that

I felt self obsessed with the fact that he must of smelt something bad off me. If it was me. I couldn't help but think it was. I turned to him looking into his beautiful eyes. They had changed

His eyes, His eyes were brown not black

I looked back down at the table. I wanted to say something to him, find out what was his problem. But something stopped me. Yet i couldn't stop looking at him.
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I used my peripherals to look at the desk beside me. Edward looked at Bella like she had stabbed his favorite toy. He looked madder than hell. i chuckled to myself and looked forward, knowing there was nothing to worry about. Bella was mine.
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**OK, A. I have read midnight sun and wish it wasn't available to read until seh published it which she isn't doing any more. :'(. B. The book is better. C. I can't post until I get home later. just letting you know Why i haven;t posted yet.**
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Edward Cullen

Five more minutes. Then it would be over. I could get away from the torture, from the temptation. God, it was hard to resist that urge, the urge to taste her.

Holding my breath was helping, though. Thank God.

Four...three...two...one...

I was up seconds before the bell rang, storming out and stalking hastily away. I passed Alice in the hallway, brushing brusquely past her. I had to get away, to get calm and control.

But first...a stop by the office.
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** I forgot the whole of the beginning, when they went to dogde ball and lunch*

As soon as the bell went he ran out the room. Did he really have to get away from me so fast. Was there something so wrong with me that he had to rush. I followed him as I would comfornt him but he walked into the office. As I walked into he walked to the desk.

"Come on there has to be something else open" He said to the woman behind the desk,

"Im sorry Edward your have to stay in biology" She replied as she looked at him in dispear,

"I'll just have to stick it through" He whispered angerly as he walked away and pushed past me.

I felt angery and upset. How could he do that. Make me feel like rubbish, like it was all my fault.
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Edward

I avoided everyone's eyes, ignored everyone I passed. All that mattered was getting out of the building, getting to the parking lot, and getting out of here. Getting away from her.

Alice approached me in the lot as I got to the car. "Wait! Edward!"

I paused long enough to hear her out. A few minutes with my "sister" couldn't hurt...

"What happened? You look mad as a hornet."

"It-it's nothing. Just...thirst. That's all."

Yeah, right.

"Keep your thoughts to yourself." I got in the car and slammed the door before she could protest. I cranked it up, put it in gear, and sped off before I lost it. Before I lost my control, myself. I had to get away, to calm down and quench my thirst.

I didn't even go home. I headed directly for the woods.
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Alice watched him leave and she crossed her arms. Jasper walked over and she leaned against him. She felt him calm her nerves and she smiled.

"He'll be fine, hunt for a while, be gone for a good while, but he'll be fine." She smiled up at him.

"I know, he was really mad." Jasper replied wiht a smile.

"Your telling me. Snapping like none other." She looked towards the new girl. "Should I look into her future?"

"Won't hurt anything, she seems to have gotten Edward riled up, so maybe it would be a good idea." He replied. She closed her eyes leaning against him and searched her future. She smiled when she opened her eyes. "That's a good smile?"

"VERY!" She smiled. "We're going to be best of friends." She smiled at him.

"You and the human?" he asked with a laugh.

"Yes, me and the human." She smiled
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*sorry its really short and chopping but im kind of in a rush as its xmas eve her in england*

I leaned against my car with a book in my hands. 'Vampires vs Werewolfs' it was called. Very interesting. I closed the book and pushed in my bag. I was too confornt Edward tomorrow, hoping that he would turn up. I turned around and pulled my body into my truck.

At home me and dad went to the same diner watched the same thing on tv as always. That night was the first night I dreamt about Edward Cullen.
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***Ok, Ech, I love Twilight, but the way the movie does it makes it REALLY rushed. Don't follow the movie by the dot, PLEASE, it'll ruin it all. ***
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**well what excially am I meant to do as i've not read the books? If it makes it easier you or ayumi can take my character**
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!



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